Hawaii

Love at first sight

Your POV~

I woke up in the car all of sudden when there was a bump in the road.

"Huh?Are we there yet?"I mumbled.

I looked out the window and notcied that the scenery was different.

"Neh!We're in HAWAII!"Eileen squealed.

"Already?Who took me into the plane then?"I muttered.I missed getting onto the plane and worse of all,I slept through so many hours.

"Hmm?Oh Jonghyun carried you,"Key said.

I gave a quick side glance to Jonghyun.

"Did you text Hana yet?"I asked Eileen.

"Neh.She's replying I think,"Eileen handed me her phone.

From:Eileen

Umma!We're here in Hawaii!We're going to book a few rooms in a hotel first and then explore.Then we'll meet up later arasso?(We also have to catch up on sleep..)

Text back so we know where to find you!!

 

The phone vibrated and I got Hana's text.

 From:Appa

Eh?Arasso!I'll let you guys have your moments of fun!I guess I'll see you later!

Here's where to go,but go on Saturday arasso?I'll be there.(Random address)

<3Hana Appa

I stared at it suspiciously before handing it back.

Something horrible is going to happen...I feel it....I know it..

I shook my head and pushed away the strange feeling.

"No..it's nothing ______,"I mumbled.

"Something wrong?"Taemin asked.

"Aniyo,"I smiled reassuringly.

I laid my head against the glass window and stare at the beautiful scenery.

Finally we arrived in the parking lot of a big hotel.

"We're here!"Onew announced.

Everyone except me and Eileen,took out the luggage.

We ran inside,glad that we could fianlly get some sleep.Well not really me since I got most of the sleep.

We all got seperate rooms.

Minho and Taemin ,Jonghyun and Key,Eileen,Hy(Who is unbelievably quiet),and me,and Onew has a room of his own.

Eileen sighed and flopped onto the bed.

"You know,I barely noticed you were in the car Hy,"I looked at her.

"Yeah..I'm shy,"She said softly.

I nodded and waited at least twenty minutes.When I was sure that everyone was asleep,I ran into Taemin's and Jonghyun's room and began to search frantically for my keys.I found it on a desk ,but it seemed to obvious.

I reached for it slowly ,but suddenly Taemin's hand shot out and grabbed my wrist.

"Trying to steal it back huh?"He asked.

I pouted.

Damn I got caught..How does Eileen do this?

He picked it up and tossed it to me.

I was too surprised to catch it and it landed on the floor.

"Wha?"I stared at him.

He yawned.

"I'm too sleepy,"He mumbled.

"Right!Mianhe!!"I bowed and ran out.

Hana's POV~

It was a bad day for me.

I was currently studying in a university in California.One of the best in the world as my appa put's it.

How I miss Eileen and ______.

I sighed in relief when the last bell rang and I ran out like my life depended on it.

I hate school here.I hate my parents.I hate this place.

I walked out and looked around.

Kyu Bok was supposed to pick me up.

Surpprisingly,I grew attached to him ,but like in a brother-sister sort of way.

I spotted him a few yards away with a girl..wait..

HYUN AE!!!!!

I hid behind the trees and tried to eavesdrop.

"Listen Kyu Bok!I need to get rid of that _____ girl!"She said.

I gasped mentally.

WHAT IS THAT DEVIL GOING TO DO WITH MY DAUGHTER?!!!angry

"Okay?And you want me to?"He trailed off.

"To give me money to go to Hawaii.I've already got our cousin Soon-Bok to give Eileen fake messages.Now I just need tickets,a gun,a few people to side-track everyone and lead _______ to her trap and that's about it,"Hyun Ae shrugged.

"Arasso.Here,"Kyu Bok handed the money.

I almost fainted at the spot.

GUN?!SOON-BOK?!!

I clenched my fists and bit my lip to keep from shouting.

What are they going to do with _____?

Hyun Ae smiled evilly and walked away.I came out of my hiding spot.

"HOW COULD YOU GIVE HER THAT MONEY?!_______ IS MY DAUGHTER YOU FREAKING PABO!I HATE YOU!"I screamed.

He seemed taken back at surprise.

"Who?"He asked.

"______!"I shouted and took out my phone to show him a pciture.

"!"He hit his head.

"Take me to Hawaii now!"I demanded.

"B-but,"He protested.

"I DON"T CARE!I HATE THIS PLACE,MY PARENTS AND I WILL HATE YOU IF YOU DON'T TAKE ME TO HAWAII NOW!"I yelled.

My voice was growing hoarse ,but I didn't notice.I would scream forever and never stop just for my friends.My REAL family.

Kyu Bok pulled me into the car and drove to "our" house.Technically we aren't married yet.

I stuffed my clothes (Most of my best clothes were stuck at Eileen's mansion.) into a bag and ran downstairs.

While I was panicking,Kyu Bok spent his time carefully packing his clothes.

When I waited impatiently until he was done,We drove as quickly as possible to the airport.

"The flight to Hawaii has just left."A worker announced.

"We're too late!"I sobbed.

"Hana.."Kyu Bok patted my back.

"That freaking Hyun Ae is going to kill my daughter!MY daughter!And I won't be there to protect her!"I sobbed.

He looked at me helplessly.

"WHY HAD APPA TAKEN MY PHONE AWAY!?I FORGOT ALL THEIR NUMBERS AND I FEEL STRAMDED HERE!"I sobbed and hit the floor with my fist.

"I can't even warn her!"I sniffed.

"Don't worry Hana,"He said,"We'll get there soon."

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Oh.Look's like those suspicious text messages were fake.Will Hana find out how to save her without contacting her?

Stay tuned!!

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Annyeong!Sorry for not updating!Been catching up on reading!

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shiningmint #1
Chapter 89: Mm.....can i ask you something? who's the little boy? the boy in her flashbacks?
Miraclepaint #2
Chapter 35: I want that house! > u <
pearlescentbluesea #3
Chapter 89: ........ i prefer her to be with jjong >;( maybe because he's my bias im not sure but i was expecting her to end up with jonghyun T_T
BroOhOh #4
woah i LUV this fanfic i just finished it and i love the ending PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL!!! but i do have a question who was that boy in the some of the flashbacks the reader was having? was it taemin?? was it already mentioned in the story? (srry if my question is already answered in the story i have bad memory) but i luv it keep up the good work!! FIGHTING!!
HappyAngel #5
O.M.G the story is so nice and keep it up !!!Write more story !!!HwaFighting ^^
berrysnowywinter #6
@minmin:Awww!!!Thanks so much!I know it's kind of fast and all.I really need to work on making my chapters longer.That's what I'm trying on my other story.Thanks again for reading!^^
@snsdshineegirl:Lol, I'm glad.
snsdshineegirl
#7
SPEACHLESS IN A GOOD WAY
Minmin21 #8
I read it before just dont have a time to comment but here i am :D writer, you're so awesome! :D it is a nice story and you know what? I cant believe i end it so fast :'( and THE ENDING IS PERFECT! <3 Good job ;)
sunshinencuteness #9
It's such a great story!I can't believe it ended!Sequel please!!!:D
ParkMiyoung
#10
I was going to say that I was like her with the bias thing. My bias is also between Taemin and Jonghyun, but she is a hotheaded person and she's kinda rude too to treat people who give her a place to live, like that. And she seems to hate Taemin though I think she's overreacting a lot. They didn't know of her parents.