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Paradise

guise, why none of you commented about the wrong name i put in last chappie? I realized i wrote JIHYUN instead of Hyun, to those who realized, i'm sorry, I have confusions with my other stories... hehe. i lost one subbie for this ;/ hmmmmph. me no fren that subbie 

SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE GUISEU!!! :'(

This chappie was meant to be released 18 days ago, but, due to my lazyness, it came out today XD


school - Author's POV

you leaned on your table, your cheeks touching the cold surface.

" I wonder how my boys are doing... " you asked yourself as you thought of SHINee.

You felt tired again, and you realised you need to send in 3 songs to the producer before Monday, and that day was actually Thursday.

You sighed more.

" stupid SoMan, making me do stuffs "  you muttered as you pulled out a piece of paper.

You started to sulk when you wrote the song, you really missed your boys.

you scribbled the words that rhymes and as you proofread it it makes no sense at all.

Round and round,
i'm so tired of running round and round, 
sound  oooh byuntae sound, 
ooooh no bound and round and round,
history errors made by the sun, sun.

You laughed as you re read it all again.

" what the hell am i writing?! " you chuckled.

Somehow, your friend Hyri rin popped out of nowhere.

" that sure , y'know " she commented.

" Ara, I'm.. i'm completely out today " you confessed, you really trusted hyri rin.

" making a lyric eyy? You just need to think about the boys " she mumbled as she sipped on her water.

" THAT'S IT! "

" oh? what's it? "

" THANKS HYRI RIN AH! " you exclaimed.

 

During class, you thought of Exo. 

" bad boy type " you muttered, and you scribbled down the words you said.

But what came out of your mind, were SHINee's personalities.

You didn't realised it at all.

" D.O's abit diva... okay.. Sehun's the maknae.. hmmm " 

You finally created the main song, all left is to make the sounds.

" i'm going to make you guys top off " you declared.

" and wipe that off SHINee! "

 


Shinee was practicing the song Jihyun wrote while having another songwriter to direct it for her.

" GOD! " Jonghyun yelled.

" one more time " the songwriter said.

" Your way of doing it is wrong! The song doesn't even fit your statements! " he glared.

" shut up, that song was made by Jihyun, blame her! " The songwriter yelled back.

" YOU MADE IT WRONG! SO BLAME YOU! " Jonghyun shouted.

key and Taemin sighed.

Onew didn't know what to do.

Minho approached Jonghyun and pulled him away.

" look, Ahjumma, i'm sorry if we're rude, we're just not fond of you yet " Minho said straightfowardly.

" well, FINE THEN! " She pressed her lips together. " GO! TAKE HER BACK! LET HER TRAIN YOU INSTEAD! "

The songwriter grabbed her bag and headed to the door.

" Appa, you realised you made a mis- "

" YES TAEMIN! I'M NOT IN A MOOD RIGHT NOW! " Jonghyun walked out and slammed the door shut.

" umma, do something... " taemin whispered.

" arasseo, i'll do something " key smiled warmly at taemin.

he grabbed his Iphone and started to click on a certain number.

 

-----

 

" Kai bai Buk! "

" AWWW NOOOOOOOOOOO!! " Sunggyu screamed.

" WOOOT! I WIIIIIN~~~ " Dongwoo danced merrily.

Sunggyu reluctantly took out his money and gave it to Dongwoo.

then the phone rang

Sunggyu groaned and answered the call.

" yeoboseyo? "

" Ah! Oppa! " you said.

" oh yes??? " Sungyyu smiled as he heard your voice.

" You don't have to pick me up, I'm going straight to work after school " You said.

" oh? chincha, i'll just take you there " Sunggyu said.

" no, thanks though, i'll just go "

" but i promised Woohyun- "

" oppaaaa~ " you sang.

" arasseo, but your car- " You closed down of Sunggyu and laughed.

Then you put Key on call again.

" yeoboseyo umma " you smiled.

" have you talked to him? "

" yeps! He wont be picking me up from school " you said.

" okay, I'll pick you up later eo? "

" sure sure " you nodded.


SKIPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP SCHOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL XD

 

As you walked with hyri rin to the school gates, somehow you saw many girls crowding up at the gates.

