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italics - mindlinking/thoughts

Underlined - Japanese

Normal - Korean & english


Hana's first few days of school consisted of Jungkook blantly staring her down whenever he saw her, so boldly that all the students noticed and perferred to stay away from her all except for one... Lucas, who seemed to become good friends with Hana.. He like the others, noticed the usually detached male become interested in her...that caused him to become somewhat protective over his new found friend. 

Today was friday, the last day of the first week and Hana walks into her phys ed class almost instantly feeling the oh-so familar chilling stare pierce through her and quickly waves goodbye to lucas, whos standing at the door. She eventually finds a empty seat on the far right of the unnerving male. While making her way over to the empty spot she stops and decides to be the kind person she is and greet Jungkook with a smile and hopefully get on speaking terms with him....or at least try to convince him not to hate her....

As she turns to the door to see lucas still standing there with a worried expression, she gives him a reassuring thumbs up before walking towards Jungkook and bowing at him, noticing his slightly widened eyes she takes the element of surprise and greets him,

"Good morning Jungkook-ssi, i hope im not intruding but i just wanted to keep you company because you seem a bit lonely..."

His posture stiffens, "Oops i didnt mean it in a bad way, its just that ive notice how isolated you are during class and i dont want you to feel so segregated. I can also occasionally sense peoples emotions, only strong emotions though...And i emotionally feel what you feel during those times, sometimes your emotions can be so overwhelmingly intense and i cant help but want to help take the load off you, but for now i can only offer my genuine support to you." she explains hesitantly with teary eyes..

He slumps his head and looks at the floor, holding back tears in relief as someone is finally reaching out to him. Someone who truely understands. Someone who will help bare this heavy load that has been anchoring him to his past. "Why, i know i havent been exactly welcoming to you...so why?"

"Because it is not in my nature to overlook and ignore someone who is hurting wether its physically or mentally. I want to help you open up and i hope that we can possibly be friends?" She ends with an unsure tone, scared that he'll reject her proposal.

His expression softens and he replies in a whisper, "Yeah...id like that."

Hana nods her head and gives him an eye smile before occupiying the seat next to him. Quiet chatter fills the class as they all study, air of comforting silence surrounded Jungkook and Hana, making them both feel relaxed in each others presence.

All of a sudden he speaks up, "I havent had anyone to ever truely understand how i feel, my past was definitely not a bright one and to top it off im classed as a hopeless unknown...i just cant help feeling all these horrible emotions sometimes...im sorry if it burdens you, since you feel my emotions as well."

"Its good that im here then huh, i empathize with you and whenever you feel a certain way...ill always be there to take the load off you~ Dont you worry about me, i can bare it. Dont think of yourself or your emotions as a burden...you need to know that its normal to feel bad sometimes." She explains comfortingly,

Then hana adds, "Oh and i understand you more than you think.."

"Your too kind...its a great quality to have but dont you worry about being taken advantage of?"

"Yes and no....I believe that i should help someone if i am able to, no matter who they are...everyone deserves to have someone on their side and if they havent done anything wrong then why shouldnt i be kind? If i can make someones day by showing them kindness then why shouldnt i? even one smile can make someones day ya know? Sometimes im just bound to get hurt because of how easily i care about people, and it but it just happens...im not going to stop being the way i am just because i could get hurt." She explains, and during her speech Jungkooks eyes stay wide with admiration, 

"Why couldnt i have met you earlier? your an angel in disguise...but dont get yourself hurt just for others, please." 

"Hahaha i dont think so~ and im not making any problems, when picking up broken pieces sometimes you get cut, but its worth it."

"Theres no way to convince you huh?" he frowns,

"Sorry, no... but ill take your words into consideration, yea?" she comprimises.

"Okay... its better than nothing...--" They continue chatting along gaining looks and whispers from everyone looking their way.


Random kid P.O.V

"He doesnt even look at anyone without glaring and he's smiling and talking to her within a week?!"

"I know! She mustve done something...maybe their a couple...i mean he could do better but i guess they'd look cute?" A girl replies,

"Um no... heres a thought, maybe she is just friends with him huh? why does everthing have to end in relationships?" Girl #2 argues.

"Well sorry mrs 'i dont have a boyfriend so others shouldnt as well' but have you ever seen him talk to anyone other than Jimin-ssi and V-ssi? No and look at how close they are!" Girl#3 answers

"yeah and i used to go to highschool with him and he never talked to anyone at all...One time he saw someone get bullied...like badly bullied and he broke the bullies nose, ever since then people love him but he's too intimidating and scary for them to even try to talk to him. Plus he glares at everyone...even Hana when she first came here... but i guess shes just very friendly, VERY FRIENDLY especially if shes talking to him. Its good though, i hope she gets him out of his shell so he actually talks in class." the original boy says,

"Still think theyre dating, or they will date...I bet $30 theyll date by the end of the semester." Girl #3 bets,

"$30 UH UH TOO MUCH MONEY....im a college student come on i cant afford to waste precious money" Says the boy

"I bet that they wont, he'll get sick of her...she seems annoying" Girl #1 complains

they wont, cause theyre FRIENDS jeez" Girl#2 bets


 

 

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tvxq10
#1
Chapter 10: new reader and subscriber here~!!
i'm loving this story~ Curious how hana and the boy's story will turn out~
pleas update soon author-nim~ ^_^
kris_giggles #2
Chapter 9: YES THANK FOR THE UPDATE♡♡♡♡♡
CezzaC #3
Chapter 9: Yessss some empathy for poor jungkook, this is what I'm here for~~~ Also, the random kids pov section cracked me up, I haven't seen that before where the section is LITERALLY labeled that, it's seriously funny and helps break up the (cute) drama from the rest of the chapter xxx keep it up!
atyaf12 #4
Chapter 8: Oh I love it . I can’t for the next update I have been looking for this tune of story for ages and I finally found it .lol even tho I am not the type for reverse Harem but I am too I to this story to care about it. I loved your style of writing and chasing the POV I always find it really help and entertaining to see everyone’s POV and thoughts. Keep the good work up ^^ I am sure it going to become a poplaur story soon enough.
kris_giggles #5
Chapter 5: THIS STORY IS SO CUTEEEEEEEEEEE. IVE BEEN TRYING TO TOOK FOR A STORY LIKE THIS
CezzaC #6
Chapter 5: Cuuttteeeeeeee!
And Jin is a prince? And Hana is an angel/related to one?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!!???!???!???! I love it~~
Your writing style really does match whatever you're writing, with Jin's POV the word choice was slightly more complex and mature than with the innocent and naive Hana, but everything still flowed really easily xx
Keep it up
Astriana #7
Chapter 5: Aw, adorable.
Yuki-Nyx #8
Chapter 4: The story felt just right!
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Love you :) Keep Writing!!!
Sassy--Sammy
#9
Chapter 4: This is quite an amazing concept and story so far, I'm really digging it. :)