Valentine's Day

Love at first sight

Your POV~

"Ready!"I smiled at myself in the mirror.

"Let's go!You're early but it's a long drive so in the car you go!"Eileen said.

She slipped the GPS tracked into my hand.

"Make sure you don't get lost,"Eileen said.

"Arasso!"I nodded and got into the car.

-at the edge of the forest-

A note was taped to a tree.

______ please go follow the rose petals on the stone path.

At the end of the path,you'll find me.

<3 -Taemin

I looked up and saw the rose petals on the path.

"Oh Taemin..You really overdo things too much,"I shook my head.

When I arrived at the end of the path,I saw the most beautiful scenery in my whole life.

Arms wrapped around my waist.

"______,Do you like it?"Taemin whispered into my ear.

"It's beautiful.."I gasped.

"Come on.Let's go for a boat ride,"Taemin smiled.

"There's no boat,"I looked around.

He moved away some vines.

"A rowboat?"I stared at it.

"Neh.You don't wanna go on?"Taemin asked.

"Aniyo,I just never expected this.."I said.

He chuckled and dragged it onto the water.

He held out his hand and helped me into the boat.

"So what do you think?"Taemin asked once we were in the middle of the lake.

"I never..this is the best date I ever had.."I said.

"I thought this was your first,"He raised an eyebrow.

"Okay it is,"I blushed in embarassment.

"You're too cute,"Taemin smiled and pinched my cheeks.

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Taemin's POV~

She's soo adorable!!>.<

"Are you hungry?"I asked.

"Neh,"She nodded.

Wow..how is she not nervous??

I took out some chocolate strawberries.

"Say ahh,"I held out a strawberry.

"What are you doing?"She stared at the strawberry.

"I'm feeding you.Now say ahh,"I said.

"Ahh,"She opened and ate the strawberry.

"It's soo quiet,"She looked around.

"Is that bad or good?"I asked.

What if it was bad???Is Jonghyun going to win her over??!!!

"Stop looking so worried,"She laughed,"I mean it as a nice way."

"Oh,"I said,relieved.

"I do have one question though,"She said.

She leaned over the dise of the boat.

"Don't fall in,"I warned her.

"I know,"She said.

She reached into the water and pulled out a rose petal.

"What are these doing in the water?Roses don't grow around here,"She said.

"Um..I threw it in?"?I said.

"Aww..Too bad,"She smiled disappointedly.

"What do you mean?"I asked.

"That would make a pefect gift,"She said.

"Oh really?"I hid a smile.

Behind me was 3 pink roses.

"Yep.I loved roses,"She smiled sadly.

"Are you trying to hint something?"I stared at her.

I couldn't help it..She looked like a goddess.

"Well..no,"She said.

"Here then,"I pulled the roses out.

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"Aww Taemin,"She smiled.

Then she stared into the flower.

"Omo,"She gasped.

In the center of the rose,where I place it,was the necklace I bought.

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She pulled it out slowly.

"Taemin.."She whispered my name softly.

"You still look hungry,"I changed the subject.

"Here choose your pick,"I pulled out the picnic basket.

"Um.."She picked up some bread where I left one of the couple rings in.

"What's this?"Her eyes widened in surprise.

She pulled the ring out.

 

"_______,"I gently picked up her hands.

"I ..um..Will you be my girlfriend?"I asked.

"Let me think about it arasso?"She leaned closer to me and kissed my cheek.

Then I froze.

"Taemin.."She looked at me.

"N-N-Neh?"I stuttered.

"Don't just sit there.Help me put on this necklace,"She laughed softly.

"Arasso,"I smiled.

-

Your POV~

-skipping ahead to the party-

Did I just kiss his cheek?And why did I just notice that we have matching rings?He also gave me a bracelet that matches his too.

 

(Pink bead is _______'s,and blue bead is Taemin's)

I the pink bead.

"He's soo sweet,"I smiled to myself.

"He gave you a bracelet,ring,and necklace?"He-Ran asked.

Oops..I forgot she was right next to me.

"Yeah.."I nodded.

"That's cute,"Myung-Hee said.

"Saeng il chuk ha hae !!"Ihugged her.

"Aww.."She smiled.

I pulled out a bag and gave it to her.

"Aww!Teddy bear!"She squealed,"Mashimaro!!!"

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"With a baby mashimaro,"I added.

"Thanks!"She squealed.

