You Stole My Heart (LeMak)

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2 weeks ago…
I was having a bad day, as usual. Nowadays, life never seemed to give me a break. It seems like all the procrastination that I did was now catching up to me as the due dates for the projects that I had to do were coming up in less than 3 days and I was, in short, screwed. I was walking home, sighing my happiness away every 3 seconds when a car pulled up right beside me, dangerously close. I turned to the car, ready to curse out the driver for putting people’s life, well mine at least, in danger and that was when time stopped for me. You stepped out, eyeliner on fleek, as usual as I soon came to notice, and short hair fabulous, also as usual, and suddenly I forgot about all the profanities I wanted to scream at you before. It was not until I was in the car till I realised what you had just done. I was literally kidnapped in broad daylight… life must love playing jokes on me. You placed a foul-smelling handkerchief on my nose and soon after, I was knocked out. 

A few hours later,
My head was spinning as I regained consciousness and sat up. Looking around at the unfamiliar surroundings, I suddenly recalled what had happened to me as the sound of footsteps drew close. You stood there, in front of me, holding out an arm, and that sight made me lose my words for the second time that day, for the exact same reason. My cheeks warmed up as I shyly put my hand into yours. And that moment was when everything changed. Do not ask me why I trusted you when clearly you were the one who kidnapped me, I just did. Electricity jolted where our skin met and pulling me up, you started jogging further and further away from where we were. Your jog turned into a run, and soon, I was sprinting as fast as Usain Bolt during the Olympics. When we finally stopped, I was sure that I had filled my exercise gauge for the rest of the year, and the year after too. You turned to me with a smile, a soft smile unlike the cocky smirk you had on the first time I laid my eyes on you and my heart skipped a beat. It was the first of the soon many times that you showed me your unexpected side, the real you. We were now in a warehouse, an abandoned one and I got chills just by being in it. You noticed how uncomfortable I was getting, and you put an arm around my waist and it was then that I realized that though you looked older than me from afar, beneath the thick makeup you had, you were probably younger than me, at least by 2 years. You led me through the warehouse like an expert and to a place with a fireplace, made nicely with a metal tin and what seemed to me a bunch of scrap paper. You sat me down near the fire, close enough to feel a little of the heat, keeping me warm from the unusually chilly Spring night. It was then that I first learnt about your name, the girl who stole all of my words and pretty much made me into an idiot every time she smiles. Ahn Hyejin, better known as Hwasa, an excellent thief who fooled the police time and time again, until now, which led her to taking me as a hostage just to hold off getting caught for awhile. According to you, you had some family matters that you started stealing for that you refuse to tell me, apart from that it is still not done. However, you were willing to go to jail for all that you have done after that ‘thing’ was done. Hyejin, to me, fitted you better, especially when you took off your makeup. And i was correct about your age too! Apparently, you are 4 years younger than me… I blame the makeup!    

Over the course of the next few days, we just sat in the warehouse, talking and doing random things and during this period of time, I got to know you so much better, until i forget that I was the victim here. I got to know, not the thief Hwasa that everyone knows and despises, but the Hyejin that no one knew, the one that cries yourself to sleep every night when you think I fell asleep first. Though I do not know the reason, I found myself wanting to be a source of strength for you in this tough, harsh world, someone who you can confide in, and most importantly, I could not bear to see you leave me, to not see you when I wake up every morning. 3 days passed, 5 days passed, 1 week passed and eventually 2 weeks passed. 

