Ch.83

Love at first sight

Hyo Sonn's POV~

I watched as Eileen and Onew was dragged by Soon-Bok.She tied them up and lay them slumped against the wall.

"Look how adorable they are together,"Soon-Bok smiled and kicked _____.

______ looked up weakily.

"Eileen,"She gasped.

Hyun Ae kicked her and she screamed out in pain.

"_____!"I whispered.

"Onew,"She said.

Hyun Ae glared at her and kicked her again.

"What did you do to-"Hyun Ae pulled out the gun again.

"Shut up ungrateful ,"She said.

Soon-Bok smiled and pulled her her by her hair.

_____ whimpered.

"NO!STOP IT!"I yelled.

Hyun Ae glared at me and aimed the gun at her.

"Goodbye ______,"Kyu said.

Hyun Ae pulled back the trigger.

"NOOOOOO!"I screamed.

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Sorry about the short chapter and cliffhanger!!!!!I promise I will make it up to you!!!

And I'm very sad that one of my subscribers unsubscribed.crying

If it's because I'm typing really short chapters,then I"M SOO SORRY!Mianhe!!!I"m almost over my writer's block!!!

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-Berrysnowywinter

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shiningmint #1
Chapter 89: Mm.....can i ask you something? who's the little boy? the boy in her flashbacks?
Miraclepaint #2
Chapter 35: I want that house! > u <
pearlescentbluesea #3
Chapter 89: ........ i prefer her to be with jjong >;( maybe because he's my bias im not sure but i was expecting her to end up with jonghyun T_T
BroOhOh #4
woah i LUV this fanfic i just finished it and i love the ending PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL!!! but i do have a question who was that boy in the some of the flashbacks the reader was having? was it taemin?? was it already mentioned in the story? (srry if my question is already answered in the story i have bad memory) but i luv it keep up the good work!! FIGHTING!!
HappyAngel #5
O.M.G the story is so nice and keep it up !!!Write more story !!!HwaFighting ^^
berrysnowywinter #6
@minmin:Awww!!!Thanks so much!I know it's kind of fast and all.I really need to work on making my chapters longer.That's what I'm trying on my other story.Thanks again for reading!^^
@snsdshineegirl:Lol, I'm glad.
snsdshineegirl #7
SPEACHLESS IN A GOOD WAY
Minmin21 #8
I read it before just dont have a time to comment but here i am :D writer, you're so awesome! :D it is a nice story and you know what? I cant believe i end it so fast :'( and THE ENDING IS PERFECT! <3 Good job ;)
sunshinencuteness #9
It's such a great story!I can't believe it ended!Sequel please!!!:D
ParkMiyoung #10
I was going to say that I was like her with the bias thing. My bias is also between Taemin and Jonghyun, but she is a hotheaded person and she's kinda rude too to treat people who give her a place to live, like that. And she seems to hate Taemin though I think she's overreacting a lot. They didn't know of her parents.
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