"Now go change,"She said in a monotone voice.

"Arasso,"I nodded.

"Back to Hana's room,"I sighed.

I walked upstairs and took out a black dress.

 

"Is this okay?"I asked Eileen who followed me.

"Neh.Change and put on different shoes,"She said.

"Um..Are flats okay?"I asked.

"Aniyo!!"She scolded.

"You sound like appa now,"I said.

"Well someone has to fill in for her,"Eileen sighed.

"Okay how about ballet flats?"I asked.

 

(Not really it but..I got too tired..)

"Those look much better,"Eileen nodded.

"Okay?Make-up?"I asked.

"Maybe a little eyeshadow and lip gloss,"Choon-Hee poked her head in.

"Eh?How do you know?"Eileen asked.

"Please..I lived with Soon-Bok for a long time.I know what I'm doing,"She smiled.

She put the make-up on me and I looked a little older.

"You're growing up so fast is what Hana would have said,"Eileen smiled.

"Where do I go?"I asked as I pulled on the ballet flats.

"The rooftop,"Myung-Hee said.

I ran upstairs.

There he was standing.

Looking out at the city lights.There wasn't much stars out but it seemed okay.

"Jonghyun?"I called.

"Oh you're here,"He smiled.

"Um...neh,"I smiled awkwardly.

"Oh sit,"He pulled out a chair.

"Okay.."I said.

"Here,"He held out a boquet of red roses in front of me.

"Wow..Kasamhamnida,"I gasped.

"Anything for you,"He smiled.

A few moments later,Key came up dressed in a butler suit and holding dinner.

"Um..hi umma?"I tried not to laugh.

"Hi,"He tried to smile.

"Thanks dongsaeng,"Jonghyun said.

We ate slowly and awkwardly.

"_____,how long do I have to wait for your desicion?"Jonghyun asked.

"I dunno,"I whispered.

"It's okay.Take your time,"He my cheek.

I blushed awkwardly.

Well...this is really awkward...

Suddenly he stood up.

"You want to dance?"He asked.

"There's no music,"I said.

All of a sudden music began to play.

"Well?"He asked.

"Sure,"I said.

I put my hands in his and he twirled me around.

We were so close to each other..I swear he's enjoying it.

-

Jonghyun's POV~

She looks so beautiful...

I wanna hold her close to me and never let her go.

I want to make her mine.

Then I couldn't take it.

I leaned her back and kissed her.

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For all the Jonghyun fans.smiley

Don't worry Taemin fans!!He'll get his moment!!

Thanks for reading!!I luv you guys!!^^

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My depression is finally over!!I think..

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-Berrysnowywinter

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shiningmint #1
Chapter 89: Mm.....can i ask you something? who's the little boy? the boy in her flashbacks?
Miraclepaint #2
Chapter 35: I want that house! > u <
pearlescentbluesea #3
Chapter 89: ........ i prefer her to be with jjong >;( maybe because he's my bias im not sure but i was expecting her to end up with jonghyun T_T
BroOhOh #4
woah i LUV this fanfic i just finished it and i love the ending PLZ MAKE A SEQUEL!!! but i do have a question who was that boy in the some of the flashbacks the reader was having? was it taemin?? was it already mentioned in the story? (srry if my question is already answered in the story i have bad memory) but i luv it keep up the good work!! FIGHTING!!
HappyAngel #5
O.M.G the story is so nice and keep it up !!!Write more story !!!HwaFighting ^^
berrysnowywinter #6
@minmin:Awww!!!Thanks so much!I know it's kind of fast and all.I really need to work on making my chapters longer.That's what I'm trying on my other story.Thanks again for reading!^^
@snsdshineegirl:Lol, I'm glad.
snsdshineegirl
#7
SPEACHLESS IN A GOOD WAY
Minmin21 #8
I read it before just dont have a time to comment but here i am :D writer, you're so awesome! :D it is a nice story and you know what? I cant believe i end it so fast :'( and THE ENDING IS PERFECT! <3 Good job ;)
sunshinencuteness #9
It's such a great story!I can't believe it ended!Sequel please!!!:D
ParkMiyoung
#10
I was going to say that I was like her with the bias thing. My bias is also between Taemin and Jonghyun, but she is a hotheaded person and she's kinda rude too to treat people who give her a place to live, like that. And she seems to hate Taemin though I think she's overreacting a lot. They didn't know of her parents.