Could she be dead?

Love at first sight

Hana's POV~
 

I walked past Kyu's room and heard his phone ringing.So I picked it up an saw he got a text message.My eyes widened in alarm as I read the message.

"Kyu you are so dead,"I mumbled.

I stuffed his phone in my pocket and ran out.

"_______ is in danger..."I said to myself.

I ran faster and faster until I saw Eileen and SHINee chatting like nothing happened.

"PABOS!"I yelled.

I stormed over there angrily and they stared at me.

"Appa!"Eileen smiled.

"Where's _______?"I demanded.

"erm...Soon-Bok took her awhile ago.Wait..appa have you been getting any sleep?You look pale and have bags under your eyes,"Eileen said.

"You shouldn't have let Soon-Bok take her!"I said.

"Wow that's the first time I think I'd ever hear her say that,"He-Ran mumbled as she walked over.

"Let's go get some ice cream!"Myung-Hee yelled.

"_______ is gonna die right now if we don't hurry!"I argued.

"BWOH?!"They screamed.

"If you're gonna stand there with your mouths open and not do anything to help,I'm going to risk my life,"I said.

I turned around and began to think.

Where would they take _____?

Soon-Bok's house..?

No too many witnesses.

Um..wait!An abandoned factory!

"Okay now I just need to find some old building,"I mumbled.

"I know where to find one!"Choon-Hee said.

"Lead the way!"I yelled.

"Some of us will get a taxi,some will go after ______ on foot,and some of us will contact the police,"I said.

"Myung-Hee,Choon-Hee,and Hy will get the police,"He-Ran offered.

"I'll go on foot!"Minho said.

"Me too!"Taemin and Jonghyun said at the same time.

"Key,Eileen,Onew and I will take a taxi then,"I nodded thoughtfully.

They all ran off in different directions leaving Key,Me,Onew,and Eileen standing there waiting for a taxi.

"Come on!"I said impatiently.

"It's coming!"Eileen said.

We jumped in.

"Please take us to one of the abandoned buildings here quickly,"Eileen said in English.

He went so slowly that people passed us and they were mostly granparents.

"Step on it you slowpoke!"I yelled.

He stared at me and continued to drive at this slow pace.

"Urgh...hurry up!"I whined.

"Calm down,"Key said.

Taemin's POV~

Wemade it to this old wired gate.

"I don't think we can climb over it,"Minho said.

"Look!There's a keyboard!"I said.

Without thinking,I typed in the numbers 1,2,and 3.

"Taemin!You should think before doing that,"Jonghyun scolded.

Then the gates opened slowly.

I smirked to myself and Jonghyun scowled.

"It could be a trap,"Jonghyun said.

"Stop!"Minho said.

He pulled us behind a bush.A red line just passed by us.

"Are you kidding me?Lasers!"I gasped.

"You must have opened it but by doing so you led us into a trap!"Jonghyun glared.

"Well I'm sorry!How could I know if I did that?"I argued.

"Stop you two.Seriously.Grow up already.Right now we have to focus,"Minho said. 

"Mianhe!"I said.

"Shh!"Jognhyun said.

The line passed near us again.

"I think these lasers are controlled by sound,"Minho said.

"What the hell should we do?"Jonghyun said.

I picked up a rock and through it at the fence.It made a sound that rang out everywhere.

"Quickly!"Minho waved.

We snuck over to our next hiding spot in a bush.

"That was a good plan but now we're farther away from the fence,"Jonghyun said. 

"We're stuck,"I pouted.

"Not exactly,"Minho said.

He picked up a couple of rocks and tried to hit a window.

"Damn!Jonghyun you try,"Minho sighed.

"I bet you that I can hit that window thats two stories high,"Jonghyun said.

"You're on!"Minho said.

They threw the rocks and missed.
"You two now hurry up and throw a rock already,"I sighed.

Then I froze as I heard a gunshot.

Could ______ be.........

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dead?

 

 

 

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Annyeong!The chapter is different.I know I know.Right now I'm sorry for not being able to update but I"m seriously really busy right now.I'm still sick and drinking medicine so yeah I'm getting really sleepy nowadays.

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shiningmint #1
Chapter 89: Mm.....can i ask you something? who's the little boy? the boy in her flashbacks?
Miraclepaint #2
Chapter 35: I want that house! > u <
pearlescentbluesea #3
Chapter 89: ........ i prefer her to be with jjong >;( maybe because he's my bias im not sure but i was expecting her to end up with jonghyun T_T
BroOhOh #4
woah i LUV this fanfic i just finished it and i love the ending PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL!!! but i do have a question who was that boy in the some of the flashbacks the reader was having? was it taemin?? was it already mentioned in the story? (srry if my question is already answered in the story i have bad memory) but i luv it keep up the good work!! FIGHTING!!
HappyAngel #5
O.M.G the story is so nice and keep it up !!!Write more story !!!HwaFighting ^^
berrysnowywinter #6
@minmin:Awww!!!Thanks so much!I know it's kind of fast and all.I really need to work on making my chapters longer.That's what I'm trying on my other story.Thanks again for reading!^^
@snsdshineegirl:Lol, I'm glad.
snsdshineegirl
#7
SPEACHLESS IN A GOOD WAY
Minmin21 #8
I read it before just dont have a time to comment but here i am :D writer, you're so awesome! :D it is a nice story and you know what? I cant believe i end it so fast :'( and THE ENDING IS PERFECT! <3 Good job ;)
sunshinencuteness #9
It's such a great story!I can't believe it ended!Sequel please!!!:D
ParkMiyoung
#10
I was going to say that I was like her with the bias thing. My bias is also between Taemin and Jonghyun, but she is a hotheaded person and she's kinda rude too to treat people who give her a place to live, like that. And she seems to hate Taemin though I think she's overreacting a lot. They didn't know of her parents.