Forms of Communication

Blue Sky Black Sky
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A shout - a show of concern and care.
"You never understand how I feel! You claimed to have trust in me unnie! How could you say that when you suspect whatever I do!" The younger girl's face was starting to turn red from the shouting that she was doing, "it's okay though, but how could you even think of skipping meals and sleep just because you are worried?! Your health is the most important to me, you know that! So how could you compromise it!" Tears started trickling down her face as she stared at her girlfriend, lying almost lifeless on the hospital bed, probably never being able to hear what was just said. Wheein was beating herself up on the inside, all the planning she was secretly doing for her girlfriend's birthday party had caused her to be meeting with Solar's best friend, Moonbyul more often than she had been seeing Solar herself. Having gotten reports of their 'secret' meetings from people on the university, Solar had been worrying that Wheein had fallen out of love with her and was losing sleep and not eating. Today was the final straw when Solar fainted just before a flight of stairs due to the lack of nutrients and, and had tumbled down, hitting her head a couple of times. She was then sent to the hospital and Wheein was quickly informed of this by Solar's parents. "You crazy unnie! You could have just asked me! No... I'm worse for not noticing this from the beginning! I'm sorry unnie so please wake up! Wake up to forgive me! I'm sorry unnie!" Finally, Wheein stopped shouting because she was crying too hard to be saying anything at all. When she felt slight movement from the hand she was gripping on as though it was her life line, her head jolted up and she towered over the older girl, anxiously saying, "unnie? Unnie are you awake? Can you see me?" "Wheein-ah..." Solar croaked out, throat dry and hoarse. Wheein immediately leaped out of her seat and poured a glass of water, placed a straw inside and placed it to the older girl's lips, to which the latter had drank a bit of. Solar's lips curled up into a soft smile, face still quite pale, "thank you Wheein-ie, for being here, and I'm sorry to make you worry so much..." Wheein heaved a sigh of relief, thankful that her girlfriend was safe.

A Whisper - signifies close proximity and the highest level of comfort between two people.
"Our maknae, it's okay. You're safe. Good job. Don't worry, this unnie will make sure that nothing happens to you. You'll be safe whenever you're with me." The rapper whispered into the ear of the shivering girl in her arms. "I'm sorry unnie had to put you through this. I should've known better. Sorry Hyejin-ie" They sat on the sidewalk, the dented car beside them. Hyejin had her eyes fixed in the opposite direction of it, staring at their apartment 5 blocks down. The police were walking around the vehicle and talking to the driver of the other car. Moonbyul had starting rocking Hyejin, in a de

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Hey! I know I haven’t updated this in a long time but I’ve recently started a full update! Not a ADITL but a whole one couple centric One-shot! (Pst it’s not Moonsun)

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Honeyoong93
#1
Chapter 3: Ahhh wheesa mereka emang precious :*
ThatOneBi
#2
Chapter 1: Omo~
yongwhee
#3
Chapter 26: This is so cuuuuuuute im meltinggggg
Cdival #4
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: I know I'm reading this waaaaay after you posted it, but I just wanted to say that I really liked what you talked about..I mean, your note!...all of it, but specially the fourth point...but I liked all that you said... like very, very much!
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 25: Woohoo! Thank you for writing this for Mamamoo's 4th anniversary~ I like the fact that this chapter is about them reminiscing the most memorable past.

Oo wow, I wouldn't have known that Wheein's memory was an actual one if you hadn't mentioned it at the end. (A fail fan here: I haven't finished watching Secret Unnie >.<) Knowing that it's really what Wheein went though, it makes this story more melancholic. She's been through so much these past 4 years (and more). That shade though ahaha: 'This group was her dream group, there was no other group that she could every try being in apart from this one- albeit a better name could've been chosen, but she takes what she can get.' I like how amidst the worries and concerns she had after their debut performances, she still looked at the positive side which kept her going.

I really like how Hwasa's memories is basically of Wheein, but it's inevitable since they spent almost all their lives together. Hwasa's memory is too cute. (Have you watched the Life Bar episode where Wheesa appeared on it? They did say that they probably know each other more than their parents do!) It's nice that Hwasa appreciates the contrasting personalities she and Wheein have. It definitely made their friendship more meaningful.

Byul's memory is just so full of insecurities that it hurts reading it. Another shade there ahaha: 'Yes, for the first time, she was in her own house.' - I choked a little! I love the way you ended Byul's memory with this line: 'They had made a moment she would have wanted to forget, into a moment she knew she had to remember for the rest of her life, and she didn't know how to repay them.' I'm so glad that her members didn't leave her alone to her thoughts and insecurities.

Of course Solar's memory would be linked to her role as the leader. I think in general, throughout all of their memories, no matter how different they are, it all comes back to the main point on how the four of them stuck through everything together. They became each other's supports whether or not they know it. They stepped up to the occasion when they're needed to do so, and seeing how the four of them recognised this fact makes my heart feel warm.

Just two comments on your writing: I felt that the ending was rather abrupt, seeing how there's an introduction paragraph but not an ending one. Also, most of the paragraphs are rather lengthy. The paragraphs could be split to become shorter ones so that it's easier to be read.

Thank you very much for writing this! :)
Pringletip
#6
Chapter 9: What the. Noooooo Yongsun-ahhhhh
Pringletip
#7
Chapter 3: This is cute <3
cjmoo_ #8
Chapter 24: Comments for Teasing: Ugh Byul's such a loser ahahahah but aww I like how heartwarming this story is at the end. That last paragraph is everything! Interesting that we get to see the different reactions of the members. For some reason through their reaction I could feel their love for Byul too, expressed in their own ways. :') I get the feeling Byul is certain of her members' love for her, and so she was comfortable teasing them. :') (Also, I can almost hear Yongsun's "ISANGHAE!" haha!)
Comments for The Sun: I am such a er for imagery and I think you've beautifully brought out the actual sun/Yongsun imagery through Byul's POV. I really like how when the sun is not visible being covered by rain clouds, another sun appears to bring light to Byul's life. Seems like this story isn't complete though! I guess we'll never know what happens between Byul and Yongsun. Interesting how I could hear Byul's turmoil.
Thank you for this update! :)
cjmoo_ #9
Chapter 23: Welcome back! I enjoyed reading both stories.
In Lucky, I really liked seeing how greasy Byul can be at one point, and the next moment she becomes very sincere.
Azegag is too cute and funny xD
cjmoo_ #10
Chapter 23: Nooo :'(
I like how you wrote Byulyi's answer as one whole chunk and making it sound forced. Seemed like she has been feeling that way for a long time :/
Hope the rest supports Hyejin as well, especially if she continues having that image of Byul in her head :/