Baby Exo Oneshots

Close Your Eyes

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Edited~ I took out a few chapters that I thought were unnecessary and i've contacted a few review shops. Thankyou for reading :)

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michixjd
#1
Chapter 17: I'm soooo in love with this! After reading the first chapter, I knew I was going to love this story. It's so beautiful and I can't explain how much I loved their proposal, they were just so simple yet so lovely and cute and yeah... I just can't!! In other fanfics they always make such a big thing of it, but you wrote it like I always imagined and wished it to be for me one day. Simple, but with love, haha~. Thank you so much for writing this, you did a perfect job, I rly can't say one bad thing about this! <33
IDCjustwannaread1999 #2
Chapter 17: I never read tragedy but I came upon this by accident and I just read the 9th chapter without thinking... Don't even know how... I cried... Went back to read the whole story... And Cried some more... Damn I hate u... But u also love u for writing this... Write happy Sulay to make it up to me...^•^
mayangel
#3
Chapter 17: This was really good! I think I started reading this back in late May, but I deleted my last account, so I couldn't find this fanfic for some time. I spent so much time looking for it, and I'm so glad I was able to read this again!
I really liked the way you developed Suho and Lay's friendship and eventual romance. (The way they found each other again made me squeal.) The ending was sad, but at the same time, it was really beautiful, and the way you repeated the phrase "Close your eyes" was just wow.
(I'm kind of confused about Hunhan's ending. I thought they would end up together since Luhan proposed, but I guess they didn't?) And the Taoris at the end was really cute!
Anyway, thank you so much for writing this fic, and I'm so glad I was able to find it again.
2Kim_JongTeo #4
Chapter 17: This fanfic took my breath away. It was so well written, and I had that feeling as if I was watching a sad romantic movie. I don't know how many tissue I used but your writing makes me feel like "wow". So nice~.... I usually don't read tragedy but this was so beautiful and meaningful. Great job!!!
byunover
#5
Chapter 17: I loved this!!!!! Huhuhuhuhu, it would be a miracle if my soulmate and i could have what sulay had!"
KPOPIsBest56 #6
Chapter 17: Omg why do I cry so much when reading this?!?! It's so sad but happy I read the whole thing in like three hours!! Your such a good author I love your writing!!! God I'm still crying like a two year old ㅋㅋ seriously though when yixing passed away I had to leave the room so I didn't wake up my sister.
JonesyKyah
#7
Chapter 17: No joke, I cried like an infant during that last two or three chapters.
aillis
#8
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teuresheu
#9
Chapter 17: All I have to say.......... is that I can't stop sobbing. Looks like I'll be waking up with really puffy eyes tomorrow.
Chinatsumi #10
I've just finished reading this story and in the end of it I was crying like a little girl.
It really, really touched me the way story is written. It's full of wonderful feelings, adorable and really warm.
Author-nim, thank you for the story and keep writing, you're amazing! ^-^