Good Girl, Bad

Author : Miro-chan

Genre : Romance | Angst | Drama | Cheating

Status : On-going

Title (10/10)

Your title is good work. It really fits with this kind of story, and it reflexes each person's personality without giving too much information about the story. Therefore, I like that title, it kind of inspired me and... keep on with the good titles ^-^

Description/Foreword (8/10)

So... First of all, I like your description and foreword, you have a really strong english language! :D You explained about the story, and I'm sure the readers will get really excited about it... But it doesn't give ANY information about the story, and not all people are like me. Maybe they won't be too excited about it... :/ Good job though :)

Grammar/Language (19.5/20)

I kept reading the chapters over and over again but I never found anything wrong with it. Your grammar and language are both perfect. Even some sentences you used made me write them on a small notebook to keep remembering them. I love reading and you made me want to read and devellop my language even more :D I hope you could keep going on with your writing and everything... I honestly enjoyed reading your story... ^^

Characters (19/20)

There isn't much information about the characters because you have just started writing your story, but the girl's character is a little visible. She has pride and she wants to forget about the past, but then this particular person from the past bumps into her and... she's kind of frustrated and exhausted because she is clearly trying to forget about him... I gotta say, it's a great job, regarding that it's the first chapter ^^

Originality/Storyline (19/20)

I don't know about the story line yet, or the plot... but it started off well. I understand that you just started with your story but you could've just gave more information about this fanfiction in the description or foreword as I said earlier :) Anyway, it's a great job till now.

Overall (75.5/80)

Sorry if I'm a bit late :) Your story is great, and don't give up on writing it... I believe you could have a wonderful future in writing. Hehe... :D Please credit our shop...

-Danielle