" oh, what's that?? " hyri rin asked.

" Molla " you said and walked to it, hyri rin followed.

You saw Key smiling to the girls and gave them autographs.

" that pabo " you muttered.

" It's KEY!! " hyri rin screamed.

you waved your hands at key, who was busy smiling and servicing for the fans.

you waved again and soon Key saw you. 

You pointed to the parking lot and he understood.

You saw him leaving and the fans sad.

" Rin, I've got to go " you smiled.

" so soon? awwww " she whined.

" Mianhae " you bowed.

hyri rin chuckled at you.

" arasseo, annyeong Hyunnie! " she waved at you.

Therefore you went over to Key's car.

 

you knew how it looked like, and you searched for his car.

key saw you and lit his lights at you.

" omo! " you said and walked into his car.

" I brought clothes for you to change " he said and handed you the clothes.

" kamsa " you smiled and went to the backseat to change.

" DON'T LOOK!! " you said.

" ooh, like i'm interested to see a girl without s " 

you glared at key and he laughed.

You found it normal and regular to change even with key around, you've been doing that for years already, no, you're not a . XD

after changing, you jumped back to the front seat.

 

 

after having a long talk on fashion with Key in the car, you both finally reached the SM building.

You walked with key to the practice room and noticed jonghyun wasn't there.

you didn't know the full situation, so you asked Taemin.

Taemin told you everything and you sighed contentedly.

" I know Jonghyun, when he's mad, he won't be staying long in the room, he's somewhere in this building " key said.

" There's not enough of us to search for him! this building has like, Hundreds of rooms! " Onew pouted.

" I'll get my other boys to help us find him " You smiled.

You took out your phone and called the leader.

" Ah, I need you guys here, at the practice room, NOW " you shouted and winked at Shinee.

they laughed silently.

 

" WHATISITWHATHAPPENEDWHYDOYOUWANTUSHERE? " the poor leader huffed.

" relax Suho, it's only jonghyun missing, let's find him! " you laughed.

" JONGHYUN SUNBAE'S MISSING?! HOW COULD YOU LAUGH?? " Sehun asked.

You shrugged.

" let's check all the rooms here " You laughed.

 

It took you guys 2 hours already, somehow you felt like giving up.

" I'm going to the toilet " you announced.

" arasseo, we'll be in the practice room " Chanyeol smiled.

" okaay "

you were too tired already and you didn't notice you were entering the boys toilet.

Then you heard a bang from the end of the stall.

curious, you kicked the stall door open, and revealed Jonghyun.

" what are you doing in the female toilet? " you asked.

" WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH! " next thing you knew, the door slammed infront of your face.

okay, what just happened?

 


short chapter....? i guess? and boring one too :D Mianhae for this boring chap! :(

comment replies:

@Ninakey19 Lol WELCOMEEE! /hugs you tight/ teehee, yeps! our namgrease is always greasy XD HAHA shinee appearsss~ poof! updated! :D

@ohmyelements /highfive/ lol i wish they were realllllly dating XD not fanservice, HAHA! dun worry meh, shinee's not gone! :D EXOOOO! so, who's your bias in EXO? :D

@woo304 lol, fae, updated! XD

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xiaodeer
#1
Chapter 27: Finally!! Goshhhh i love youuu teahyun! T u T update soon, jjang!
woo304 #2
Chapter 26: update soon~ dont forget to study also
autumnroads
#3
Go SHINee… I almost died when you said SHINee wasn't in the picture then I read the comment reply and I was like… on Cloud Nine!!
Please update soon!!

Btw… gotta luv our Namgrease!
woo304 #4
wahhh zirrr debakk!!! Siuk
beagull
#5
HAHAHAHAHAHA Woohyun is so cheesy! They act like immatures. lolololol Update soon! oh! And SHINee won't be appearing anymore? :( Please make them appear!!!! #NewReaderrrr
autumnroads
#6
Well at least the car was used in the end! XP
Please update soon!!!
autumnroads
#7
Yeah! You answered back to my comment.... I love it when people do that! Makes me feel special inside! Lol
but wait... Hyun had a car.... why didn't she use it!! Huffff
Please update soon!!!