2nd Day of Christmas

Love at first sight

Jonghyun's POV~

Yes!I got ______'s name!

Hmm but what should I get her?

She looked around nervously.

"What should I get him?"She mumbled.

"This is nice.Don't you think so?"Key asked and held up a scarf.

______ looked up from the clothes rack immediately.

'Hmm..she got Key..'I thought,'I should help her out.'

"So hyung.What do you want for Christmas?"I said a little too loudly.

"Erm..well I want to get Hana to notice me.She always seems to have her attention directed to Eileen or _______.Sometimes something else,"Key sighed.

________ smiled triumphantly and pumped a fist in the air.

_______ walked up to us.

"Umma can we give gifts early?"she asked.

"Well it's not on the rules so I guess so,"Key said.

"Okay come with me,"she said.

Key  followed her.

"I guess I'm alone,"I sighed.

I played with my cell phone.

Then my eyes widened.

"A cell phone.She doesn't have one,"I whispered.

Taemin's POV~

Dammit.This is a big mall and I got lost.

I pouted and looked around.

"Are you lost?"Someone asked.

"Er..neh.I'm supposed to meet my friends by a fountain,"I said.

"I'll show you were it is,"The girl said.

"Thanks,what's your name?"I asked her.

"I'm Hyun Ae,"She smiled.

"I'm-"

"I know who you are.Your Lee Tae-"

"Shh not so loud,"I whispered.

"Okay oppa,"She smiled.

She's cute....

"We're here!"She said.

"Thanks,"I said.

"I guess I'll see you next time,"She said.

She seems familiar somehow....

"Taemin!We've been looking for you!"Key said.

"Mianhe!I got lost hyung,"I said.

"We should send someone to be with you,"Minho suggested.

Jonghyun's POV~

"Eileen get back here!"Hana yelled and chased her.

She passed Key a few times but didn't even glance at him.

Key sighed and started looking depressed.

I patted his shoulder.

"Don't worry hyung.Be patient,"I said.

"I just can't..."He said.

"If I can wait than you can too,"I said.

He looked at me.

"Who?"he whispered.

"_______,"I whispered her name softly.

My gaze fell on her.

She was laughing at Hana and Eileen.

I felt a little longing.

I want to reach out towards her and say that she's mine...but I can't..

Than I realized I said it out loud.

"I know,"Key said.

We sighed at the same time.

"I'll help you Jonghyun.."Key mumbled.

"Huh?"I said,suprised.

"I'll help you,"Key said again.

"I may not be able to catch Hana's attention but you might be able to get ________,"Key said.

"Hyun-"

Key smiled sadly and that shut me up.

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Well...the sad thing is that Key won't get Hana for a loooong time.(Oops spoiler)

I hope you like it though.It seems a little sad to me..-Berrysnowywinter

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shiningmint #1
Chapter 89: Mm.....can i ask you something? who's the little boy? the boy in her flashbacks?
Miraclepaint #2
Chapter 35: I want that house! > u <
pearlescentbluesea #3
Chapter 89: ........ i prefer her to be with jjong >;( maybe because he's my bias im not sure but i was expecting her to end up with jonghyun T_T
BroOhOh #4
woah i LUV this fanfic i just finished it and i love the ending PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL!!! but i do have a question who was that boy in the some of the flashbacks the reader was having? was it taemin?? was it already mentioned in the story? (srry if my question is already answered in the story i have bad memory) but i luv it keep up the good work!! FIGHTING!!
HappyAngel #5
O.M.G the story is so nice and keep it up !!!Write more story !!!HwaFighting ^^
berrysnowywinter #6
@minmin:Awww!!!Thanks so much!I know it's kind of fast and all.I really need to work on making my chapters longer.That's what I'm trying on my other story.Thanks again for reading!^^
@snsdshineegirl:Lol, I'm glad.
snsdshineegirl
#7
SPEACHLESS IN A GOOD WAY
Minmin21 #8
I read it before just dont have a time to comment but here i am :D writer, you're so awesome! :D it is a nice story and you know what? I cant believe i end it so fast :'( and THE ENDING IS PERFECT! <3 Good job ;)
sunshinencuteness #9
It's such a great story!I can't believe it ended!Sequel please!!!:D
ParkMiyoung
#10
I was going to say that I was like her with the bias thing. My bias is also between Taemin and Jonghyun, but she is a hotheaded person and she's kinda rude too to treat people who give her a place to live, like that. And she seems to hate Taemin though I think she's overreacting a lot. They didn't know of her parents.