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THE REVIEW SHOP

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'We give reviews, plain and easy.'

 

Hello, potential customers. This is THE Review Shop, and we are proud to give you reliable, honest reviews. 

 

 

How we operate.

We accept requests by taking comments below. Just fill in the form...

Characters:

Story Link:

No. of chapters:

Preferred Reviewer: (choose one that is free please)

Is english your first language?

What you think you need improving on(so we can look more closely at that):

Password:

 

 

Rules:

1.No bashing (though I know you won't:))

2.Your story must at least have four chapters

3.Please link your review into your story

4.Subscribe (you can unsubscribe later)

6.Comment when you recieve your review.

5.Upvotes are appreciated^^

6.Password: Rainbow poop

 

 

How we judge /100 :

Plot /20

Is it original? Captivating? Too cliche? Boring?

Characters /20

Are the characters 3D? Do they have flaws as well as strenghts? Do they develop and change over time? Are they too fake?

Flow /15

This concerns how fast/slow the story is paced.Is is not moving? Too trivial? Unneccesary chunks? Or is it too fast, breezing over the details?

Writing skill /30

If english isn't your first language, I will be more lenient.

This section concerns your grammar too. How is the fluidness of your writing? Is it descriptive enough, is the language intresting?

 Description/Forward /5  Title /5

Does it catch my eye?

If I don't find any of these satisfactory, I could try write you one if you want.(optional)

 First impression /5

Your very first chapter, paragraph is extremely important. Is it impactful enough to leave people yearning for more?

 

 

Hall Of Fame

If your story recieves the score of 80 and above, welcome to the hall of fame! Your story will be featured.

Good luck!

 

 

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heart_and_seoul, your review has been posted
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heart_and_seoul #1
Chapter 20: Thank you so much for the review :)
heart_and_seoul #2
Characters: Oc, Chanyeol

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/610351/after-earth-action-adventure-apocalypse-romance-exo-chanyeol-ocgirl

No. of chapters: 9

Preferred Reviewer: (choose one that is free please) Anyone ^^

Is english your first language? no, but it is fine - don't sugarcoat anything :)

What you think you need improving on(so we can look more closely at that): characterization

Password: rainbow poop

I know you guys are busy, so I'll be waiting patiently :)

 
heart_and_seoul #3
Are you accepting reviews at the moment? I know it says busy, but are you?
Arisa_Ameiru #4
Chapter 2: I know I requested a review, but I would like to cancel it now. ^^ I hope to request once I get more chapters in, that's why. But, thank you anyways; I hope that's alright. ;-; I upvoted too! ^^;
MamaShrimp #5
Chapter 17: First of all, thank you soo much for the review! I was a bit nervous when I saw that my review was ready, but wow I am soo blown away by your kind words!
I've fixed all the things you've pointed out - it's so nice to have a fresh eye read over the story.

Again, thank you so much. I'll try my best to continue to write this fic in the best way that I can :)
TheScribbler #6
Thanks for the review :D English is my first language though....
NorthMelon #7
Chapter 14: picked up the review! Thanks for all the structural feedback! I'll keep working at that :) and yes, I am well known for having bad grammar and switching tenses all the time. Thanks for making me more aware of that. I'll be sure to upvote XD
thebaroness #8
Characters: EXO Kai, EXO Kris OCs

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/659609/ludos-highschool-exo-kai-kris-teenlove

No. of chapters: So far, 30.

Preferred Reviewer: (choose one that is free please) : junmash but I don't mind, if any other reviewer would want to do it ;)

Is english your first language?: No, but you can go hard on me in term of language and grammar

What you think you need improving on(so we can look more closely at that): The rationality of action taken by each characters in the fiction.

Password: Rainbow poop



Thanks for doing this, have a good day! :)
Arisa_Ameiru #9
Characters: Mun Kyon Dae (OC), EXO, Kim Su Min (OC)

Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/692500/snow-turns-into-rain-if-melted-by-a-flame-angst-drama-romance-exo-contestentry-ocstory

No. of chapters: 1 (prologue) so far

Preferred Reviewer: _junmash

Is english your first language? Yes.

What you think you need improving on: I think I need improving in general - From writing skill to characterization and flow. Most especially flow and smoothness of the story.

Password: rainbow poop. (lol xD)

Thank you so much for doing my review. :) I really appreciate it. :D
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