Cursed

Golden Curse
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Narrator's pov:

 

"Isn't it like that...? Kibum...." Riah grinned wickedly, making the falcon bird cry out loudly.

The falcon looked at Riah who smirked, her lips curled up into onse side as she kept brushing her hair, slowly letting it grow longer.

"I didn't... betray you..." it said, making the prince's gasp and make Jinki even more confused.

It was all real what he saw that night and he really did hear the bird talk.

Riah scoffed as she twirled a bit fo hair around her fingers, curling it between them.

"If you didn't betray me this time, you still did before." Riah hissed as the bird's head lowered.

"Leave him alone." Gohee hissed and ran to her, succeeding in cutting another piece of hair, making her younger once again.

"You annoying old hag!" Riah growled, touching her hair that was still long but with uneven cuts here and there.

"If I'm cursed to live this life because of you..." Gohee started, startling Jinki who tried to puzzle everything into one piece. "Then I'll make sure that you won't come out when I'm still alive." 

Riah looked at Gohee and scoffed loudly, making the falcon cry loudly.

"Shut up Kibum! If it wasn't because of you this wouldn't have happend either! And that hag is taking all my life away, those I collected to sincerely!" Riah hissed, her eyes icy cold.

 

 

*Flash backs*

-Many many years ago-

 

"Kibum!"

The said boy lifted his head up and looked around, finding his best friend running to him while she waved her hands in the air.

"Rapunzel!" Kibum grinned, waving his hands back as well.

A young girl with long golden colored hair ran to him, making sure she didn't trip because of the stones on the ground.

"What are you doing here?" Kibum asked curiously as he made some place for the girl to sit at.

"I was bored so I thought I'll look for you. You're still waiting for some fish?" Rapunzel asked, her smile beautiful and dazzlingly, making Kibum smile brightly as well.

The two have been best friends since they were kids. Rapunzel often followed Kibum and he in turn took great care of her who had only her sick mother at home.

"Yup, the fish are a bit lazy today or they're not hungry." Kibum shrugged and played with some small pebbles on the ground.

"I think they know that you're going to catch them and then eat them up." Rapunzel laughed, making Kibum widen his eyes and place his index finger in front of his lips.

"Shhh! Don't say that so loud! The fish can understand and hear you, what if they decide to suddenly all go away, then we'll have nothing to eat anymore." Kibum gasped, making Rapunzel chuckle.

Kibum liked hearing Rapunzel laugh, it was full innocence and it was pretty.

Ever since Rapunzel's dad passed away and her mother got sick, he felt the responsibilty to take care of the girl. He looked after her like she was his own blood related sister.

They spended a lot of time together and Kibum even took care of Rapunzel's mother who was forever thankful.

Till one day when the two got a bit older, they met someone.

It was anot

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aurorabby #1
Chapter 24: Awwww that was beautiful thank you ^^
bluestormysky
#2
Chapter 24: great one ^^
WinterRose
#3
Chapter 24: Yay! Gosh, thank goodness for the ending :D Thank you for the wonderful story.
sweaty #4
Chapter 24: that was cute
ok if feel better
i feel so devastated w o a happy ending !
sweaty #5
Chapter 22: man cmon i really was not expecting that chracter death..... that was a great though
great usage of dramatic irnoy and foreshadowing
sweaty #6
Chapter 21: truly impressive... whne i first read this i was like wow ok a tangle rip off, but i'll give it chance
your writing style had no sarnghaes or oppas or arrasso or bogoshiphold or whatevr so i wa slike yea i can read this
your writing is exteremly neat and for the most part simple
the design of this story however completely contrasted the simplicity of your writing
was no expecting this sub plot and umm wow ok ^____^ gonna cont, reading
DreamSparkStar #7
Chapter 24: Ahhh so so SO GOOD! Just ahgafjd;asg bea;jfsahvajs. *spazzes happily*
Thank you for writing this sweet, amazing, fantastic, (bunch more adjectives) story~~~! ^^ <3
PerfectlyImperfectxX #8
Chapter 24: I cried on every chapter that I missed to the end. XD This story is really good. The ending is also just asdghklbfh - TTuTT omfg. The feels. I'll be looking forward to your new story, author-nim! :D
sabonkey213 #9
Chapter 24: The ending~! Golden Curse was so good! I loved it woooo <3
I'm so glad that Riah was revived and she found Jinki! It's so lovely, I almost cried hahaha :"")
The Jinki/Riah feels were getting to me xD
Awesome job! Keep doing what you're doing, because you're fantastic <3 <3
Poptart180 #10
Chapter 24: ESAELPThe way you ended it was awesome!!! Its like a fairytale that will be remembered forever!!! Ugh make it a book and send it to me PLEASE??????????????? Lol calm down self calm down lol anywhos thank you for the lovely story/update!