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01. InvisiNinja

Bias: EXO

Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/827120

Strictness: 8.5/10

Emphasises on: Writing skill and Characters. And if everything flows nicely.

Time: Usually 2-3 days if on a weekend and if there's only one story. Might take up 5-7 days if busy. And more if even busier. 0.o

Status: {Free/Busy}

 

02.GRAzieO_o

Bias: EXO

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/689034/goodbye-angst-dbsk-drama-romance-shinee-exo

Strictness: 9.5/10

Emphasises on: Grammar, Plot, First Impression, Description

Time: 1-2 days if the story deosn't exceed 5 chapters.

Status: {Free/Busy}

 

03.wowsuga

Bias: BTS, EXO, WINNER

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/701058/alone-on-this-night-bts-bangtanboys-bangtan-jungkook-taehyung-taekook

Strictness: 9/10

Emphasises on: Grammar, punctuation, capitalization, sentence structure, vocabulary. I really like to focus on how to make the story flow easier and make sure it's fun and easy to read.

Time: Definitely no longer than a week, will rush if needed.

Status: {Free/Busy}

 

 

04._junmash

Bias: Suho

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/570233

Strictness: 8/10

Emphasises on: Characterization and writing skill.

Time: 2 days maximum for a one-shot, a week maximum for a short story, and about 2 weeks if it's more than 10 chapters.

Status: {Free/Busy}

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heart_and_seoul #1
Chapter 20: Thank you so much for the review :)
heart_and_seoul #2
Characters: Oc, Chanyeol

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/610351/after-earth-action-adventure-apocalypse-romance-exo-chanyeol-ocgirl

No. of chapters: 9

Preferred Reviewer: (choose one that is free please) Anyone ^^

Is english your first language? no, but it is fine - don't sugarcoat anything :)

What you think you need improving on(so we can look more closely at that): characterization

Password: rainbow poop

I know you guys are busy, so I'll be waiting patiently :)

 
heart_and_seoul #3
Are you accepting reviews at the moment? I know it says busy, but are you?
Arisa_Ameiru #4
Chapter 2: I know I requested a review, but I would like to cancel it now. ^^ I hope to request once I get more chapters in, that's why. But, thank you anyways; I hope that's alright. ;-; I upvoted too! ^^;
MamaShrimp #5
Chapter 17: First of all, thank you soo much for the review! I was a bit nervous when I saw that my review was ready, but wow I am soo blown away by your kind words!
I've fixed all the things you've pointed out - it's so nice to have a fresh eye read over the story.

Again, thank you so much. I'll try my best to continue to write this fic in the best way that I can :)
TheScribbler #6
Thanks for the review :D English is my first language though....
NorthMelon #7
Chapter 14: picked up the review! Thanks for all the structural feedback! I'll keep working at that :) and yes, I am well known for having bad grammar and switching tenses all the time. Thanks for making me more aware of that. I'll be sure to upvote XD
thebaroness #8
Characters: EXO Kai, EXO Kris OCs

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/659609/ludos-highschool-exo-kai-kris-teenlove

No. of chapters: So far, 30.

Preferred Reviewer: (choose one that is free please) : junmash but I don't mind, if any other reviewer would want to do it ;)

Is english your first language?: No, but you can go hard on me in term of language and grammar

What you think you need improving on(so we can look more closely at that): The rationality of action taken by each characters in the fiction.

Password: Rainbow poop



Thanks for doing this, have a good day! :)
Arisa_Ameiru #9
Characters: Mun Kyon Dae (OC), EXO, Kim Su Min (OC)

Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/692500/snow-turns-into-rain-if-melted-by-a-flame-angst-drama-romance-exo-contestentry-ocstory

No. of chapters: 1 (prologue) so far

Preferred Reviewer: _junmash

Is english your first language? Yes.

What you think you need improving on: I think I need improving in general - From writing skill to characterization and flow. Most especially flow and smoothness of the story.

Password: rainbow poop. (lol xD)

Thank you so much for doing my review. :) I really appreciate it. :D
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