Make-up chapter (2)

Love at first sight

YOUR POV~

"Unni!!!"Hana smiled.

"Umma,"I said.

"Come in!!"She said excitedly.

We walked in and there was Hana's cute little sister ,Eunhye(Random name).

"Hello!"she said.

"Hello and Happy Birthday!"I smiled.

Eileen came in form the kitchen.

"Hi!"she smiled.

Onew and Minho smiled widely.

Eunhye tugged on my arm.

"Unni?Is that SHINee?"she asked.

She was just so cute I had to pinch her cheeks.

"Yes it is,"I smiled.

"Last night Hana unni was screaming her head off about SHINee,"she said blankly.

"She just likes them,"I said.

"Do they like her back?"she asked innocently.

Ah so cute!>.<

I pinched her cheeks.

"Why don't you ask them yourself,"I smiled.
I didn't think that she would do it but she did.

She went up to Key and tugged his jacket.

"Oh hello,"Key smiled.

"Does Key oppa like Hana unni?"she said.

"Erm...well...,"he said nervously.

Hana was watching closely and the others were staring at Key.

Key scratched his head.

"Key!Don't be shy!Tell her!"Jonghyun smirked.

Eunhye gave him puppy dog eyes.

"Okay I like her,"Key sighed.

"You say that like it's a bad thing,"Eileen pointed out.

"Key loves Hana!"Jonghyun teased.

"There is a huge difference between like and love!"Key yelled.

"How about you oppa?Do you like Eileen unni?"Eunhye turned to Onew.

"I like her only as a friend,"Onew smiled.

"Oh,"Eunhye cocked her head.

Before she could say anything else,Hana came in with a huge tray of cookies. 

http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=cookies&view=detail&id=42E29FBD025599937A91F2FC3F9CB803F690189B&first=91&FORM=IDFRIR 

 

http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=cookies&view=detail&id=5804151F8AFBBBA1A057C8C8BB6E184B77F3D372&first=0&FORM=IDFRIR 

She smiled and set the tray down on the table.

"The cookies are ready!"She said in  singsong voice.

"Thank you unni!"Eunhye smiled.

Hana chuckled and ruffled her hair.

"Happy birthday dongsaeng!"Hana smiled.

Eunhye picked up a present and gave it to me.

"For you,"she smiled.

I slowly lifted up the top.

http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=teddy+bear&view=detail&id=7CF36B66EE67913C15F2BA3AD786B0389955372C&first=0&FORM=IDFRIR 

"A teddy bear!"she squealed.

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shiningmint #1
Chapter 89: Mm.....can i ask you something? who's the little boy? the boy in her flashbacks?
Miraclepaint #2
Chapter 35: I want that house! > u <
pearlescentbluesea #3
Chapter 89: ........ i prefer her to be with jjong >;( maybe because he's my bias im not sure but i was expecting her to end up with jonghyun T_T
BroOhOh #4
woah i LUV this fanfic i just finished it and i love the ending PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL!!! but i do have a question who was that boy in the some of the flashbacks the reader was having? was it taemin?? was it already mentioned in the story? (srry if my question is already answered in the story i have bad memory) but i luv it keep up the good work!! FIGHTING!!
HappyAngel #5
O.M.G the story is so nice and keep it up !!!Write more story !!!HwaFighting ^^
berrysnowywinter #6
@minmin:Awww!!!Thanks so much!I know it's kind of fast and all.I really need to work on making my chapters longer.That's what I'm trying on my other story.Thanks again for reading!^^
@snsdshineegirl:Lol, I'm glad.
snsdshineegirl
#7
SPEACHLESS IN A GOOD WAY
Minmin21 #8
I read it before just dont have a time to comment but here i am :D writer, you're so awesome! :D it is a nice story and you know what? I cant believe i end it so fast :'( and THE ENDING IS PERFECT! <3 Good job ;)
sunshinencuteness #9
It's such a great story!I can't believe it ended!Sequel please!!!:D
ParkMiyoung
#10
I was going to say that I was like her with the bias thing. My bias is also between Taemin and Jonghyun, but she is a hotheaded person and she's kinda rude too to treat people who give her a place to live, like that. And she seems to hate Taemin though I think she's overreacting a lot. They didn't know of her parents.