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YOU AND I MEMORIES THAT LASTS FOREVER

Minwoo and Amy was schedule together for the conference about scandal. When  both of them arrived , they both go to the waiting room. In the waiting room  There was a great silent between them.

Minwoo who started the conversation " I am going to say yes to the scandal". Amy who is happy said " I know that you would come back to me oppa~". Minwoo opened his hand wide open and let Amy in his embrace.  In the conference hall  The reporter ask Amy " Amy ssi ! Do you agree with the scandal?". 

Amy said " yes! I agreed. I even meet him in Saipan. We got back at Saipan". She smiled and look at minwoo lovingly.  The reporter continued and ask " what about minwoo shhi ?"  Minwoo said " I totally disagreed with the scandal! Actually we did met at Saipan but we didn't get back together at there. In fact I didn't go to Saipan to met her. As you all know that I am schedule for D9". 

The reporter continued " so why did you postpone your trip for more 7 days? Aren't you schedule only 3 days".  Minwoo said " at first, my trip to Saipan really is schedule for 3 days, but when I met someone there, I decided to postpone my trip to have a have a trip with him".  The reporter " who is him?".  Minwoo said " actually he is the person that I love. He is my boyfriend. He is even here for me!"

The reporter said " who is him?"  Minwoo said " he is my shinhwa member, Kim dong wan".  Amy is so shocked left the conference hall quickly. Minwoo thought that the reporter would say something weird about being gay but all the reporter smiled and said " congratulation! And I hope that your relationship would last forever. After that the conference end and minwoo head back to the waiting and find Amy there. 

Minwoo said with a smirk " sorry for lying to you! Too bad now you got nothing to say now!"  Amy said " just wait, lee min woo!". Then she left the waiting room.  Dongwan come out from the toilet that have in the waiting room. Dongwan opened his arm wide and minwoo ran into his embrace.  Dongwan said " thx u! I love you so much!" 

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shhhinhwaCJ #1
Chapter 2: Ahhhh ahhhh hot!!!!
shhhinhwaCJ #2
Chapter 1: Kyaaaaa!!!!!! This is so sweet! I read those comments below. It's m rated next? U should rate it on the foreword! Not by the chapter! (It's easier to attract readers like me!) ><
Deng_Yat
#3
Chapter 11: Waaahh...dong wan is back~~~i love him in this..despite he did something before...bjt finally woodong~~
Im glad minwoo held dong wan's hands...

Thank u for updating^^
cglcb1
#4
Chapter 10: It looks better with paragraph breaks now but you still need to improve with capitalization and grammar.
If you have microsoft word, maybe type your chapter there first because it has grammar and spelling check (if you select the right language).
Good work!
My personal comment on this chap: where the hell is dongwan >< is he having vacation on some mountain lolzzz
well, hope woodong meet up and make up soon xD
ShinPM98
#5
Chapter 9: Oh noo...Minwoo fainted, Dongwan is leaving...RicSyunggg pls do something to WooDong >///<

Thanka for updated :)
cglcb1
#6
Chapter 9: ok, I've read 8 chapters in one go
Objective comment:
Your use of past tense is inconsistent and it gets jumbled up with present tense a lot.
For conversational dialogues, I think you should use a new sentence instead of writing everything in the same paragraph.
After the apostrophe/quotation mark, the first word should be capitalized.
Names within sentence should be capitalized as well.
There are some spelling mistakes.
The story progress is pretty quick, maybe put in more details such as emotions, actions, series of interactions and inner thoughts.
The plot is quite good.
Subjective comment:
I like the story. I know it's hard to write a lot and in detail since my first few fics were also short, the pace was very quick but you will improve as you write more. Just paint the scene in your head, then try to describe the main focus, then maybe more descriptions for the surrounding, etc.
I don't really like to insert honorifics and romanized Korean words to fic because it's just weird but then again, everyone has different style so it's not something to press on.
As I'm very shinhwa biased, I really love it when someone write a fic about shinhwa so keep on writing! Don't be discouraged by the amount of views, subs and comments. Just write pieces that satisfy yourself. You're writing quite well for a non-english speaker.
Deng_Yat
#7
Chapter 9: what...??dong wan...u r really...u just left...??
minwoo!!!waaaaaaaaa....T0T....
dong wan...come back quickly...minwoo needs you...huhu T^T
thanks for updating btw..
anbarasi #8
Ah well :-D:-)
Deng_Yat
#9
Chapter 7: Lol^^
Funny proposal from the two of them..but it's sweet^^
Woodong,b happy forever!!
Thank you for writing n updating^^
bloodyhim
#10
Thumbs up!