You walked into the room and flashed a dazzling smile at me. Your smile made me feel like that smile was solely for me, and it made even the North Star on the darkest of nights seem dull. I wondered to myself, why was I feeling this way, when all I should be feeling is nothing but terror for a person like you. Without knowing, a smile bloomed on my face too, similar to the one on yours. You said this to me, “It has been a tough 2 weeks for you, thank you for helping me Yongsun unnie! You've been so patient with this situation and it makes me feel

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Hey! I know I haven’t updated this in a long time but I’ve recently started a full update! Not a ADITL but a whole one couple centric One-shot! (Pst it’s not Moonsun)

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Honeyoong93
#1
Chapter 3: Ahhh wheesa mereka emang precious :*
ThatOneBi
#2
Chapter 1: Omo~
yongwhee
#3
Chapter 26: This is so cuuuuuuute im meltinggggg
Cdival #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know I'm reading this waaaaay after you posted it, but I just wanted to say that I really liked what you talked about..I mean, your note!...all of it, but specially the fourth point...but I liked all that you said... like very, very much!
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 25: Woohoo! Thank you for writing this for Mamamoo's 4th anniversary~ I like the fact that this chapter is about them reminiscing the most memorable past.

Oo wow, I wouldn't have known that Wheein's memory was an actual one if you hadn't mentioned it at the end. (A fail fan here: I haven't finished watching Secret Unnie >.<) Knowing that it's really what Wheein went though, it makes this story more melancholic. She's been through so much these past 4 years (and more). That shade though ahaha: 'This group was her dream group, there was no other group that she could every try being in apart from this one- albeit a better name could've been chosen, but she takes what she can get.' I like how amidst the worries and concerns she had after their debut performances, she still looked at the positive side which kept her going.

I really like how Hwasa's memories is basically of Wheein, but it's inevitable since they spent almost all their lives together. Hwasa's memory is too cute. (Have you watched the Life Bar episode where Wheesa appeared on it? They did say that they probably know each other more than their parents do!) It's nice that Hwasa appreciates the contrasting personalities she and Wheein have. It definitely made their friendship more meaningful.

Byul's memory is just so full of insecurities that it hurts reading it. Another shade there ahaha: 'Yes, for the first time, she was in her own house.' - I choked a little! I love the way you ended Byul's memory with this line: 'They had made a moment she would have wanted to forget, into a moment she knew she had to remember for the rest of her life, and she didn't know how to repay them.' I'm so glad that her members didn't leave her alone to her thoughts and insecurities.

Of course Solar's memory would be linked to her role as the leader. I think in general, throughout all of their memories, no matter how different they are, it all comes back to the main point on how the four of them stuck through everything together. They became each other's supports whether or not they know it. They stepped up to the occasion when they're needed to do so, and seeing how the four of them recognised this fact makes my heart feel warm.

Just two comments on your writing: I felt that the ending was rather abrupt, seeing how there's an introduction paragraph but not an ending one. Also, most of the paragraphs are rather lengthy. The paragraphs could be split to become shorter ones so that it's easier to be read.

Thank you very much for writing this! :)
Pringletip
#6
Chapter 9: What the. Noooooo Yongsun-ahhhhh
Pringletip
#7
Chapter 3: This is cute <3
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 24: Comments for Teasing: Ugh Byul's such a loser ahahahah but aww I like how heartwarming this story is at the end. That last paragraph is everything! Interesting that we get to see the different reactions of the members. For some reason through their reaction I could feel their love for Byul too, expressed in their own ways. :') I get the feeling Byul is certain of her members' love for her, and so she was comfortable teasing them. :') (Also, I can almost hear Yongsun's "ISANGHAE!" haha!)
Comments for The Sun: I am such a er for imagery and I think you've beautifully brought out the actual sun/Yongsun imagery through Byul's POV. I really like how when the sun is not visible being covered by rain clouds, another sun appears to bring light to Byul's life. Seems like this story isn't complete though! I guess we'll never know what happens between Byul and Yongsun. Interesting how I could hear Byul's turmoil.
Thank you for this update! :)
cjmoo_ #9
Chapter 23: Welcome back! I enjoyed reading both stories.
In Lucky, I really liked seeing how greasy Byul can be at one point, and the next moment she becomes very sincere.
Azegag is too cute and funny xD
cjmoo_ #10
Chapter 23: Nooo :'(
I like how you wrote Byulyi's answer as one whole chunk and making it sound forced. Seemed like she has been feeling that way for a long time :/
Hope the rest supports Hyejin as well, especially if she continues having that image of Byul in her head :/