fallacy V

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Since that night, no one has ever brought the undefined topic again, but they find themselves grow closer to each other—not close as in contact, but in other things. She responds to most of the things he asks now, not laughing but not really smiling either if he says something funny, sometimes it’s only him who’s talking but he knows she listens. She might not be a good talker, but she’s a great listener. Myungsoo’s really happy with Soojung’s positive changes, and Soojung thinks that maybe one really gets better if they open their hearts, even a bit.

It’s not even only them who notice the changes, but Jinri’s too. She realises that Soojung has been opened up, not to everyone but to Myungsoo and she’s happy about it. That’s what she has been trying to do for the past few years and even though she just can’t believe it’s Myungsoo, she’s very grateful that it’s him. It means Myungsoo will get to hang with them more often, and she gets excited just by the thought that he’s going to be there every time.

“Can you, I don’t know,” Jinri hears Myungsoo says to Soojung one day. They’re in Chemistry Lab at the moment and the three of them are in a group and they have to work on a crystallization experiment. “smile?”

Jinri laughs when Soojung shots him a glare after that.

“I’m working on this experiment and if you keep distracting me, we might fail!” she says through gritted teeth as she keeps stirring the solution while Myungsoo keeps adding the magnesium carbonate into it.

“Well, I’m sorry for being so attractive that even the cold-hearted you get distracted by my charm!” he shots back but he couldn’t help but to grin seconds later. He thinks that maybe he’s already found a new distraction as well.

Soojung remains silent after that because she knows Myungsoo always has an encounter and they’ll continue arguing is she replies him. She focuses on the experiment and Myungsoo seems to get the hint she drops and starts to focus as well, meanwhile Jinri just keeps her eyes on them both because chemistry just ain’t her thing, only pretending to do something when the teacher is looking.

An hour passes and Soojung’s done filtering the crystal from any excess solution and as she waits for her turn with Myungsoo by her side, Jinri calls him and they both look up from the filter paper in her hand.

Jinri smiles sheepishly and Soojung knows she’s up into something.

“Can you lend me a hand? The teacher asks me to clean up the apparatus and it’s kinda a lot,” Soojung notices that Jinri’s playing with her fingers which mean she’s nervous and so she nudges Myungsoo on the waist, indicating him to go. Myungsoo looks down to her for a second, sighs before he goes away.

Soojung then observes the salt under the microscope, smiling to herself because it works and the result comes out like how it’s supposed to be, and when she’s done, she looks up.

“It’s unfair that you only smiling when I’m not around.”

Soojung rolls her eyes. “Does it really matter?” she leaves to her table even before he could reply.

“Of course! It’s unfair,” Soojung hears him say right at the moment when he sits between Jinri and her.

“What’s unfair?” Jinri asks.

“That she’s only smiling when I’m not around.”

Soojung sighs. Can he stop talking about her when Jinri’s around? Jinri might not be showing any hints that she’s hurting but who knows what she’s really feeling inside? Soojung looks at Jinri when she laughs over Myungsoo’s answer, trying to define any ‘fakeness’ in her laugh, but she finds none and she really hopes that it’s true.

“Why is it so unfair?”

“Because,” he says, smiling to her as he points to his smile, “you get to see this smile so often, but I don’t get to see yours as often you get to see mine.”

He feigns hurt and she really wants to smile to him at that moment, and says that maybe, just maybe, she’d smile more often only for him to see but she’s not just in place to say that, even if she wants to. She sees Jinri nods her head to her, and she raises her eyebrows.

“Myungsoo’s right. You should smile more often.” Jinri agrees.

“See? Even Jinri says so!” he exclaims.

Soojung rolls her eyes. “She agrees because she likes you and thinks that whatever you say is right!”

“I don’t like him!”

Soojung scoffs and locks her eyes to Jinri’s, with a look that literally says, “are you kidding me?”

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neemarishima
#1
Chapter 20: Hey! I finally got the time to read this story! I have known this since it was first published in 2014 on My Lovely Girl era, our myungstal era, but just have done read it in 2017!! Oh my, I'm so lame in waiting chapters of fanfiction, sorry. But then I'm happy to read it now because this story gives me more happiness to my days. Their every moments make me smile and couldn't help but wishing for their happily ever after. And then Jongin comes as Soojung's friend. He was so cute and distracted me sometimes but the main problem then come. Why they have to be parted whyyy. I demand a good story for this sequel! But beside that, I really love how you wrote this done. The feels got me right. Thank you so much for your hardwork.
Juliana91 #2
Chapter 22: Oh....my......god....... woah im speechless..... but wow istg this is the most beautiful and awesome fic that i have evr read here in aff!! I really thank you a lot authornim i really learned a lot from this story and DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I CRIED?!?!? HAHAHAHA OHGOD! TNX AGAIN!!!! :)))))))))))
simplykrystal #3
Chapter 20: I just discovered this story today and read it all in one sitting. In my opinion, it's the best story I've read on the site. It was so easy to read, I loved the descriptions you provided, and the character development was great! It felt like I could have been there, as well. There were some really amazing moments between the two, and I love how you mixed their really sweet moments with their bickering :) This was such an amazing story and the ending was so sad, but so beautiful at the same time. It can't end like that, but I saw that there's a sequel, so I'm heading over to that right now. I hope that in the end, they get the happy ending they deserve. Thank you for the beautiful story!
shubeestar04
#4
Chapter 23: Did you say ikon and hanbin?
//rapidly clicks the link
daexnight
#5
Chapter 1: Hi hi~ i feel like this is going to be a good fic (i thibk its on of the better written ones of myungstal)

Ive found some mistakes in your writings and since im going to read it anyway, would you like me to beta it?
mdniljung #6
Chapter 22: i just found this fic and oh my god its so beautiful but HOW COULD YOU???? you shoudve put angs tag there, and here im you struck me right in the head thinking that they would have a happy ending I CRIED A LOT, btw i want to know why did you make soojung completely shut him off from her life even if myungsoo wants to try /completely not gonna let it go/ CRIES I READ THIS IN ONE GO BUT NOW im cryiing a river, i love your story, your writing style, the title and everything esp that part when she said "you know what makes you better than peter kavensky? bcs you're real" MY FEELS PUTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA im having to much feels from this fic, thank you for writing this beautiful story but still IM mad you made this turns to angst btw thank you so much once again, criess
affexions
#7
Chapter 20: ohmygod!! im crying...T_T
its so sad.. but its a amazing story:)
i cant believe it!!! i finish read this story
in just one day>_<
i really like this story^^
jheunyeon #8
Chapter 20: aww no happy ending...
That's sad
BUT YASSSSS THERE'S A SEQUEL WOOHOO
chaeminjuliette #9
Chapter 20: okay im crying because of this TT TT
i thought its a happy ending <////3
anw thank you for this wonderful fic authornim. kk
TofuScribbles
#10
Chapter 21: OMGGGGG i'm crying so much at the end TT________________TT
Why? Why it ends like that??? why soojung!?!
and to know that he waits for her for months.... that's so sad..
i hope he didn't hate her.

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
LOVE ALL THE ANGST...and of course all the good things~

so thank you for sharing this beautiful and meaningful story of yours :)
i guess i'll see you at the sequel.... ;)