Reviewed by milkyexoshinee

Title: (3/5)

It's a long title and didn't catch my attention,but it did match the story though.

Foreword/Description: (10/10)

Woah...Your foreword makes me curious!

It's absolutely beautiful words.I love your foreword!

Especially it's a true events.I always love a true story because it makes the story more real.

Appearance: (4/5)

Your poster is not bad actually.But at first,I thought your story was angst because your poster was dark.

Your background also not bad.It match your poster.

Your writing also neatly and legible.Good job!

Plot: (14/15)

The plot was predictable,like I know that Yoseob will be with Harin,but you make some twist in here,that makes the reader enjoys to read your story.

Originality: (12/15)

Your story was a bit original because I rarely see a fic that a smile can changed everything though.For the rest,there's many fics like A who loves C,broke up and then A fell in love with B.

Grammar and Spelling: (17/20)

Me?I didn't good at grammar actually.But your grammar was AMAZING.I can see that you're very experienced in make fics,and you're very detailed in make it.If you ask another reviewer,I swear that they will praised your grammar.Just I only see one/two mistake in one chapter.

Characterization: (9/10)

I love how you describe the character.Harin felt heart broken with Junhyung,but then she fallen in love with Yoseob.Yoseob then slowly fallen in love with Harin too.You did a good job here.

Flow: (10/10)

The flow was very good,it's not too fast but not too slow.

Overall Enjoyment: (8/10)

The truth is I didn't like YouxIdol fics,but I love it though.My bias was also Yoseob,that makes me like your story more.

Total Score: 87/100

milkyexoshinee's Note:I envious your writing skills.We're Indonesian,but I'm not good at grammar,while you're a queen in it LOL.Keep your good job!:)) And sorry for the short reviews.


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Thank you for the review!
I still have a lot to work on though. :D

Credit goes to :: EXOTIC GROUNDS ::