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The Night and the Fae
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Something was wrong in the air. It had a sour undertone, like rot had rooted its way deep into every tree. Momo almost thought it was because of a corpse in the school. Had one of the supernaturals she didn’t know about fed on someone and left them there to die? She inhaled deeper and nearly cringed. No, definitely not a dead body. Even so, whatever it was, it set her on edge. 

When Dahyun walked in, she watched her, trying not to look too obvious. She found nothing out of the ordinary. If something was wrong, she was pretty sure it would show on Dahyun’s face. The girl couldn’t hide it when she was uncomfortable. Yet the scent was coming from her.

“Tired?” Dahyun asked, a small smile appearing on her face. The pungent scent disappeared completely. 

“Yep,” Chaeyoung threw her head back, “this has already been the worst day. Only Biology was okay, right Dahyun-ah?”

The scent came back as Dahyun’s eyebrows rose, her lips parted in a small ‘o’. Momo wrinkled her nose.  “Right. I’m sorry to hear about the rest.” 

“Don’t be,” the other girl rolled her eyes, “something must’ve happened in the teachers lounge for every one of them to be extra difficult. Mr. Jin made me repeat an equation just because he didn’t believe I solved it so fast.” 

“Plus,” Momo said, “Mr. Song didn’t believe me when I said the dates for the Meiji government takeover. Of all the people to doubt.” She sat back with a slump. Sometimes there were days like that. When almost no one could stand each other. She just hadn’t expected it to be so soon in the year. 

Dahyun sat down and the air cleared completely. The knot in Momo’s stomach lessened immediately. She leaned against the table in front of them, finally relaxing her shoulders. How was Dahyun doing this? Clearly she didn't have complete control over it.

“Changed your hair again?” It was grey. Momo hadn’t thought that could look good on a person, but she pulled it off. 

“Yes,” another small smile, “I didn’t like the white.” She reached up to touch it, her eyes far away. Momo’s own eyes caught on her hand. A bandage was wrapped around the palm. Maybe that was why the smell was different. She was injured. Questions flooded her mind about how. She also made a note about that information. Dahyun didn’t heal like a vampire did, or even a werewolf, where one cut could heal in less than a minute. Was she half human?

Chaeyoung must have seen it too. “How’d that happen?” As strange as it was, the girl’s scent wasn’t triggering when it came to their thirst. 

“This?” She glanced at her hand before putting it down. Her scent adopted the strange edge to it again. “Cooking accident.” She looked down at her hands. “Dumb mistake.” A small chuckle. The air cleared of the foul scent again.

She was too emotive. Even when she started speaking again to Chaeyoung yesterday, Momo hadn’t seen her act like this. Her features transformed into something much warmer when she smiled. The expression was always slow to come, though, as if her own muscles were hesitant to smile.

Before she could ask Dahyun if she was okay, the teacher came in. She went to her spot. As class went by, she wasn’t really paying any attention to the talk on nuclear reactions. She could catch up. Instead, she watched as Dahyun took her notes. She was writing with the hand that hadn’t been burned, but from where Momo sat, she saw that the movements were hesitant. Then she stopped taking notes. 

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Sana was relieved that their Chemistry teacher was in a good mood. The entire day, classes involved spontaneous questions and intense scrutiny, as if every single teacher had had a bad day. And then there was that smell.

When Dahyun came in, she was smiling. A positive turn of events in itself. Even though her skin had taken on a grey tinge. 

“Ready for the day to end?” she asked as she sat down. 

“Definitely. I hope this class will be chill.” Sana tried not to look at her hands. The girls had already told her and she didn’t want to be caught looking at the girl too closely. She’d try her best to avoid another ear fiasco. 

Dahyun nodded. “I’m sure it will be.” Then her brow twitched, as though she was in pain. 

The teacher stood up, smiling broadly. “You guys in the mood to do some acid-base reactions?”

Everyone nodded. Mrs. Park pulled up a list of what they needed to get. 

“I’ll get it,” she said as she stood up. 

Dahyun paused in mid stance. “You don’t need to do that.” Something about her expression made Sana feel like conceding immediately. 

“It’s a tray of glass. I’ll manage.” She shot her a smile. Then she turned away, not wanting to see that frown for longer than she needed to. 

When she came back, Dahyun was staring out the window, her eyes filled with an intensity Sana had never seen in them before. There were dark shadows under her eyes,

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The ending is here! Your support had me writing a lot of it in one go and I've never written so much all in one go. Thanks so much for reading this story and being patient enough to keep up with it!

