Something that shouldn't ever play, called LOVE

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Description

Lay

A artist student who has a great potential in art.

He has a friend Kyung Soo as in his same class and Lu Han is his best friend.

He has a boyfriend ~ KRIS

 

Suho

A new Singing tutor.

His past life is unknown.

 

Kris

A hot student who is major in modeling

Lay's boyfriend.

But a player.

 

Lu Han

Lay's bestfriend.

He is attending only singing class.

Who can't resist hotties.

 

Well ~

A story has just began.

Is that Kris fault that he is born to be a player?

Is that Lu Han fault that he just can't resist but no intention of hurting his bestfriend?

Is Lay deserve to be betrayed by his boyfriend and his bestfriend?

What about Suho?

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Foreword

Lay is looking at Kris with a smile.

“What?”

Kris is puzzled.

“Kiss me.”

Kris not looking at Lay.

“You said you are busy.”

“Not now.”

Lay tiptoed to capture the taller man’s lips.

Kris reacts immediately.

A minute later, they are fighting for dominance.

 

The start with a hot love ...

It was betrayed by hot Kris ...

Buying chocolate and Kris’s favorite red wine, his hand is about to touch the bell.

 

Should I surprise him?

Lay grab the door knob and …

Oh! It’s not locked?!

 

“Kris, you are waiting for me, right?” Lay mumbled himself and smiled with his dimple showing.

He is walking lightly to Kris room. He takes no time and his hands are almost on the door knob.

“KRISSS!!!”

Lay heard a moan and WHAT?! Lay thought.

He is not believing what he just heard. He opened the door right away.

 

He felt his world is collapsing. His sky is falling.

Best friend, boyfriend … They are having .

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Rawdeyyy
#1
Chapter 31: I never expect it ended that way. Or am I just being dense ? Haha :')
Gkarthik #2
Chapter 32: that was AMAZING author-nim.... but I was wondering if you could make a oneshot or something like that for kris to find his happiness *cough* Taoris *cough*............... THANK YOU !!fighting!!
ephemeral24
2403 streak #3
Chapter 31: WHAT A JERK OF AN IDEA KRIS! PLEASE...
AHHHHH.... Suho finally opened u and admitted he still loves Lay... good for them! i was like, NO BUT WHY WOULD LAY BE INVOLVED IN AN ACCIDENT WHEN SUHO STILL NEEDS HIM, KRIS WILL BE AWAY ALREADY...
then turns out it's a joke, YOU SHOULD'VE HIT HIM MORE SUHO! HAHAHAHA
Lay you better treat him right this time or i'll get Kris to return and get him from you! :))))

ahhhh Kris, that's life... maybe you shouldn't have played too much in the past, and maybe you could've had your chance with Suho... go on with your life dude, there's someone waiting for you out there, i guess...
nice to know that he managed to reconcile with Luhan and Lay too! he needed that! :D

ahhhh it has come to an end... *the final chapter took a long time huh? haha kidding! didn't mind the wait :)*
you may have KrisHo deprived me here, but it's all good :)
thinking abt it, yes, maybe that's karma for Kris... and Lay is very lucky that Suho is giving him a second chance, he shouldn't waste that! and ofc, nice that Suho managed to love again :D
MissQwin
#4
Chapter 32: Pity my giant. Well I know he was a playboy but.. well, there's karma right. Hahaha but,maybe you can give Kris a new mate (?) Hahah just suggesting.

Well for my SuLay.. at first, I was like.. "NO !!! Lay please don't die.. Kris leaving Suho for you.. Suho need you.. you cannot die no matter what happen !" But then ... what the.. can I smack your head for real Lay !! How could you !! Suho was having a trauma of losing his lover. Yet you're doing that ?? I really want to kill you !! >.> hahaha.. but since it was all Kris idea.. its okay then. Hahah.. Thank you Kris for making Suho admitted that he loves Lay. Thank you so much !!

At the last part.. I really sympathy for Kris. I think I should try to introduce other boys to him. Or maybe just me (?) Hahahhahahahaahahhaha.. Maybe not... hahaha..

Well actually, from the starting.. I wish that Suho need choose Lay because I hate Kris that time. He was so full of himself and so playboy. Pity Lay that time. How could he cheat behind Lay with his own best friend (?) It is so cruel, I tell you. But then, when Kris starting to changed, I hate Lay.. because I think that he just using my innocent Suho for him to take a revenge on Kris. It is so cruel too. I told you. Haha.. and then, there's that tiny little Kyungsoo.. I hate him too here because he hate Suho and I hate anybody who hate Suho (what the motif right ? Hahha) well, whatever it is, I hate his character here. So .. yeah.. hahah..
However, it was a happy ending for SuLay. Congratulations. Even though I hope it was for Krisho. Its okay. As long as my Suho has found his happiness :)

Thank you for writing this awesome story authornim :) Thank you so much. I love so much ♡ *wink*
Kiss and hug from me as my thank you to you :)

P/s: I choose Krisho because they are my first ship. Hehe :)
starry_diamonds #5
Chapter 31: Awwwwww poor FanFan,he still took the flight with Suho's birthday number T_T i m glad that SuLay is reunite but i still feel sad for Kris(altho he was bad to my Xing at the start >_<) and how dare u say ur story is ty?? Ur story is great,okay? U need to write more coz i want to read more of ur fics!! Love u <3 <3
DKS_12 #6
KRISUHO <33 Pleath :3
dokyungsoonut04
#7
Chapter 31: Oh my god :")
its beautiful and sad at the same time. :")
lay is so bad >●< plays a trick to make joon back to him xD
lol lay deserves the hit from joon xD luhan isnt helping lay at all xD
wishing kris find someone new
thank you for the beautiful story. I love the ending very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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dara_bias #8
Chapter 32: It's hard for me to pick one pairing. I ship krisho layho seho kaiho hanho everyone with suho. I dont know which i should chosse
Annagracey #9
Aww please update! Such a good story~
I'll be waiting ^_^