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 "Girls... I will be doing 'We Got Married' with Eric Nam sunbae." Solar said, anxiously looking at her members' faces for their reactions. The two maknaes screamed in excitement, "Eric Nam sunbae?! That gentlemenly sunbae?! Unnie you are so lucky!" Hearing that positive reaction, she turned to the last member, awaiting a similar response. What shocked her was the hurt, devastated expression on the taller girl's face. She saw tears gathering up in her eyes before the taller girl stood up and dashed to their room. "What was that?" The 2 maknaes asked, saying aloud what the leader was thinking in her head.    Tears rolled down her face one by one as she sat down on her bed. She looked over to the door lock to make sure no one could come in. "I'm so stupid to think that I had a chance with her. I'm so stupid to plan to confess to her after she said she had something to say. I'm so stupid to fall in love with her in the first place." These kind of thoughts roamed her mind, torturing her. Not knowing what to do, she laid face-down on her pillow and screamed. Screamed with tears running down her face, staining the pillow. After screaming for a good 3 minutes and losing her voice in the process, she her phone to see her mum's 20 over messages asking if she was alright. She quickly called her mum to see what happened and her mum said "Did she not tell you? She will be going on WGM." This caused the waterworks to start again. "Mum.. *sniff* I'm *sniff* not okay *sniff*. Can *sniff* I come *sniff* home?" She pleaded her mum. Her mum welcomed her back, knowing very well about her crush on the leader. The rapper asked her manager for permission, having so many typos it was hard for the manager to understand. The manager gave it to her straight away, knowing something was amiss. Anyway they had no schedules the next day too. The very next day, she packed up and headed to Bucheon at 5 in the morning while everyone was still sleeping, slipping pass Solar who was fast asleep on the couch after getting locked out of her own room.    The rapper rubbed her eyes yet again for the umpteen time, she gave a big yawn. Crying throughout the night with no sleep was not a good idea. She was in the first train to Bucheon and in fear to miss her stop, have tried every method to not sleep, and not breakdown. She was a public figure now, though still not that well known according to her, and had an image to uphold.    "Mum!" She shouted right as she stepped into the house. It was now 7, and she was sure her mum was already up, the smell of food confirmed that. She heard movement coming from the kitchen and once her beloved mum appeared, she broke down, crying once again. Her mum kneeled down beside her, consoling her. After she calmed down a little, her mum led her to the couch, before demanding to be told what happened.    Back at the dorm, the rest of the girls woke up with an empty room in the dorm. They had
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Hey! I know I haven’t updated this in a long time but I’ve recently started a full update! Not a ADITL but a whole one couple centric One-shot! (Pst it’s not Moonsun)

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Honeyoong93
#1
Chapter 3: Ahhh wheesa mereka emang precious :*
ThatOneBi
#2
Chapter 1: Omo~
yongwhee
#3
Chapter 26: This is so cuuuuuuute im meltinggggg
Cdival #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know I'm reading this waaaaay after you posted it, but I just wanted to say that I really liked what you talked about..I mean, your note!...all of it, but specially the fourth point...but I liked all that you said... like very, very much!
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 25: Woohoo! Thank you for writing this for Mamamoo's 4th anniversary~ I like the fact that this chapter is about them reminiscing the most memorable past.

Oo wow, I wouldn't have known that Wheein's memory was an actual one if you hadn't mentioned it at the end. (A fail fan here: I haven't finished watching Secret Unnie >.<) Knowing that it's really what Wheein went though, it makes this story more melancholic. She's been through so much these past 4 years (and more). That shade though ahaha: 'This group was her dream group, there was no other group that she could every try being in apart from this one- albeit a better name could've been chosen, but she takes what she can get.' I like how amidst the worries and concerns she had after their debut performances, she still looked at the positive side which kept her going.

I really like how Hwasa's memories is basically of Wheein, but it's inevitable since they spent almost all their lives together. Hwasa's memory is too cute. (Have you watched the Life Bar episode where Wheesa appeared on it? They did say that they probably know each other more than their parents do!) It's nice that Hwasa appreciates the contrasting personalities she and Wheein have. It definitely made their friendship more meaningful.

Byul's memory is just so full of insecurities that it hurts reading it. Another shade there ahaha: 'Yes, for the first time, she was in her own house.' - I choked a little! I love the way you ended Byul's memory with this line: 'They had made a moment she would have wanted to forget, into a moment she knew she had to remember for the rest of her life, and she didn't know how to repay them.' I'm so glad that her members didn't leave her alone to her thoughts and insecurities.

Of course Solar's memory would be linked to her role as the leader. I think in general, throughout all of their memories, no matter how different they are, it all comes back to the main point on how the four of them stuck through everything together. They became each other's supports whether or not they know it. They stepped up to the occasion when they're needed to do so, and seeing how the four of them recognised this fact makes my heart feel warm.

Just two comments on your writing: I felt that the ending was rather abrupt, seeing how there's an introduction paragraph but not an ending one. Also, most of the paragraphs are rather lengthy. The paragraphs could be split to become shorter ones so that it's easier to be read.

Thank you very much for writing this! :)
Pringletip
#6
Chapter 9: What the. Noooooo Yongsun-ahhhhh
Pringletip
#7
Chapter 3: This is cute <3
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 24: Comments for Teasing: Ugh Byul's such a loser ahahahah but aww I like how heartwarming this story is at the end. That last paragraph is everything! Interesting that we get to see the different reactions of the members. For some reason through their reaction I could feel their love for Byul too, expressed in their own ways. :') I get the feeling Byul is certain of her members' love for her, and so she was comfortable teasing them. :') (Also, I can almost hear Yongsun's "ISANGHAE!" haha!)
Comments for The Sun: I am such a er for imagery and I think you've beautifully brought out the actual sun/Yongsun imagery through Byul's POV. I really like how when the sun is not visible being covered by rain clouds, another sun appears to bring light to Byul's life. Seems like this story isn't complete though! I guess we'll never know what happens between Byul and Yongsun. Interesting how I could hear Byul's turmoil.
Thank you for this update! :)
cjmoo_ #9
Chapter 23: Welcome back! I enjoyed reading both stories.
In Lucky, I really liked seeing how greasy Byul can be at one point, and the next moment she becomes very sincere.
Azegag is too cute and funny xD
cjmoo_ #10
Chapter 23: Nooo :'(
I like how you wrote Byulyi's answer as one whole chunk and making it sound forced. Seemed like she has been feeling that way for a long time :/
Hope the rest supports Hyejin as well, especially if she continues having that image of Byul in her head :/