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iu Min tried to move on. But he failed miserably. His heart is still chasing after her. That person has left him alone on the road with nothing, but painful scars. His heart always collapsed like an avalanche; he has got used to it. Because of the past mistakes that keep haunting him every night, he refuses to fall in love for the second time. Xiu Min doesn't wants to be a murderer again.

First Impression [ 12/15 ] the title made me interested coz of the movie 'frozen' and i wondered if it had any reference to the movie. This prompted me to read the description and it got me hooked.

› Title [ 4/5 ]
› Foreword and Description [ 9/10 ]

Language [ 15/20 ] Example- "cold sweats rolled down..." "startle met me.." These are grammatically incorrect phrases. The correct ones should be "i had cold sweat" or "droplets of cold sweat rolled down". And for "startle met me", it should be "I was startled".

› Sentence Structure & Grammar [ 7/10 ]
› Vocab, Punctuation, & Spelling [ 8/10 ]

Storyline [ 28/35 ] I would like to praise you for making the story flow so smoothly and the progression of the details of the