H

ye Min a girl with a past she never wants to tell anyone, promised herself to never express anger. Anger had destroyed a person's life and she witnessed everything. In this story, Hye Min finds that anger is something that everyone had deep in their hearts, anger is something she must express one day.

First Impression [ 11/15 ]

› Title [ 4/5 ] Personally, I really like short or one word title because I think they are so much more effective than really long ones. “Inhuman” gives me a feeling of like someone in danger or someone is going through a hard time, I don’t know why but yeah. I really like it so well done.
› Foreword and Description [ 7/10 ] Ok so basically, I am in love, literally with your poster. To the person that did one, well done to them because it is so gorgeous like it is just so eye-catchy, It is pretty simple but with the colour and black and white sides and the words around, it is so beautiful. I actually like the idea of focusing on one word and explaining it because I think no one would actually think the word “anger” has a lot of meanings. Your Des and Foreword is good but I think you need something more to catch the readers’ eyes more because this is the hook that will make your readers read on.

Language [ 18/20 ]

› Sentence Structure & Grammar [ 10/10 ] Overall, your grammars and structure are very good, no big mistakes spotted. You kept your tense really consistent and I think for some people who English isn’t their first language is very hard so well done.br /> › Vocab, Punctuation, & Spelling [ 8/10 ] Some of your vocabularies are actually quite good and your spelling is accurate as well. For punctuation is also good and consistent

Storyline [ 21/35 ]