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“Unnie… I have something to tell you... “ the younger girl trailed off at the end, peeking at her leader. “Yeah?” She replied her, tilting her head to one side, obviously confused. “In private..” She said in a small voice, nervous as to what was to come. Wheein stared at her from behind, confused before her facial expression turned to one of understanding. She turned to the maknae and whispered into her ear. They turned towards their leader and said “We have to go…” it was okay until there where they messed up completely. “Movies!” Said Wheein while Hwasa said, “Lunch!” Moonbyul just sighed, their teamwork does not work when needed. Anyway, they left soon after giving Moonbyul cheers and only the older 2 are left in the house. “So?“ The shorter one asked. They were sitting in the older girl’s room, facing each other which only made the younger girl’s heart beat faster. “So… emmm..” Moonbyul started, not being able to continue. “Just say it! Is it a crush you need help with? I would help you, you know?” “Then say yes. Say yes to whatever I ask from now on.” The younger girl cut her off. The older girl hesitantly nodded her head, still not sure as to what was going on. “No matter what I say, just listen for now, okay unnie?” Moonbyul asked, wanting to make sure that she would not scare the older girl off. Since the older girl already promised, she replied back with the only answer she could, “Yes?” But it came out more like a question than anything else. “Unnie, to be honest, since our debut, have you noticed my cheesy comments were only directed to you?” Receiving a nod as a response, she continued, “Those comments became a lot more natural as the times past, and I soon realised that what I was saying all came from my heart, I used to say it for your reactions, well I still do but, now, I do it because everything I said is true.You are pretty, and cute! You sing very very well and just everything about you is perfect! From your head down to your toes. I know this sounds weird but i think, no, know, that I have fallen for you and I know that you do not feel like that towards me but I just needed to tell you that you are perfect the way you are and that I am always with you no matter what.” The younger girl finally finished her mini speech, and waited anxiously for the older girl’s answer. Her lips felt dry and her palms sweaty. She could not bear to look at the girl, but took a peek anyway, expecting to see extreme shock and slight disgust. Instead, she saw a smile blooming on the older girls face and had to do a double take to make sure that her eyes were not deceiving her. Not knowing what that smile meant, she looked away again when she felt a hand grab hers and a voice saying, “I wondered when you would say it, Byul-ah.” To say her jaw dropped was an understatement. She turned to her leader and just stared at her. The older girl said, “Did you really think that I would not notice you staring at me for so long?” right before placing her lips gently on the younger’s just as her cheeks flushed a light pink.   DIFFERENT STORY "If you had to choose between Kuku, Ricky and Yul to date, who would y
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Hey! I know I haven’t updated this in a long time but I’ve recently started a full update! Not a ADITL but a whole one couple centric One-shot! (Pst it’s not Moonsun)

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Honeyoong93
#1
Chapter 3: Ahhh wheesa mereka emang precious :*
ThatOneBi
#2
Chapter 1: Omo~
yongwhee
#3
Chapter 26: This is so cuuuuuuute im meltinggggg
Cdival #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know I'm reading this waaaaay after you posted it, but I just wanted to say that I really liked what you talked about..I mean, your note!...all of it, but specially the fourth point...but I liked all that you said... like very, very much!
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 25: Woohoo! Thank you for writing this for Mamamoo's 4th anniversary~ I like the fact that this chapter is about them reminiscing the most memorable past.

Oo wow, I wouldn't have known that Wheein's memory was an actual one if you hadn't mentioned it at the end. (A fail fan here: I haven't finished watching Secret Unnie >.<) Knowing that it's really what Wheein went though, it makes this story more melancholic. She's been through so much these past 4 years (and more). That shade though ahaha: 'This group was her dream group, there was no other group that she could every try being in apart from this one- albeit a better name could've been chosen, but she takes what she can get.' I like how amidst the worries and concerns she had after their debut performances, she still looked at the positive side which kept her going.

I really like how Hwasa's memories is basically of Wheein, but it's inevitable since they spent almost all their lives together. Hwasa's memory is too cute. (Have you watched the Life Bar episode where Wheesa appeared on it? They did say that they probably know each other more than their parents do!) It's nice that Hwasa appreciates the contrasting personalities she and Wheein have. It definitely made their friendship more meaningful.

Byul's memory is just so full of insecurities that it hurts reading it. Another shade there ahaha: 'Yes, for the first time, she was in her own house.' - I choked a little! I love the way you ended Byul's memory with this line: 'They had made a moment she would have wanted to forget, into a moment she knew she had to remember for the rest of her life, and she didn't know how to repay them.' I'm so glad that her members didn't leave her alone to her thoughts and insecurities.

Of course Solar's memory would be linked to her role as the leader. I think in general, throughout all of their memories, no matter how different they are, it all comes back to the main point on how the four of them stuck through everything together. They became each other's supports whether or not they know it. They stepped up to the occasion when they're needed to do so, and seeing how the four of them recognised this fact makes my heart feel warm.

Just two comments on your writing: I felt that the ending was rather abrupt, seeing how there's an introduction paragraph but not an ending one. Also, most of the paragraphs are rather lengthy. The paragraphs could be split to become shorter ones so that it's easier to be read.

Thank you very much for writing this! :)
Pringletip
#6
Chapter 9: What the. Noooooo Yongsun-ahhhhh
Pringletip
#7
Chapter 3: This is cute <3
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 24: Comments for Teasing: Ugh Byul's such a loser ahahahah but aww I like how heartwarming this story is at the end. That last paragraph is everything! Interesting that we get to see the different reactions of the members. For some reason through their reaction I could feel their love for Byul too, expressed in their own ways. :') I get the feeling Byul is certain of her members' love for her, and so she was comfortable teasing them. :') (Also, I can almost hear Yongsun's "ISANGHAE!" haha!)
Comments for The Sun: I am such a er for imagery and I think you've beautifully brought out the actual sun/Yongsun imagery through Byul's POV. I really like how when the sun is not visible being covered by rain clouds, another sun appears to bring light to Byul's life. Seems like this story isn't complete though! I guess we'll never know what happens between Byul and Yongsun. Interesting how I could hear Byul's turmoil.
Thank you for this update! :)
cjmoo_ #9
Chapter 23: Welcome back! I enjoyed reading both stories.
In Lucky, I really liked seeing how greasy Byul can be at one point, and the next moment she becomes very sincere.
Azegag is too cute and funny xD
cjmoo_ #10
Chapter 23: Nooo :'(
I like how you wrote Byulyi's answer as one whole chunk and making it sound forced. Seemed like she has been feeling that way for a long time :/
Hope the rest supports Hyejin as well, especially if she continues having that image of Byul in her head :/