French Toast

Something that shouldn't ever play, called LOVE
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Chapter 5;

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“It's finally done!”

Lay made himself fall over the couch and rest.

He has been cleaning his house the whole day.

 

I had to pay the bills to Suho.

 

Lay went out.

The sky is already dark.

Lay is looking for ATM. As he remembered, there’s one not far away from his house.

 

It’s not very late, but there’s already no one on the streets.

He looked at his bank account, it’s not enough currency for the bills.

 

Why did he have to take me to the expensive hospital?

Lay sighed.

There is nothing he owned to borrow money from the back but his apartment.

 

I can work harder and earn money.

Lay filled the amount, there’s nothing left his account and also showed (-)

He took out the piece of paper that contained Suho’s account number.

Just then…

 

“Don’t move! Don’t utter a word! Come out!”

Somebody is pointing Lay with a knife.

Lay swallowed his saliva.

 

The two men with the masks are asking him to come out.

“You guys are robbers.”

Lay said as he understands the situation.

 

“You know now?”

The one is holding Lay as the other one is taking out all the money!

“No! Please! They are for my debt!”

 

Lay is shouting and struggling. But it doesn’t help the situation.

“Hey! Make him shut up!”

The one in the ATM shouted to the one outside.

“You are right! I’m tired!”

The other one punched Lay in the face for many times.

But Lay doesn’t lose the conscious.

“They are for… hospital bills.”

The robber punched him again.

“You can’t take my money.”

Lay was punched again.

“I only have this.”

 

“Yah! You shut up? OK? Hey! Are you done? I’m really sick of him.”

The one punching Lay shouted to his partner.

Lay’s face is now covered in blood.

“Almost!”

The other one shouted back.

 

Then they can see the car light from far.

“Done! Done! Let’s go!”

The two robbers ran to the opposite direction of the car.

 

“NO!”

La

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Rawdeyyy
#1
Chapter 31: I never expect it ended that way. Or am I just being dense ? Haha :')
Gkarthik #2
Chapter 32: that was AMAZING author-nim.... but I was wondering if you could make a oneshot or something like that for kris to find his happiness *cough* Taoris *cough*............... THANK YOU !!fighting!!
ephemeral24
2414 streak #3
Chapter 31: WHAT A JERK OF AN IDEA KRIS! PLEASE...
AHHHHH.... Suho finally opened u and admitted he still loves Lay... good for them! i was like, NO BUT WHY WOULD LAY BE INVOLVED IN AN ACCIDENT WHEN SUHO STILL NEEDS HIM, KRIS WILL BE AWAY ALREADY...
then turns out it's a joke, YOU SHOULD'VE HIT HIM MORE SUHO! HAHAHAHA
Lay you better treat him right this time or i'll get Kris to return and get him from you! :))))

ahhhh Kris, that's life... maybe you shouldn't have played too much in the past, and maybe you could've had your chance with Suho... go on with your life dude, there's someone waiting for you out there, i guess...
nice to know that he managed to reconcile with Luhan and Lay too! he needed that! :D

ahhhh it has come to an end... *the final chapter took a long time huh? haha kidding! didn't mind the wait :)*
you may have KrisHo deprived me here, but it's all good :)
thinking abt it, yes, maybe that's karma for Kris... and Lay is very lucky that Suho is giving him a second chance, he shouldn't waste that! and ofc, nice that Suho managed to love again :D
MissQwin
#4
Chapter 32: Pity my giant. Well I know he was a playboy but.. well, there's karma right. Hahaha but,maybe you can give Kris a new mate (?) Hahah just suggesting.

Well for my SuLay.. at first, I was like.. "NO !!! Lay please don't die.. Kris leaving Suho for you.. Suho need you.. you cannot die no matter what happen !" But then ... what the.. can I smack your head for real Lay !! How could you !! Suho was having a trauma of losing his lover. Yet you're doing that ?? I really want to kill you !! >.> hahaha.. but since it was all Kris idea.. its okay then. Hahah.. Thank you Kris for making Suho admitted that he loves Lay. Thank you so much !!

At the last part.. I really sympathy for Kris. I think I should try to introduce other boys to him. Or maybe just me (?) Hahahhahahahaahahhaha.. Maybe not... hahaha..

Well actually, from the starting.. I wish that Suho need choose Lay because I hate Kris that time. He was so full of himself and so playboy. Pity Lay that time. How could he cheat behind Lay with his own best friend (?) It is so cruel, I tell you. But then, when Kris starting to changed, I hate Lay.. because I think that he just using my innocent Suho for him to take a revenge on Kris. It is so cruel too. I told you. Haha.. and then, there's that tiny little Kyungsoo.. I hate him too here because he hate Suho and I hate anybody who hate Suho (what the motif right ? Hahha) well, whatever it is, I hate his character here. So .. yeah.. hahah..
However, it was a happy ending for SuLay. Congratulations. Even though I hope it was for Krisho. Its okay. As long as my Suho has found his happiness :)

Thank you for writing this awesome story authornim :) Thank you so much. I love so much ♡ *wink*
Kiss and hug from me as my thank you to you :)

P/s: I choose Krisho because they are my first ship. Hehe :)
starry_diamonds #5
Chapter 31: Awwwwww poor FanFan,he still took the flight with Suho's birthday number T_T i m glad that SuLay is reunite but i still feel sad for Kris(altho he was bad to my Xing at the start >_<) and how dare u say ur story is ty?? Ur story is great,okay? U need to write more coz i want to read more of ur fics!! Love u <3 <3
DKS_12 #6
KRISUHO <33 Pleath :3
dokyungsoonut04
#7
Chapter 31: Oh my god :")
its beautiful and sad at the same time. :")
lay is so bad >●< plays a trick to make joon back to him xD
lol lay deserves the hit from joon xD luhan isnt helping lay at all xD
wishing kris find someone new
thank you for the beautiful story. I love the ending very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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dara_bias #8
Chapter 32: It's hard for me to pick one pairing. I ship krisho layho seho kaiho hanho everyone with suho. I dont know which i should chosse
Annagracey #9
Aww please update! Such a good story~
I'll be waiting ^_^