Coma

Taking You Back

Though Baekhyun ought to wake up in somewhere white , instead he woke up in a dark cold room. He should be dead, but instict told him he wasn't as there's pipes and machines attached all over his body . A machine that tells him his heart is still beating , and a mask which helps him to breath better . ' Where am I ? ' he thought himself . He tried to get up but the next second , he fall back again.  It hurts so bad , as if somone is hitting his head like a jack-hammer. He looked around the room . It's cold and unplesent , he hates it . He can smell iron from the rust steel door . A nightstand beside him with a monitor on top . Above him is a small window but was sealed with rods . Obviously he wasn't in the hospital . This place somehow looks like a jail . 

“Hey, feeling better ?" Baekhyun made a whimper as he didn't notice there's a person beside him.

Baekhyun couldn’t spoke , he had no energy to , all his energy were drained out . He stares at the man with white.

“ I know what are you going to ask , but again , you’re not allowed to speak . You’re not fully recover." he advises.

“ He’s awake ? “ there's another guy peek from the door. He got blonde hair , big eyes and quite a plum lips .

“ Yeah , just . You can come in if you wanted to .“ the man told him and he did. He is quiet handsome , but he got a strong Busan accent .

“ Um … Hi ? “ his greeting was awkward but Baekhyun just blink his eyes .

“ See , told you he’s cute . “  the man who wears white told his friend and the boy chuckle. “Oh , by the way , I’m Young Jae .“ he turns abck to curious Baekhyun .

“ My name is Dae Hyun . I heard yours’ Baekhyun , right ? “

Baekhyun nod . Strangly he felt comfortable with these two though they were his kidnapper. But he think too soon , it was three . Another boy peeked through the door , though he was soon found out by Young Jae .

“ Tomato, I know you’re there , come out . “

The boy had bubble gum hair , pink and fluffy , he was about 13 years or above . Baekhyun smile a little and it freaked them out . Baekhyun always was fond to cute and little stuff . Plushies , animals and children. They were angels in his eyes .

“ I’m Zelo and I love tomato . I’m bored , so I’m here to play . “ what a weird way to introduce himself , but still cute .

“ Sorry if he freak you out . He’s a weird kid . “ Dae Hyun told .

Baekhyun disagree , he thinks Zelo is cute and had already liked this fluff of ball . He shook his head and sign Zelo to come closer . Zelo in the other hand was happy , as if he found a playmate . He skiped towards Baekhyun and sat on the corner of his bed , pedaling his feet and look all excited . His cuteness made Baekhyun giggle , not too loud but audible .

Baekhyun reach his hand to touch boy’s hair . Boy got the message and leans closer .  As expected , Zelo’s hair is soft , smooth and fluffy , just like a baby’s .

 

“ Hehehe … Hyung , can I call hyung Baekhyun-hyung ? “ Zelo asked cutely

 

*Beep … … Beep … … *

 

“ Hyung … Baekhyun-hyung … Baek … Yah ! “

“ What’s that about Chan , my ear’s gonna burst !  “

“ I love you “ and he showed Baek his goffy smile .

 

... ...

 

“ Baekhyun-hyung , you have to get well soon , so we can play together . “ Zelo said with a pout .

 

*Beep … Beep *

 

“ Baek … hurry up and get well , school’s no fun without you … “ 

“ Heal me , so we can go to school together again . “

And the silly boy did , he kiss the day light out of him , till the next day , idiot tree joined his Koala in bed , sick .

 

... ...

 

 

“ Hyung …. Baekhyun-hyung , are you okay ? “ Zelo asked worried Baekhyun looked pale and eyes were glassy . Young Jae tensed and start checking on him .

 

*Beep ..Beep .Beep*

 

Baekhyun whimpered and tears start streaming down from his crystal clear eyes .

Zelo looked at the latter with a frown while Young Jae and Dae Hyun sigh heavily and shook their heads .

 

 

“ those sissy tears away, there’s more you must handle.“ the leader and Him Chan poped out of nowhere and told Baekhyun .

“ Yong Guk, he needs privacy.“ Dae Hyun proteases.

“ I—it’s o-..okay, talk … “ Baekhyun said weakly , despite the pain is tearing him apart .

The leader praised with a smrik while his right-hand man put a laptop in front of Baekhyun . “ Don’t talk, type . “ he demanded .

“Now, let's get to business.“ Yong Guk announce and he sat on the couch.“ In short," he stare at the sick boy in the eye.

 

 

 

"You're dead." 

 

 

The man pull the trigger and aim at the boy's head.

 

 

 

*BANG*

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Exofanland #1
Chapter 23: Hold on , you updated.Hahahahah this is the best day of my life. I'm not even ashamed with the amount of comments I made. I'm glad yre back. Please keep updating so I don have to make up an endin for this story in my head...imaginally
Exofanland #2
Chapter 22: By now, you can also see that I really love your story and that I have left many comments, asking you for an update. But of course, the story were so slowly updated that it's coming to a hiatus and then to a complete stop. For a along while, I was very disappointed that the story doesn't have an ending and so for all that time, I've been thinking whether I should ask your permission, to complete this story. I hesitated before because I was inexperience and you said you would continue the story. But now it different. I want to ask- no, beg you to give me your permission to complete this story for you. Of course, I will mention you as the original author and I won't change any of your words. I just want to end this story for you. Even though it might not be now, since I still have to finish my other stories, But for sure, I will start it as soon as possible. I am asking for your permission now because I'm afraid you would delete your story along with your account later on. I am asking your permission now, so that even when you are gone, I'll still have your permission to complete this story. I don't this to be a copy right problem. I simply admire your work and is will to share your master piece to other readers.

If you see this message at all, then please give me your blessing or at least give me some kind of respond. In the near future, if you are to see your story under my name, just know that I am not stealing, but simply sharing your story to other readers.
Exofanland #3
Chapter 22: By now, I don't even know if you are still on Asianfanfic or not. A much as I want to ask you for an update, I can't because I'm not sure if you're still here. You probably have a reason for a hiatus or stop writing this story, but whatever it is, I hope that this story have an ending. By that, I mean that you can find someone to finish your story and if not, I would ask for your permission to complete this story for you.

Of course, if you ever see this message and grand me your permission to continue this story, i would love it if you can explain to me the ending of this story, the purpose of your ending and how the end is suppose to end.
Exofanland #4
Chapter 22: Uhm.... Are you going to ever update this story. This is a work of art
Exofanland #5
Chapter 22: Uhm when will you update?
baekkie_92
#6
Chapter 22: I like this story so much... pwease update soon...
Exofanland #7
Chapter 22: I really think your story deserve more subscribers and upvote. This is too good and more ppl should read it. By the way, can I recommend your fanfic in my fanfic?
Exofanland #8
Chapter 22: Can you. It end it yet please???? This is way tooooo Gud to end!!! Oh gosh please don't end it. Please keep updating instead!! N
Exofanland #9
Chapter 21: Just wanted to tell you that I luv this story and I'm already putting it in my reread list. This is one of the best that i've read
NynaEXO #10
Chapter 21: Next update~hohoho