beautiful. (Give Me-live)

One to Want : Countdown to Escape
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The moment she stepped inside, with wandering eyes full of anxiety behind her rusty pair of glasses that looked like it was never wiped neatly, he could feel it.

 

That she's a beauty.

 

When she introduced herself, it's easy to see all the flaws not even hidden, all waiting to be pointed out. Her crinkled oversized shirt that actually fit her shapeless figure perfectly, her crooked yellowish teeth when she forced a very self conscious smile with no eye contact to the crowd that was not smiling back at all, he could tell without even seeing everyone's reaction, her not-smooth bundle of hair that looks like a lot of random things could be stuck somewhere inside, her stubby legs, her...

 

"I wouldn't date her for even a million."

 

"I wouldn't date her for anything. Look at that whole package of ugliness. Yuck."

 

He would beg to differ. Typical kids don't know beauty when they see one. She's different than any other girl that had stop by at him, trying to get his attention or worse, more. Their faces all look the same and doesn't stand out at all in his eyes.

 

The moment she stepped in, he could see how beautiful she is.

 

He probably had fallen in love at first sight.

 

 

a little late...this was supposed to be yesterday's story...but i cheat a lil n write longer than one round of the song cuz i love the song.

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estherahn
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Chapter 15: Sigh. I have no choice but to spam comments. This was beautiful
estherahn
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Chapter 96: noooooooooooooo what does 95 meannn
estherahn
#3
Chapter 24: Ok i already know my comment will be a little flimsy and sometimes I don't know what to say; I already don't quite know what to say and it wont be everything I want to say,but what I knew how or remembered to say, but i will post my thoughts~ this writing was so shocking and reading it hit my heart so painfully. Subscribed~ I was so curious and had to read even though as you know in life I read only blogs. ohhhh I just realized I do like things that explain feelings and hurting times. Bc I could always read a sad story, but it helps me understand myself and others when I read specific description of one's feelings. Reading this, things like this (which is how i feel reading your blog writings and the voice in those writings... also sometimes youtube descriptions ;) ) makes me feel i am not lonely. i never heard intentionally shinhwa (maybe accidentally when going to a store with korean things ahhaha or some place playing korean music, like if i was in a random person's car and they played korean music back in my childhood) and this song is really beautiful, good and i like the music video also. BUT I ALSO LOVE THE VOICES. Sigh. It was beautiful.