Plot 1:Ruined

Love at first sight

-Outside the mansion-

Jonghyun's POV~

"I forgot.Remember when we were at the tables?"______ asked.

"Neh,"I nodded.

"Well,you forgot to tell me what you were going to say,"she said.

"Oh um..it was nothing,"I said.

"Are you sure?"________ asked.

"Neh,"I nodded.

"AGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!"We heard a scream.

_________ jumped a little in surprise.

"W-w-what was that?"she stammered.

"That sounded like the crazy old witch that just walked into the thorns,"Eileen said from behind us.

We turned around.Eileen,Hana,Key,Onew and Minho was there.

"You sure?That sounded like a walrus to me,"Hana mumbled.

"How?"Eileen asked.

Hana shrugged.

"What are you doing here?"I asked.

"Um....we couldn't help but feel guilty so we decided to pretend to wander around the garden,"Key whispered.

"Cue acting,"Eileen said quietly.

"Hey I don't remember seeing those roses over there,"Hana 'called' to Eileen.

"Really?Where?"Eileen 'called' back.

Then Eileen walked over to the roses.

"Should we move them?The thorns are pretty sharp and it's blocking the way out of the maze,"Eileen said in a loud voice.

"Maybe we should...but it's getting cold here,"Hana shivered.

Taemin ran up to us.

"What are you all doing here?"He asked.

"I thought they could use a  tour of our garden,"Eileen said,"What are you doing here?"

"GET ME OUT OF HERE!"Hyun Ae yelled.

Hana slowly and gently pulled the roses.

"Ow.The thorns pricked me,"Hana said.

"Really?Come here,"Key said.

"Oh great PDA,"Eileen groaned and turned her back towards them.

"Hyun Ae!Wait I'm coming!"Taemin shouted.

"Oh wait!Don't yell!My poor tigers will wake up!"Eileen said.

"TIGERS!?GET HER OUT OF THE MAZE NOW!"Taemin screamed at her.

Eileen flinched at his yelling.

There was a roar that came from the maze.

"You shouldn't have done that,"I said.

Taemin slapped Eileen and then kicked the roses.

I glanced at ______.She seemed shocked.

Hana was holding Eileen protectively and looking angrily at Taemin.

"Climb over the hedge,"Onew said.

"Huh?"Key said.

"She has to climb over the hedge,"Minho repeated,"That's how she gets out."

"I am not doing that!!"Hyun Ae yelled.

"KEEP YELLING YOUR MOUTH OFF AND MY TIGERS WILL COME CLOSER!!!!"Eileen screamed.

Hyun Ae scrambled over the hedge and fell down.

Her hair was messed up and her dress was torn.

Eileen tried to hide her laughter and secretly took a picture of her.

"Hyun Ae are you okay?"Taemin said.

Your POV~

I snapped out of my daydreaming and glanced at the maze.

"Eileen you okay?"Hana murmured.

"My cheek hurts,"she mumbled.

"You deserve it for not helping me get out!Those tigers were close to eating me!"Hyun Ae snapped.

Eileen stared at her.

Hana started laughing.

"You honestly believed that?!HAHAHAHA!"Hana wiped tears from her eyes.

"What?"Taemin asked.

"Those sounds were HAHAHAHA meant to scare off intruders!HAHAHA!"Hana held her stomach.

"My tigers are right here,"Eileen smiled.

She took out a whistle and blew it.

Two tiger cubs came out.

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"These are my tigers,"Eileen smirked.

"You t-tricked us!"Hyun Ae said.

"Actually...my parents own the adult tigers,"Eileen said.

"Hyun Ae let's get out of here and leave this crazy lunatic,"Taemin said.

Eileen glared at him.

"Look who's talking,"Eileen said.In a quick movement she grabbed his arm and flipped him over.

"Eileen,"Hana said,"Enough."

"That will teach you to call me a crazy lunatic,"Eileen said.

Hana pulled me and Eileen towards the mansion.

"Well....that went well,"Hana mumbled.

"Yep,"I mumbled.

"At least I get to flip Taemin,"Eileen smiled.

"This girl,"I laughed.

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shiningmint #1
Chapter 89: Mm.....can i ask you something? who's the little boy? the boy in her flashbacks?
Miraclepaint #2
Chapter 35: I want that house! > u <
pearlescentbluesea #3
Chapter 89: ........ i prefer her to be with jjong >;( maybe because he's my bias im not sure but i was expecting her to end up with jonghyun T_T
BroOhOh #4
woah i LUV this fanfic i just finished it and i love the ending PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL!!! but i do have a question who was that boy in the some of the flashbacks the reader was having? was it taemin?? was it already mentioned in the story? (srry if my question is already answered in the story i have bad memory) but i luv it keep up the good work!! FIGHTING!!
HappyAngel #5
O.M.G the story is so nice and keep it up !!!Write more story !!!HwaFighting ^^
berrysnowywinter #6
@minmin:Awww!!!Thanks so much!I know it's kind of fast and all.I really need to work on making my chapters longer.That's what I'm trying on my other story.Thanks again for reading!^^
@snsdshineegirl:Lol, I'm glad.
snsdshineegirl
#7
SPEACHLESS IN A GOOD WAY
Minmin21 #8
I read it before just dont have a time to comment but here i am :D writer, you're so awesome! :D it is a nice story and you know what? I cant believe i end it so fast :'( and THE ENDING IS PERFECT! <3 Good job ;)
sunshinencuteness #9
It's such a great story!I can't believe it ended!Sequel please!!!:D
ParkMiyoung
#10
I was going to say that I was like her with the bias thing. My bias is also between Taemin and Jonghyun, but she is a hotheaded person and she's kinda rude too to treat people who give her a place to live, like that. And she seems to hate Taemin though I think she's overreacting a lot. They didn't know of her parents.