PROPOSE

YOU AND I MEMORIES THAT LASTS FOREVER

                PROPOSE

The last 2 months shinhwa life totally become a twist! 
Fan's dream comes true! Ricsyung, woodong, jindy is public! Everyone know about their  relationship. In brief shinhwa is happy! 

dongwan was laying on minwoo chest ( to be precious chest >< ). Dongwan kissed minwoo lips and said " wake up~ Minbongie". Minwoo don't even budge! 

Dongwan suddenly got an idea! A dirty idea. Dongwan got onto minwoo and grab minwoo's and put it into his mouth. He continue to give minwoo a      suddenly minwoo body rose up.

Dongwan get off from minwoo and said  " good morning ! Lee min woo sshi!". Minwoo said " wan-ah I don have a good morning if that thing down still hurts that bad". 

Dongwan laugh and said " I am hungry". After finish talking, dongwan claim minwoo back and it. Minwoo put his hand on dongwan head. After 5 minute , a huge wave of hit dongwan mouth.Dongwan just swallow everything. Minwoo pulled dongwan up and kissed him passionately. His tongue and Dongwan's tongue is having battle. Minwoo pulled off from dongwan and said " good morning wannie~". Dongwan pulled minwoo back to sleeping. Minwoo reach to the drawer and pick something. 
Minwoo said " close your eyes wannie. I got sth for you!". Dongwan close his eyes and waited for the thing. Right then, he can feel a cold metal thing on his neck. When he open eyes he see minwoo and him are wearing the same necklace. 
Dongwan " minwoo ah~". Minwoo said " you like it?". Dongwan nodded, his eyes was full of tears. Minwoo pulled dongwan to his embrace and said " dongwan-ah". Dongwan said " hmmm?". Minwoo said " I know that this is might not a really great timing but will you marry me?". Dongwan can't mumble even a word, he just froze. Minwoo saw dongwan expression, face darkened. Minwoo said with a low voice " it is ok! You can say no.....I am okay. I need to go to the bathroom". After finish saying that minwoo walked off to bathroom.

In the bathroom 
Minwoo shed tears. Minwoo said to himself " why did you ask him to marry you? It is too fast..". Someone knocked the door. Minwoo wash his tear and open the door. There dongwan standing there. Dongwan cupped minwoo face and caressed it. Dongwan said " I know that you were crying in there. I am sorry". Minwoo shake his head and said " I am not. About marrying me, I was just joking. Heheh". Dongwan take something out and kneel in front of minwoo. Dongwan said " If you was joking, now I will make it real. Lee min woo, I love you. Not only your good side but also the bad side. I want  to be with you all time. So lee min woo will you marry me?". Minwoo nodded frantically and said " yes! Yes! I marry you". Dongwan put the ring to minwoo's ring finger and kissed him. 

Then both of them went into shower with each other. Now, you can say that they are happy with each other.

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shhhinhwaCJ #1
Chapter 2: Ahhhh ahhhh hot!!!!
shhhinhwaCJ #2
Chapter 1: Kyaaaaa!!!!!! This is so sweet! I read those comments below. It's m rated next? U should rate it on the foreword! Not by the chapter! (It's easier to attract readers like me!) ><
Deng_Yat
#3
Chapter 11: Waaahh...dong wan is back~~~i love him in this..despite he did something before...bjt finally woodong~~
Im glad minwoo held dong wan's hands...

Thank u for updating^^
cglcb1
#4
Chapter 10: It looks better with paragraph breaks now but you still need to improve with capitalization and grammar.
If you have microsoft word, maybe type your chapter there first because it has grammar and spelling check (if you select the right language).
Good work!
My personal comment on this chap: where the hell is dongwan >< is he having vacation on some mountain lolzzz
well, hope woodong meet up and make up soon xD
ShinPM98
#5
Chapter 9: Oh noo...Minwoo fainted, Dongwan is leaving...RicSyunggg pls do something to WooDong >///<

Thanka for updated :)
cglcb1
#6
Chapter 9: ok, I've read 8 chapters in one go
Objective comment:
Your use of past tense is inconsistent and it gets jumbled up with present tense a lot.
For conversational dialogues, I think you should use a new sentence instead of writing everything in the same paragraph.
After the apostrophe/quotation mark, the first word should be capitalized.
Names within sentence should be capitalized as well.
There are some spelling mistakes.
The story progress is pretty quick, maybe put in more details such as emotions, actions, series of interactions and inner thoughts.
The plot is quite good.
Subjective comment:
I like the story. I know it's hard to write a lot and in detail since my first few fics were also short, the pace was very quick but you will improve as you write more. Just paint the scene in your head, then try to describe the main focus, then maybe more descriptions for the surrounding, etc.
I don't really like to insert honorifics and romanized Korean words to fic because it's just weird but then again, everyone has different style so it's not something to press on.
As I'm very shinhwa biased, I really love it when someone write a fic about shinhwa so keep on writing! Don't be discouraged by the amount of views, subs and comments. Just write pieces that satisfy yourself. You're writing quite well for a non-english speaker.
Deng_Yat
#7
Chapter 9: what...??dong wan...u r really...u just left...??
minwoo!!!waaaaaaaaa....T0T....
dong wan...come back quickly...minwoo needs you...huhu T^T
thanks for updating btw..
anbarasi #8
Ah well :-D:-)
Deng_Yat
#9
Chapter 7: Lol^^
Funny proposal from the two of them..but it's sweet^^
Woodong,b happy forever!!
Thank you for writing n updating^^
bloodyhim
#10
Thumbs up!