Not an update!

In The Land of the Two Crescent Moons

Hi! I just wanted to tell you all that I won't update this for a little while since I've decided to renovate this story a bit.

Don't worry though, you won't need to reread it if you don't want to. I'm just going to rewrite the different feelings throughout the story and fix a few mistakes here and there. So you won't really miss anything. English isn't my first language and therefore I'm still improving my writing skills.

I want to thank unnielove for taking the time to read and review my story. ^^

So credits to Candid Contemplations (Cee-Cee's) Request Shop for making me see what I should improve!

Here's the link to the review: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/217809/4#comments

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
Angela90s
Hi everyone! ^^ I hope you like the story so far, I'm making ch 9 now ;P Something you want to happen? Comment! ;D

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Chanyeolie
#1
Chapter 23: BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Ohmygod. BOYFRIEND?! REALLY? FML. =))))) Luhan will go crazy about this. Trololol. I just love this ;AA; <333333
Chanyeolie
#2
Chapter 22: Please update soon! I just read this a while ago. This is so cute -3-
h3d1ez
#3
Do you wonder how you say things in Korean?
Do all Koreans love spicy food?
Is Plastic surgery normal in Korea? Do people think it's bad?
LEARN how to speak Korea or ASK your questions and get them answered.
Learn basic korean with a full korean girl - Lee hedi:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/283711/learning-more-about-koreans-facts-about-koreans-lessons-etc-with-lee-hedi-full-korean-girl-korean-hangul-learnkorean-learn
amusuk
#4
ahaha, luhan has something in his mind right now *p.ervert smirk
stay healthy n keep updating, thor. Fighting!
imdumb
#5
Urrrm, I like the story and all, but luhan is a bit crazy.
amusuk
#6
the fighting is good, i can imagine them well.
But why did it felt funny? Bcz hunhan? Or bcz imagine xiumin's 'angry baozi' face before fighting? I'm crazy..
And thankz to you kris is sooo cool fighting with legs!
Haha, i wonder why Lin Cui Fei can teleport too?
Azziana-azmy
#7
be careful everyone... that lady maybe had something in her sleeves & who knows, what she will do to you guys. Don't ever let your guard down, okay?
amusuk
#8
f-finally, i'm glad! :D
why this woman want to take her?
Yay, update regularly is the best so i don't have to read too many fics in one day.
amusuk
#9
new reader here!
I'm gonna read again whatever you did to the story *givevirtualchocolatecookiestoyou*
it's so good~
not so many OC's are interesting but yours are way too hilarious to be missed. Like them so much~
Good luck to you *OvO*
SuperStarKMJ95 #10
Spiders....ugh. Why spiders? I mean, one or two of them is fine, but millions?! PURE HORROR.
But I feel bad for Sehun! Creepy Luhan...O.O
Update soon author-nim!