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A_B_J_Ch #1
Chapter 43: A gem, truly! The universe is very well detailed, the characters are consistent, deep and naturally progressing within the story. This will definitely make it to my list of stories to read again and again.
I especially appreciate the difference between the nations. And how those differences are addressed.
I am curious to what is the base for the fae language. I may try to compare it to some of the human or fictional languages to quench my curiosity.
My only confusion lays with what happened to Dahyun's family. Maybe I missed it somewhere in the text. But I did not catch why they would not be able to make it to the "court" scene at the end.
But it is a minor detail, which may or may not be explained in my second read-through :)
Pallas
#2
Chapter 43: I finally end this story. Wow, that was a journey, a long one.
I have so much to praise about the writing and development but I can't put it on the right words.
Just know that you make a excellent job here, author-nim. Even though I came only for the "saidahmo" tag (lol) I stay for the universe that is showing here.
I would love to read more about TWICE in that universe, such as Dahyun finally having some happiness after all the pain she came through. But if we don't have more of this world, it's ok. This fanfic worth every secon I spend reading.

Again, thank you so much for writing this, author-nim. Stay healthy!💜
So_Dry
#3
Chapter 43: Hi! I am not sure if I ever left comments here before, but now I feel more at ease doing so. It took me three times to read the story fully to grasp what I needed. The first time I was going through it, confusion was dominating, I had a great deal of questions circulating in my head. It was hard to grasp the flow of the events and so I was struggling to put the pieces together. Characters conversation sometimes were bundled and I misplaced them many times. It brought more disappointment throughout my reading journey. But I kept going at it despite those feelings I had.

What attracted me in the story was the new concept of fantasy you have introduced, though initially when I came it was for Dahyun main rule in it, but I grew more interest and anticipation for her struggle/dilemma when it came to acting on emotions. It was ongoing at the time, and when I finally read the end, I felt more lacking and dissatisfaction surged mostly.



I took a good break until I decided to come again and revisit the story. This second attempt filled so many holes I initially had in me. The grasp on the reasons that lead to such events were much clearer and I had finally connected the dots to form a good flow of events. And even though I had some questions answered, there was a portion that was left scattered and perhaps I was hesitant to search through it. The emotional part of the story was a challenge on itself, but it's needed to be grasped and understood. A part of me ignored the fact I couldn't translate those emotions been discussed throughout the chapters, and when I reached the end again. I still felt a great deal of discomfort as I knew the emotional part is what's the story is mostly made of. I was convincing myself that it wasn't needed to have full clarity on and I would just be okay without it.



It took me a long while until I decided to come back. I was determined to not miss anything this time and make sure to make effort on the emotional part specifically while reading. I still carried a desire to skim through it, but I was able to stop myself from doing so. And to do that, I created a note dedicated to colors and their correlations to the emotional world. Even included a scent list. The results were shocking, though it shouldn't have been because I knew how that contributed to my confusions. I came to appreciate the story even more after this. You had me thinking and immersing myself on how emotions actually worked. Throughout my break time between chapters, I sat down and thought through all decisions that been made, specifically one's by Dahyun. It had me think that I could be just as lacking as her, specially when it came to the reactions she witnesses based on emotions felt in certain events for certain people. Another part of me couldn't help but see it fit so well to be lacking. As if it carries much simpler answers than those that carries more questions in it then resolution. But the complications been presented showed how being in such state is wrong in itself, specially if you knew how the others actually felt and will feel depending your responds.

The wording in the story was nothing I ever read in fictions but it made sense for it to be that way. Can you believe that your work has built a certain amount of calm within me? Not that I never had it, but this gave me more reasons to reconsider and backtrack my emotional responds. So many topics been discussed here and emotions been fully explored through the dialogues. It's been a worthy journey that I would gladly go down through it again, and I will.



I would like to thank you for what you have gave us and introduced. It was a much appreciated knowledge to imagine and feel through those characters. Being able to present it alone is enough to have me carry so much respect for you. While indeed some of us comes for the pairing, but mostly I get more invested when it touches real life struggles. Yours was one to open many eyes on how really emotions works and what kind of questions and consequences it carries and arises. For that, you have my deep gratitude!
Selina1715
#4
Chapter 2: Oh? Is someone behind Dubu?
Shade4149 #5
Chapter 43: So good loved every second
Shade4149 #6
Chapter 30: This is so good I was so happy to see the completed version here when I was waiting on Ao3
dkdldb #7
Chapter 43: I don't usually read fantasy stories, but this was absolutely amazing. Really loved the plot flow and portrayal of characters in this!
Van1212 #8
Author did you see Dahyun's MBTI test result ? It matches so well with the way you decided to portrait her in this story, it is amazing.
Btopinkforever
#9
Chapter 43: I got to admit at first I was here for Saidahmo but as the story progressed my mind started to come here for the plot and writing. This story was like something I needed in my life. I don’t know why but it was. So thank you so much for writing this. I can go on forever talking about this book but I will keep you from my emotions haha Anyways I personally love how you ended this because it’s not a perfect ending for them but it’s the most realistic ending I’ve seen. Meaning the characters had their ups and downs and they still had problems but like in real life they figured some out but some will still take time. Wow I at expressing myself and writing haha I’m glad you left the chapter like this!
Btopinkforever
#10
Chapter 42: Surprisingly I get where Dahyun is getting at and if she did kill Rila and Yrest then that would’ve probably been the ending point for her. So I’m glad she didn’t do anything.