Moving on

Golden Curse
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Narrator's pov:

 

"I heard that prince's Jinki's first concubine died!" a servant whispered loudly to another one as they walked through the long hallways of the palace.

"There have been so may death lately, who'll be the next one?" the servant asked scared, getting goosebumps by just thinking that she might be the next target of whoever this murderer could be.

"This is not a place of gossip!"

The servant snapped their heads to the right and quickly bowed their heads, apologizing numerous times.

"Continue working and don't let me hear anything about this out of your mouths again." princess Yiseul scolded the two maids, the two still young woman, bowing their heads again ebfore quickly leaving, afraid that they might anger princess yiseul even more.

The princess' stern expression faltered as hurt was replacing it, her eyes sad and a bit teary, trying to walk away again, pretending that nothing was wrong, but she couldn't fool herself.

She was sad, just like her brothers and especially her younger brother, Jinki.

"Princess, you have to hurry." her personal servant ushered the royal princess, making her nod and follow her servant quickly, taking in deep breaths, trying to get blink the almost escaping tears away.

 

Jinki looked in front of him with empty eyes, not feeling the urge to do anything at all.

It had been like this ever since Riah died in his arms, right in front of him killed.

Everything that happend stillstayed a mystery to him, but he knew that Riah was no longer. She died was what the doctor said.

He said it was weird as her body was in perfect health, and that the wound shouldn't have been fatal as the stab missed her heart and important organs. 

But just like bad luck, Riah passed away.

Biting his lips harshly, drawing out blood, he took in a deep breath through his nose, tears rolling down his cheeks.

Jinki didn't even hear the knock on the door and it was only when Hyuk touched his shoulders did the prince look at his servant, again with those empty eyes.

Hyuk looked at his prince with worry.

He had no idea what literally happend as he hadn't been there by his side when everything happend and the prince didn't tell him anything either, just like his royal brothers that seemed like they lost their way of speech.

"Your royal brothers, prince Jonghyun and prince Minho are here to visit you, your highness." Hyuk said, never losing his polite speech even though the prince didn't even react anymore. No more annoying glares and curses under his breath, nothing at all.

Like an empty shell.

Jinki looked away from hyuk, not uttering one word, making the servant sigh mentally, walking back to the door and letting the younger brothers of Jinki in his room.

"Please leave us." Minho ordered Hyuk who complied without fighting back, knowing that there was nothing to worry about with the prince being like this and that maybe hazving alone time with his brothers would pull prince Jinki back together and make him sane again.

Jonghyun walked to Jinki who was sitting on his desk chair, spacing out in front of him.

"Jinki, look at me..." Jonghyun pleaded but the prince showed no reaction at all, only blinking his eyes and breathing in and out.

"Brother, this is enough, you've been like this for two weeks already!" Minho hissed, angry that his older brother was becoming like a mute empty shell and angry for everything that had happend, because even he was hurt by Riah's loss.

Even by Minho's yelling, Jinki didn't reat, Jonghyun having enough of this.

He raise dhis hand and punched Jinki in the face, shocking Minho as he never thoguht a flirter and gentleman like jonghyun would punch someone, slap maybe, but not punch, especially not so hard.

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aurorabby #1
Chapter 24: Awwww that was beautiful thank you ^^
bluestormysky
#2
Chapter 24: great one ^^
WinterRose
#3
Chapter 24: Yay! Gosh, thank goodness for the ending :D Thank you for the wonderful story.
sweaty #4
Chapter 24: that was cute
ok if feel better
i feel so devastated w o a happy ending !
sweaty #5
Chapter 22: man cmon i really was not expecting that chracter death..... that was a great though
great usage of dramatic irnoy and foreshadowing
sweaty #6
Chapter 21: truly impressive... whne i first read this i was like wow ok a tangle rip off, but i'll give it chance
your writing style had no sarnghaes or oppas or arrasso or bogoshiphold or whatevr so i wa slike yea i can read this
your writing is exteremly neat and for the most part simple
the design of this story however completely contrasted the simplicity of your writing
was no expecting this sub plot and umm wow ok ^____^ gonna cont, reading
DreamSparkStar #7
Chapter 24: Ahhh so so SO GOOD! Just ahgafjd;asg bea;jfsahvajs. *spazzes happily*
Thank you for writing this sweet, amazing, fantastic, (bunch more adjectives) story~~~! ^^ <3
PerfectlyImperfectxX #8
Chapter 24: I cried on every chapter that I missed to the end. XD This story is really good. The ending is also just asdghklbfh - TTuTT omfg. The feels. I'll be looking forward to your new story, author-nim! :D
sabonkey213 #9
Chapter 24: The ending~! Golden Curse was so good! I loved it woooo <3
I'm so glad that Riah was revived and she found Jinki! It's so lovely, I almost cried hahaha :"")
The Jinki/Riah feels were getting to me xD
Awesome job! Keep doing what you're doing, because you're fantastic <3 <3
Poptart180 #10
Chapter 24: ESAELPThe way you ended it was awesome!!! Its like a fairytale that will be remembered forever!!! Ugh make it a book and send it to me PLEASE??????????????? Lol calm down self calm down lol anywhos thank you for the lovely story/update!