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fter an attempt at suicide by jumping off a building, Lee Eunhae is left with depression, a broken arm, and the loss of her best friend. She begins to find herself completely lost, dreams shattered, salvation ruined. Life, as she knows it, suddenly becomes meaningless. Follow the tale of a young girl who's lost her will in the journey to find a better life with help from a grudging classmate.

First Impression [ 12/15 ]

› Title [ 3/5 ] I must say, it's not the best title I've encountered yet it's fitting...but again, not the best. It needs a more eye-catching vibe to it...
› Foreword and Description [ 9/10 ] The foreword and description..I have no words for it..it's perfect. Except for the part you mentioned "glass ghost" It's almost redundant and somehow blows off the drama in the foreword..but it's okay. It's no biggie

*another thing about the design..I'm not exactly a fan of the part when you put the chapter number and the title just like that...it's better if you typed it with a different and larger font then just put a break then move on to the chapter it made the story look unprofessional..SORRY T.T

Language [ 20/20 ] I don't know how you did it but I really did not notice a flaw on this...I don't know but I just didn't. Maybe because you had this reviewed and probably endited before this review..but that's a good thing. You listen to reviewers if you did that then

*another thing about this...I know you wanna keep all