Confessions

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"And I really really like you, heck it might even be love! Even if you hate me after this, know that I had to tell you..." Byulyi's voice quietened. Finding her shoes very interesting all of a sudden, she avoided the lovely brown orbs she could normally stare at for hours. She discreetly wiped her sweaty palms on her favourite pair of white jeans but gasped when she saw the older girl's hand come up to her chin, lifting it upwards so that she was looking at her. "Byul-ah..." The older girl started, and Byulyi closed her eyes, bracing herself for the rejection that she knew would come when she felt something soft on her lips. "Sweet." was the first and only word to enter her mind after she snapped out of her shock. She snapped open her eyes once her mind wrapped itself around what had just happened. In front of her stood a tomato red leader, who was doing what she did, looking at the floor. 

  "Wha..what? Hu..huh?" "Aish... Sometimes this girl is too innocent for her own good..." Yongsun murmured to herself before leaning in for another peck, something she never thought a shy girl like herself would do. But if it was for her Star, she would even shout to the cruel and judgemental world that she liked another girl, specifically her. She then leaned to the rapper's ear and whispered, "I like you too, you babo".  Tears suddenly welled up in the rapper's eyes, and Yongsun instinctively hugged the younger girl, wanting to stop those tears from running down her face in any way possible. The girl just started sobbing, sobbing so hard that she could not catch her breath. Solar watched her back go up and down, from her breathing, feeling helpless. She the rapper's back in small circles, hoping to calm the girl down a little. "Byul-ah, you are hurting me like that," Solar thought to herself...   20 minutes later, The rapper finally calmed down and she pulled back a little, still letting her Sun, you have no idea how happy she was to call her that, hug her. Her Sun looked at her, and said seriously, "Moon Byulyi. You will not get out of here till you tell me why you were crying." "Hmmmmm that doesn't sound all too bad, I might take you up on that offer!" She smiled cheekily at her. "Yah... Come on... Girlfriend," her Sun said, loving how the name rolled of her tongue so smoothly. They somehow managed to decide what they were now, while Byulyi was still crying, pretty much accomplishing the impossible. To say Byulyi became flustered was an understatement, she tumbled out of her Sun's arms, rolled off the couch and landed 'gracefully' on the floor. He
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Hey! I know I haven’t updated this in a long time but I’ve recently started a full update! Not a ADITL but a whole one couple centric One-shot! (Pst it’s not Moonsun)
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Honeyoong93 #1
Chapter 3: Ahhh wheesa mereka emang precious :*
ThatOneBi #2
Chapter 1: Omo~
yongwhee #3
Chapter 26: This is so cuuuuuuute im meltinggggg
Cdival #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know I'm reading this waaaaay after you posted it, but I just wanted to say that I really liked what you talked about..I mean, your note!...all of it, but specially the fourth point...but I liked all that you said... like very, very much!
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 25: Woohoo! Thank you for writing this for Mamamoo's 4th anniversary~ I like the fact that this chapter is about them reminiscing the most memorable past.

Oo wow, I wouldn't have known that Wheein's memory was an actual one if you hadn't mentioned it at the end. (A fail fan here: I haven't finished watching Secret Unnie >.<) Knowing that it's really what Wheein went though, it makes this story more melancholic. She's been through so much these past 4 years (and more). That shade though ahaha: 'This group was her dream group, there was no other group that she could every try being in apart from this one- albeit a better name could've been chosen, but she takes what she can get.' I like how amidst the worries and concerns she had after their debut performances, she still looked at the positive side which kept her going.

I really like how Hwasa's memories is basically of Wheein, but it's inevitable since they spent almost all their lives together. Hwasa's memory is too cute. (Have you watched the Life Bar episode where Wheesa appeared on it? They did say that they probably know each other more than their parents do!) It's nice that Hwasa appreciates the contrasting personalities she and Wheein have. It definitely made their friendship more meaningful.

Byul's memory is just so full of insecurities that it hurts reading it. Another shade there ahaha: 'Yes, for the first time, she was in her own house.' - I choked a little! I love the way you ended Byul's memory with this line: 'They had made a moment she would have wanted to forget, into a moment she knew she had to remember for the rest of her life, and she didn't know how to repay them.' I'm so glad that her members didn't leave her alone to her thoughts and insecurities.

Of course Solar's memory would be linked to her role as the leader. I think in general, throughout all of their memories, no matter how different they are, it all comes back to the main point on how the four of them stuck through everything together. They became each other's supports whether or not they know it. They stepped up to the occasion when they're needed to do so, and seeing how the four of them recognised this fact makes my heart feel warm.

Just two comments on your writing: I felt that the ending was rather abrupt, seeing how there's an introduction paragraph but not an ending one. Also, most of the paragraphs are rather lengthy. The paragraphs could be split to become shorter ones so that it's easier to be read.

Thank you very much for writing this! :)
Pringletip #6
Chapter 9: What the. Noooooo Yongsun-ahhhhh
Pringletip #7
Chapter 3: This is cute <3
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 24: Comments for Teasing: Ugh Byul's such a loser ahahahah but aww I like how heartwarming this story is at the end. That last paragraph is everything! Interesting that we get to see the different reactions of the members. For some reason through their reaction I could feel their love for Byul too, expressed in their own ways. :') I get the feeling Byul is certain of her members' love for her, and so she was comfortable teasing them. :') (Also, I can almost hear Yongsun's "ISANGHAE!" haha!)
Comments for The Sun: I am such a er for imagery and I think you've beautifully brought out the actual sun/Yongsun imagery through Byul's POV. I really like how when the sun is not visible being covered by rain clouds, another sun appears to bring light to Byul's life. Seems like this story isn't complete though! I guess we'll never know what happens between Byul and Yongsun. Interesting how I could hear Byul's turmoil.
Thank you for this update! :)
cjmoo_ #9
Chapter 23: Welcome back! I enjoyed reading both stories.
In Lucky, I really liked seeing how greasy Byul can be at one point, and the next moment she becomes very sincere.
Azegag is too cute and funny xD
cjmoo_ #10
Chapter 23: Nooo :'(
I like how you wrote Byulyi's answer as one whole chunk and making it sound forced. Seemed like she has been feeling that way for a long time :/
Hope the rest supports Hyejin as well, especially if she continues having that image of Byul in her head :/
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