Valiant Attempt

Description

 

What is loss? The echo that surrounds the world gone

What is love? The deepest of your heart's desires

 

3 years of relationship gone just like that.

How can a man not go crazy?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

Im Yoona

Age: 22

For her whole life she had only been in a relationship. Because of one mistake made, the 3 years of undying-irrevercoble spell of love had been broken. Her heart was tainted but she ignored it and moved on, leaving the broken pieces of her heart lying behind her. A cheerful and vibrant girl, despite whatever had happened, she moves on in life and acts as if everything is the same like before. She finds a job, a journalist, one that she didn't liked, but she made do with it, spreading her cheerful vibe along where ever she goes, affecting everyone but herself.

 

Xi Luhan

Age: 23

For his whole life, he had devoted himself to one girl only. Because of a mistake that was made by neither him nor her changed his life forever. To have the love of his life Im Yoona taken away was like someone forcing his hand through his body, grabbed his heart and threw it down into the deepest ocean. He was alive, but barely breathing, barely there. He couldn't live without her but she wouldn't listen, therefore he resorted to stalking her, being with her in anyway he can. Being a quiet and reserved guy, the only words that comes out of his mouth were words that are thought carefully, full of wit and wisdom, for this chinese man was extraordinary smart. Graduated with a Phd for forensic psychology, currently working as a detective diligently sloving case by case, tragedy by tragedy except for his own. Despite being a busy man, he still managed to make time to visit Yoona, to find out every single detail about her whereabouts, her situation, after all, love makes anything possible.

 

Kim Jongin (Kai)

Age: 22

Born in a wealthy family, there was a certain expectation of him everywhere he goes. Dreams and ambition does not exist in his life because despite whatever happens, he had to take over his father's company. His father owns a media company, from a range of films, television, magazines and newspaper. Whatever he does the world is watching, every move his makes has to be careful and precise, he was taught that since young. He did tried to rebel a few times, but it wasn't that easy. His life was pretty much gray, like the prints in the newspaper, until he meets Im Yoona which brought smiles and laughter. He was determine then, to protect her and make her happy because she was the one that brought in the existence of dreams and ambition into his life. She was the one that added colors, vibrant colors into his life.

 

 

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(a/n) So if it isn't any obvious already, I'm starting a Luyoonkai fic, but i'll probably not update until i get the plot done, I'm currently halfway through+ I'm busy with school, so please do not expect any updates anytime soon. But please do subscribe and comment to give me ideas yeah? ^^ 

 

 

 

 

 

Ataraxy
I can't change it now*

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jessovysta
#1
Why no update TT TT please update
uberchrome
#2
Chapter 13: Im stupid. *and romance for dummies hahahaha (;
uberchrome
#3
Chapter 13: I MISS THE 69 omggghg bring back the 69 or at least make it 690 teeheeeheee I feel like trolling on your comment section just for the heck of it and to boost my karma bc I only need a few more to reach the number I want and NOoooooo its not 690 bc I didnt see it when it was 690 so lets make that 1690 or something hohoho.



I love you and this story 69 EVEEERRRRR
Ps. I'lldo the poster for this and valiant attempt once my desktop is fixed.


Lessthanthree (:
uberchrome
#4
Chapter 13: I MISS THE 69 omggghg bring back the 69 or at least make it 690 teeheeeheee I feel like trolling on your comment section just for the heck of it and to boost my karma bc I only need a few more to reach the number I want and NOoooooo its not 690 bc I didnt see it when it was 690 so lets make that 1690 or something hohoho.



I love you and this story 69 EVEEERRRRR
Ps. I'lldo the poster for this and valiant attempt once my desktop is fixed.


Lessthanthree (:
ALostFAWNS
#5
Chapter 12: ohhh finally i know what is problem between luhan and yoona.
but,yeah if i becaome yoona i will do that..and to take a decision would be no risk.
ALostFAWNS
#6
Chapter 8: i love chappie 8 because luhan kiss yoona..
but,poor luhan..he always rejected!!
DeviLaugh
#7
Chapter 9: I was just checking up on how your story was going and I have to say, I am really proud of you for taking my advice and applying it. Even the stupids comments I made, like slamming the receipt on Seohyun's desk, you took. I'm also perfectly fine with you not changing other things like Seohyun's crush and Luhan and Kai being rich. It really is part of the story and I think it is fine to have as long as you make it your own. Character profiles... okay...

Your plot has developed significantly and I can actually see a good focus. Luhan and Yoona's relationship is clearer and Kai isn't so third wheelish. This is almost a completely different story, a better story.

Also, thank you for mentioning I am kind. While I'm not really a kind person, you really made it seem like I am. You are my favorite kind of writer, you take advice and you use it. I love to see writers who want to improve.

Good luck with your story!
lalaloveyoona #8
Chapter 13: Will wait coz this story is one of my favorite <333
xingtizen
#9
Chapter 13: I will try to wait...patiently...not really....ripping my hair out.