fallacy XII

fallacy
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“I’m here.” he says. “In front of your cabin.”

Soojung’s eyes go wide, and she immediately pulls her phone away from her ear to check on the time, and it’s really one in the morning. “Are you crazy?” she’s half whispering, half yelling. She immediately sits up and then looks at Victoria who’s already in a deep sleep before she averts her gaze on the door.

She hears a chuckle through the phone and she sees a walking shadow under the small gap of the door. “Tell me that later,” he says. “Anyway,” he clears his throat and Soojung notices that he’s not walking anymore but standing still in front of the door. “Are you up for a midnight date?”

Soojung gasps, and she pinches her blushing cheeks. “What?” she asks just to make sure, but there’s a teasing tone in her voice because the way he says is so cheesy that she couldn’t help it.

Myungsoo sighs, feeling like knocking his head to the door. It’s embarrassing, seriously. “Nothing. Not a thing. I’ll get—“

Soojung thinks he’s just cute, and she has never been asked for a date before, and Myungsoo’s the guy that she loves and he’s really asking her for a date this time—even though she doesn’t know what they could do in the dark—she thinks he’s adorable, and so she cuts him off before he could even finish. “Sure,” she says. “I’d love to.”

“Really?”

“Yeah.” She answers with a smile before she gets up and walks to the wardrobe to grab a hoodie—just in case it’s cold even it’s summer.

“Are you smiling?” he asks.

Soojung’s smile dies. “Nope.”

And he hangs up. Soojung shrugs before she walks to the door, taking a glance towards Victoria before she finally opens the door, revealing a smiling Myungsoo. He wears his cap backward this time and she thinks it’s just ridiculous that he looks good in almost everything. She stands there at the door frame because her tongue gets tied out of a sudden and waits for him to speak up first.

“Are you really not smiling just now?” he asks.

Soojung shakes her head, completely denying it. “Nope.” She replies as she closes the door behind her and follows him who’s walking down the porch. They then walk, even though she knows nothing about where they’re heading to, but Myungsoo seems to know it.

“It’s weird.” He murmurs, and so she tilts her head towards him, asking him through her eyes. “It’s weird. I could tell that you were smiling back there.”

Soojung feels like smiling again because he seems to know about her that much, but instead of doing that, she rolls her eyes. “You didn’t see me, Myungsoo. You don’t have a clue how I reacted when you called.”

He shrugs. “Don’t have to, you know? I could tell from your voice.”

She doesn’t want to argue because it’s true that she smiled and so she looks to the front, and asks. “Are you sure this is alright?”

He laughs before he pulls her towards him and slings his arm around her shoulder, and even though Soojung doesn’t like to cling on people, she loves it when she’s in his arm, and so she lets him be. “We’re already out and you’re asking me if this is alright? You should ask me that before you said yes, Soojung. Don’t you think so?” he asks.

Soojung feels so stupid and so she remains silent. It’s funny how they can walk so casually as if it’s not curfew yet but she’s not afraid because he’s there. The worst thing they could ever get would be punishment, isn’t it? And the punishment she received the last time ain’t that bad.

They walk into the woods now, and even though she asks where they’re going, he keeps answering her with a ‘you’ll see’ or even just a squeeze on the shoulder. The light from the moon helps them all the way and she thinks this is just nice—to be with him, even she can’t clearly see him, walking and not really talking, it’s very nice, somehow.

They keep walking until they reach to a very big tree that has space in front of it before it slightly slopes downwards and meets with the lake. She could see the cabins across the lake and wonder whether they’re really walking that far because time seems to be passing that fast and she’s no longer on the bed but now sitting against a tree.

She loves the view very much—the lake seems calmer during the night compares to the day, and the moonlight that shines across it makes it so breathtakingly beautiful—the lilies that grow on the lake is a bonus. She thinks that is probably one of the little heavens on earth, and that she’s grateful he brings her here, because no one ever takes her to that kind of place—with no buildings, but only nature.

“How did you find this place?” she asks.

“I saw it when we looked for the fire woods,” he says. “And I still remember how you nearly killed me with the branch!”

“You’d better be grateful because I didn’t do that for real.” She replies bluntly but with a smile. “but hey, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to, you know? You were just being extra annoying that time that I couldn’t help it

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neemarishima
#1
Chapter 20: Hey! I finally got the time to read this story! I have known this since it was first published in 2014 on My Lovely Girl era, our myungstal era, but just have done read it in 2017!! Oh my, I'm so lame in waiting chapters of fanfiction, sorry. But then I'm happy to read it now because this story gives me more happiness to my days. Their every moments make me smile and couldn't help but wishing for their happily ever after. And then Jongin comes as Soojung's friend. He was so cute and distracted me sometimes but the main problem then come. Why they have to be parted whyyy. I demand a good story for this sequel! But beside that, I really love how you wrote this done. The feels got me right. Thank you so much for your hardwork.
Juliana91 #2
Chapter 22: Oh....my......god....... woah im speechless..... but wow istg this is the most beautiful and awesome fic that i have evr read here in aff!! I really thank you a lot authornim i really learned a lot from this story and DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I CRIED?!?!? HAHAHAHA OHGOD! TNX AGAIN!!!! :)))))))))))
simplykrystal #3
Chapter 20: I just discovered this story today and read it all in one sitting. In my opinion, it's the best story I've read on the site. It was so easy to read, I loved the descriptions you provided, and the character development was great! It felt like I could have been there, as well. There were some really amazing moments between the two, and I love how you mixed their really sweet moments with their bickering :) This was such an amazing story and the ending was so sad, but so beautiful at the same time. It can't end like that, but I saw that there's a sequel, so I'm heading over to that right now. I hope that in the end, they get the happy ending they deserve. Thank you for the beautiful story!
shubeestar04
#4
Chapter 23: Did you say ikon and hanbin?
//rapidly clicks the link
daexnight
#5
Chapter 1: Hi hi~ i feel like this is going to be a good fic (i thibk its on of the better written ones of myungstal)

Ive found some mistakes in your writings and since im going to read it anyway, would you like me to beta it?
mdniljung #6
Chapter 22: i just found this fic and oh my god its so beautiful but HOW COULD YOU???? you shoudve put angs tag there, and here im you struck me right in the head thinking that they would have a happy ending I CRIED A LOT, btw i want to know why did you make soojung completely shut him off from her life even if myungsoo wants to try /completely not gonna let it go/ CRIES I READ THIS IN ONE GO BUT NOW im cryiing a river, i love your story, your writing style, the title and everything esp that part when she said "you know what makes you better than peter kavensky? bcs you're real" MY FEELS PUTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA im having to much feels from this fic, thank you for writing this beautiful story but still IM mad you made this turns to angst btw thank you so much once again, criess
affexions
#7
Chapter 20: ohmygod!! im crying...T_T
its so sad.. but its a amazing story:)
i cant believe it!!! i finish read this story
in just one day>_<
i really like this story^^
jheunyeon #8
Chapter 20: aww no happy ending...
That's sad
BUT YASSSSS THERE'S A SEQUEL WOOHOO
chaeminjuliette #9
Chapter 20: okay im crying because of this TT TT
i thought its a happy ending <////3
anw thank you for this wonderful fic authornim. kk
TofuScribbles
#10
Chapter 21: OMGGGGG i'm crying so much at the end TT________________TT
Why? Why it ends like that??? why soojung!?!
and to know that he waits for her for months.... that's so sad..
i hope he didn't hate her.

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
LOVE ALL THE ANGST...and of course all the good things~

so thank you for sharing this beautiful and meaningful story of yours :)
i guess i'll see you at the sequel.... ;)