fallacy XIX

fallacy
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Soojung absentmindedly walks around the school during break. Myungsoo’s off to the office for something that she doesn’t know, but she hopes he’s just fine. She knows he’s going to be fine, though. He always is. She inhales the cold air. Winter breeze is always fresher than any other season’s breeze. But she might hate this winter, and probably the upcoming winters too. If only things are easy, but apparently, they’re not.

She doesn’t look on where she’s going, just depending on her feet and only when she accidentally bumps into someone that makes a model of the solar system falls onto the floor and crashes, she looks up with a gasp. Her eyes widen in horror and she immediately kneels down and tries to put the planets at their places but it doesn’t work. “Oh my God. I’m so so so sorry!” she exclaims and that guy in front of her could only chuckle.

Of course he’d do that. He’s Jongin, always the bright Jongin that could get mad probably at nothing. Except for something like quizzes and treasure hunting.

“It’s alright,” he says. “I just have to put them back again with the glue.” He then stands up, balancing the model so that the planets won’t fall down. “And you might need to be a little more careful next time, Miss Jung.” He laughs at the end and Soojung feels relieved. Jongin’s always relax and she makes a mental note to ask him how he manages to be so calm almost all of the time. “Do you need my help?” she asks, unnecessarily scratching the back of her head. “Since you know, I’m the one who broke it.”

“You’re not eating?”

“I don’t feel like it.”

“Well, you should feel like it because you’re skinny,” he says with a grin. “But despite that, sure. Let’s do it at the library. Is that okay with you?”

Soojung nods, beaming at him. “Sure.”

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“Why are you doing this anyway?” she asks as she fixes the last planet according to its place. She looks at it and she couldn’t help but to feel amaze by his work. Everything is just perfect—from the shape, to the colours, to the looks, everything. She learns that Jongin is probably someone that’s detail in everything. She then averts her gaze to him who’s already staring down at her. He shrugs then. “My science teacher asked me to do it, and I should give him after the winter break. But instead of giving it later, I’ll give him before the break because I want to do nothing during the holidays. I mean, that’s how holidays supposed to be, isn’t it?” he grins and Soojung nods, very agree with what he says.

“Oh, have you tried solving the Rubik’s cube that I gave to you the other days?” he asks suddenly. Soojung flashes a guilty smile before she shakes her head. She reminds herself to try but she has been busy with the exams and suddenly the plane ticket came when she least expects it and Myungsoo and her father, and that’s enough for her to forget about the puzzle game. “Nope, unfortunately. But, I’ll promise I’ll try. During this winter break.” She says, promising to him even though Jongin has never asked her to promise. Jongin nods anyway.

“Why did you give it to me? Isn’t that yours?”

“Don’t worry about it. I have plenty at home. You seem very interested with the cube and I don’t see anything’s wrong to give it to you, so why not?”

“You should’ve not given it to me, you know? I’m a bad-tempered person. If I couldn’t make it after I try, I might probably throw it to the wall or something.” She says and Jongin could only laugh at that. He shakes his head afterwards.

“Don’t do that,” he says. He’s still laughing, though, imagining how furious Soojung could get if she fails and he thinks it might be scarier than how she was mad in the forest. “If I can make it, then you can too. Just don’t give up. There’re many ways to solve it on the internet. You can search for it. Or maybe we can meet and I’ll teach you. Maybe during winter break?” Jongin offers genuinely with a smile, and his smile is contagious because Soojung smiles too after a few seconds. She can’t believe she’s leaving very soon, and it’s alright if it’s months before, but now—when everything’s perfect? She bets she couldn’t leave without crying, especially when she has to leave that certain someone.

“Hello?” he waves his hand in front of her. “You’re here?”

Soojung’s startled before she’s finally back to earth from her thought. “Yeah, I’m sorry. During winter break?” she gulps. If only. She knows she might be busy during that time. Not might, though, she’s very sure she’ll be busy. “Well, I couldn’t promise you anything but—“

“Then can you at least give me your phone number or email?” he asks, taking a breath before he continues again. “And if you think that I’m actually hitting on you right now, it’s not like that, alright?” and he needs to stop because Soojung gives him a disbelief look that he has to laugh again. “

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neemarishima
#1
Chapter 20: Hey! I finally got the time to read this story! I have known this since it was first published in 2014 on My Lovely Girl era, our myungstal era, but just have done read it in 2017!! Oh my, I'm so lame in waiting chapters of fanfiction, sorry. But then I'm happy to read it now because this story gives me more happiness to my days. Their every moments make me smile and couldn't help but wishing for their happily ever after. And then Jongin comes as Soojung's friend. He was so cute and distracted me sometimes but the main problem then come. Why they have to be parted whyyy. I demand a good story for this sequel! But beside that, I really love how you wrote this done. The feels got me right. Thank you so much for your hardwork.
Juliana91 #2
Chapter 22: Oh....my......god....... woah im speechless..... but wow istg this is the most beautiful and awesome fic that i have evr read here in aff!! I really thank you a lot authornim i really learned a lot from this story and DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I CRIED?!?!? HAHAHAHA OHGOD! TNX AGAIN!!!! :)))))))))))
simplykrystal #3
Chapter 20: I just discovered this story today and read it all in one sitting. In my opinion, it's the best story I've read on the site. It was so easy to read, I loved the descriptions you provided, and the character development was great! It felt like I could have been there, as well. There were some really amazing moments between the two, and I love how you mixed their really sweet moments with their bickering :) This was such an amazing story and the ending was so sad, but so beautiful at the same time. It can't end like that, but I saw that there's a sequel, so I'm heading over to that right now. I hope that in the end, they get the happy ending they deserve. Thank you for the beautiful story!
shubeestar04
#4
Chapter 23: Did you say ikon and hanbin?
//rapidly clicks the link
daexnight
#5
Chapter 1: Hi hi~ i feel like this is going to be a good fic (i thibk its on of the better written ones of myungstal)

Ive found some mistakes in your writings and since im going to read it anyway, would you like me to beta it?
mdniljung #6
Chapter 22: i just found this fic and oh my god its so beautiful but HOW COULD YOU???? you shoudve put angs tag there, and here im you struck me right in the head thinking that they would have a happy ending I CRIED A LOT, btw i want to know why did you make soojung completely shut him off from her life even if myungsoo wants to try /completely not gonna let it go/ CRIES I READ THIS IN ONE GO BUT NOW im cryiing a river, i love your story, your writing style, the title and everything esp that part when she said "you know what makes you better than peter kavensky? bcs you're real" MY FEELS PUTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA im having to much feels from this fic, thank you for writing this beautiful story but still IM mad you made this turns to angst btw thank you so much once again, criess
affexions
#7
Chapter 20: ohmygod!! im crying...T_T
its so sad.. but its a amazing story:)
i cant believe it!!! i finish read this story
in just one day>_<
i really like this story^^
jheunyeon #8
Chapter 20: aww no happy ending...
That's sad
BUT YASSSSS THERE'S A SEQUEL WOOHOO
chaeminjuliette #9
Chapter 20: okay im crying because of this TT TT
i thought its a happy ending <////3
anw thank you for this wonderful fic authornim. kk
TofuScribbles
#10
Chapter 21: OMGGGGG i'm crying so much at the end TT________________TT
Why? Why it ends like that??? why soojung!?!
and to know that he waits for her for months.... that's so sad..
i hope he didn't hate her.

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
LOVE ALL THE ANGST...and of course all the good things~

so thank you for sharing this beautiful and meaningful story of yours :)
i guess i'll see you at the sequel.... ;)