Chapter 20: Thank you so much for the review :)

Characters: Oc, Chanyeol

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/610351/after-earth-action-adventure-apocalypse-romance-exo-chanyeol-ocgirl

No. of chapters: 9

Preferred Reviewer: (choose one that is free please) Anyone ^^

Is english your first language? no, but it is fine - don't sugarcoat anything :)

What you think you need improving on(so we can look more closely at that): characterization

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I know you guys are busy, so I'll be waiting patiently :)

 

Are you accepting reviews at the moment? I know it says busy, but are you?

Chapter 2: I know I requested a review, but I would like to cancel it now. ^^ I hope to request once I get more chapters in, that's why. But, thank you anyways; I hope that's alright. ;-; I upvoted too! ^^;

Chapter 17: First of all, thank you soo much for the review! I was a bit nervous when I saw that my review was ready, but wow I am soo blown away by your kind words!
I've fixed all the things you've pointed out - it's so nice to have a fresh eye read over the story.

Again, thank you so much. I'll try my best to continue to write this fic in the best way that I can :)

Thanks for the review :D English is my first language though....

Chapter 14: picked up the review! Thanks for all the structural feedback! I'll keep working at that :) and yes, I am well known for having bad grammar and switching tenses all the time. Thanks for making me more aware of that. I'll be sure to upvote XD

Characters: EXO Kai, EXO Kris OCs

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/659609/ludos-highschool-exo-kai-kris-teenlove

No. of chapters: So far, 30.

Preferred Reviewer: (choose one that is free please) : junmash but I don't mind, if any other reviewer would want to do it ;)

Is english your first language?: No, but you can go hard on me in term of language and grammar

What you think you need improving on(so we can look more closely at that): The rationality of action taken by each characters in the fiction.

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Thanks for doing this, have a good day! :)

Characters: Mun Kyon Dae (OC), EXO, Kim Su Min (OC)

Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/692500/snow-turns-into-rain-if-melted-by-a-flame-angst-drama-romance-exo-contestentry-ocstory

No. of chapters: 1 (prologue) so far

Preferred Reviewer: _junmash

Is english your first language? Yes.

What you think you need improving on: I think I need improving in general - From writing skill to characterization and flow. Most especially flow and smoothness of the story.

Password: rainbow poop. (lol xD)

Thank you so much for doing my review. :) I really appreciate it. :D