Prologue

Beautiful Perfect People

Luhan doesn’t know much about the Great War, he’d stopped paying attention to retelling after retelling of the story when he was young. He just knows it started in 2100 and lasted fifty years. He doesn’t know if it was a territorial dispute that caused it, or if it might have been another country trying to assert It’s dominance. He just knows that it set the foundation for Caelum. It was the after effects of the Great War that had country and person united under one government and the ones that hadn’t were either wiped out or were too insignificant to care about.

Luhan was born in 2175, 25 years after the war ended. His father was a war veteran, he’d joined the last efforts when he was 16 and helped Caelum become the country Luhan knew well.

Perfection, the gene, which engineers had tried to create in time with the war to make superior soldiers, was completed for human testing in the year Luhan was born. The first prototype, the answer to gene evolution had finally been finished.  It had promised to strengthen immune systems, senses, and the mind’s abilities. The first users, Luhan and the other children whose mothers died to give them such abilities were lauded. They were child prodigies until mid-2176 when a more stable Perfection gene came out and nearly every single person, except for the poor, got themselves injected with the gene.

In 2181, six years after the first prototype was released, the Imperfect genocide occured. The Great Ruler accused the Imperfects, the children and adults without the Perfect gene, of being against the state. Half of Luhan’s classmates stopped going to school, and on the news there were images of men women and children being rounded up, handcuffs around their wrists, most sick and fragile looking.

They were animals, rebels against the order, and a danger to the foundation of man. They were monsters. Luhan remembers the fights, the riots that began and continued until over 3/4 of the world’s Imperfects were either dead or imprisoned.

The remaining 25% begun to hide in the cracks of the larger cities like vermin. They had no rights regarding them, nothing that kept them safe from abuse and thus the reason why most of the Red-light districts were filled with them.

The others were rebels, Red Devils, is what the media called them, Luhan never knew if that was their official name. He does remember watching a public execution of a high member on television before.

He remembers the words spilling from the gruff man’s lips, their slogan or chant, or whatever it was had scared 12 year old Luhan at the time. He’d watched as the bearded man glared straight into the cameras, arms behind his back as the silver metal of the handcuffs cut into his thick wrists. He stood beside a noose, and then as he’d begun to speak the executioner hung the noose around his neck.

The cameraman of the channel Luhan was watching zoomed in so that Luhan could get a good look at the guy, with grey-green narrowed eyes, and spit clinging to his lips as he shouted to the crowd. He’d dropped then, after his speech, and Luhan continued to watch as the man’s body convulsed his face turning a bright red and his eyes watering from the pain. Eventually he saw the light leave the man’s eyes, saw the way his body sagged into itself as he remained swaying, lifelessly.

More than the image of the death, the words the man spoke was the thing that kept him up with nightmares, the thing that brought a fire into his heart for his remaining years.

We are the resistance, the rebels, the spirits of the burned books, and parents of dead children. We are the marginalized society, the Imperfects, and we won’t stop till perfection is dead. We won’t quit till the sky is red and ripe, and the blood of our oppressors runs through the city streets.



This is meant to give you some background on the society Luhan is living in.

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going on another hiatus. Sorry guys I just really want to finish up the last chaps before I post again. Will be back in July

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carmie96
#1
Chapter 45: Hi there.. I just finished reading you entire fic
I actually started reading it on achiveofyourown
And finished reading it here (forgot you said you also had it here in fanfics)
I just want to say this was a real work of art. This can be an actual book. No joke. Its something I would go out and buy
I've actually been going to through a few things and reading your story helped me a lot dealing with my life problems getting an amazing distraction for a little bit and I actually stopped reading for a week or so because I didn't want to finish it.
This story kind of hit me hard in the feels now that's over
I kind of stayed in bed for like an hour thinking of what could have happened once Luhan left like... There was no closure and my heart can't take xiuhan having no happy ending T.T
But anyway I loved the storyline how it takes place in the future (spacy future nerd enthusiast here) And adding the forbidden love of 2 truly different people. It makes me wonder where the rest of the world is... Like is the Perfect Society so closed off they know nothing of the the rest of the world. Which adds to my mini theory where Minseok goes he goes off a different country to see how the world really is and if Luhan does become great ruler hears from Minseok of how the rest of the world is actually functioning...
Okay I rambled off a bit too much with my thoughts but anyway I really enjoyed this story. And it's definitely one of my favorites of all time. If you ever write more story's I'll definitely be on the look out for them
negin_eunhae_ #2
Chapter 44: Ohhhh Im a fan of sad endings myself but I really wanted them to get together for this one! I cant imagine luhan getting married :(
nicolebaozi #3
Chapter 45: Hello! I have actually read your fic a long time ago.....i really love the plot and everything i was even worried if you’d be able to finish the fic despite your hiatus bec it would be too bad if you werent able to since i reallllllly love the fic! And now you did it!!it’s complete! The ending gave me a heartache..even though you may be unsure of making a sequel id still be hopeful that youd make one. Thankyou so much for the VERY wonderful read!im glad that you shipped xiuhan even if we dont get much xiuhan nowadays that ship will always be one of the best and thankyou for contributing to the xiuhan community with your fic<3
qxcqxc #4
AAHH finally its completed!! I'm gonna reread this from the start when I'm free.. Thank you so much author!
exo9977 #5
Chapter 43: Oooh this story is getting good :)
exo9977 #6
Chapter 41: I wonder how minseok is going to feel when luhan is leaving him
exo9977 #7
Chapter 40: Please update fast I want to know the second reason. I bet the second reason is about xiumin.
m_riefkohl
#8
Chapter 40: No! Omg! I'm trying to figure it out but I'm lost! ugh.... But interesting chapter tho *scratches chin" I keep saying it but it's true poor Lu he can't get a break. Stay strong Lu. Thanks for the update~! ^^
Exofan29 #9
Chapter 39: I wonder where yixing is taking luhan at