Loss of Order

Description

In a realm ruled by a powerful, tyranical king who holds dominion over the elements, will six fledgling Elementalists and one strong willed Neutralizer be enough to end his chaotic reign?  Or will the king who would call himself a god destroy them before they even have a chance?  Join the descendants of the first born Elementalists as they come into their own to challenge the unjust rule of one who will have everything to himself or leave nothing at all.

Foreword

                Long ago, the power of the elements was given by the gods to six individuals to use as they needed and to help maintain the order of balance within their world.  A seventh figure was given the ability to neutralize their power in order to keep them from destroying themselves.  In their time, they were able to accomplish much good and they helped the people to move forward in civilization and technology.  The seven persons though, were not immortal and after a time, they disappeared from the course of history.

                Years passed by and life carried on much as it always had.  Occasionally, another would rise who carried the power of a single element but without the balance of the others, and especially the neutralizer, each new elementalist was consumed by the power they wielded.  History showed that some burned out quickly, destroying themselves inadvertently, while others rose to power, often taking the form of tyrants who reigned fiercely.  Their fall was no less destructive, consumed by the power they sought to control with no thought of the consequences.

                 Now, in the year 746 AE (After the Elementalists) Enrhyll Larath has risen with the combined strength of all six elements and a neutralizer at his side with the intent to subjugate the world under his rule.  Claiming the title of a god, he has gathered an army run by fear; his conquest has been unmatched and unrivaled with none strong enough to match him.  In his campaign to bring the continent of Frinleth under his influence, his presence has spanned nearly the entirety of the land and he will stop at nothing to achieve his goal of world domination.  The people are given but two choices: acknowledge Enrhyll as their god and accept his leadership or die.

 

                In the North easternmost reaches of Frinleth, secluded from the daily machinations of the world, exists a quiet retreat where a powerful secret has been guarded fiercely for generations.  Located in the farthest climes of the distant mountains, the bodies of the original Elementalists rest, preserved in ornate sarcophagi.  Housed within the decaying husks of the people that once lived, their spirits and the power they wielded remain dormant, waiting until the need should come again for their strength.

                To that end, the monks of the Northsage Monastery receive, train, and keep hidden the first born descendants of the Elementalists until such time that they are called upon to act once more.   For Leeteuk, Siwon, Eunhyuk, Kyuhyun, Kharin, and Eleanara, the choice was never theirs to make, so the only life they know is the cloistered existence inside the monastery.  For the Neutralizer Summer Silverberg, her role was known from the moment of her birth.  Experiencing a normal life for but a short time, she too has shared the solitary isolation with the potential Elementalists, knowing only that she bore a power that may never be needed during her lifetime.

                Inside their sheltered world, they have no idea of the war that is quickly approaching; the war they will have to fight in, whether they are ready for it or not.

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***I want to give credit and thanks to SuperJuniorfan13 for the wallpaper image!  Thank you!***

05/20/13  -  The updated poster belongs to lubiks-cube at idiosyncracy >> a poster request shop.  Thank you very much!

Reviewed by s3xyangel at Exotic Dreamers.  ~  'Plot was interesting and captured me.'

 

Submitted to The New Library of recommendation fics.

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haaitje
#1
Thanks for another epic adventure tale! Love your stories xxx
Ktikat1991
#2
Chapter 74: Hehehe. Commenting here so you know what I'm about to do. Rereading this on your FF.net >:)
caroline01
#3
wow... great story and you are an amazing author :D
pinkelephant444
#4
OH MY GOSH I MISS THIS SO MUCH XDDDDD I'm just scrolling around in my subscriptions, and i stumble across this and my heart sinks. it's sad knowing that i can't read more updates. It's hard to daydream about this story in school when it ended. No more roaming in caves, or fighting snow wolves. Though everything comes to an end, and this ending was great :) This reminds me of this insurance commercial where this guy transferred insurance companies, and he's on the phone with the old one crying, "I MISS YOU!"
ann_babo #5
:))
Can't hide my smile knowing that the story finally reaches its end. Kinda sad it's over, indeed. But, there is always an end and it's always great to read a story till its very end.
The ending was great! yeah, they do really deserve time to heal their mental and have fun! :)
Anyway, thanKyu sooooooooo much for keeping struggling on your tough time to finish this story beautifully. This story is awesome, and it's because you are awesome. Keep doing your best, and, again, THANKYU! ^^
kaicho #6
I kinda feel like I felt when Harry Potter Book 7 was out....
sad and happy at the same time. But mostly, I am very excited about what creation you will produce next ^^
Such a grand ending for a grand story. I remember reading this story when it was already almost half way if I am not mistaken. I hooked up since the foreword and subscribe then ended up reading all the chapters available back then in few good hours.
Although this story has come to an end, I am very sure that I will keep coming back just to read it :D
Thank you so much for bearing with us Amalya, it feels like we're riding with you on your construct and feel sad that the journey has come to an end. You are such an amazing writer with your creativity like no other *when i write this I stopped for a while and start singing suju's no other lol -weird random moment- :D *
please know that even though this story has end, you have all our support to continue writing, just do your thing and you know that we're supporting you!
Amalya HWAITING!
and I would still call you Your Highness ;) it's only fit that way :D
SHINeeLove425
#7
What an awesome ending to an equally awesome story! You are amazing. (:
pinkelephant444
#8
Oh my god...Oho my god....DX IT FINISHED! I love the ending though :D I remember the geeky kids who used to stay up late and make designs with their elements with Summer killing it, and now look at them. In ballgowns and suits, dancing, I now picture them as 20. xD Our babies grew up. This has been an amazing fanfiction, and I owe all the credit to you. ;W; i almost started crying at the end xD Have a great day, and i can't wait to see the one shots! ;W;
pinkelephant444
#9
Kyuhyunnnie........Wake up );
pinkelephant444
#10
I'M SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SORRY ! i had no time to check your updates or comment, so now i'm going to :D Ugh Enrhyll is so scary and annoying *____*