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Chapter 62: not requesting right now but its great that you're back! I really learned a lot from your comments and just wanna say that you're doing a really great job!
Hello! I just submitted a request. Please let me know if the form came through.
By chance, I've been editing an older story of mine and saw that you recently updated this review shop. Your reviews are very detailed, and they'd be very helpful as I edit lol.
Chapter 61: oh wow thanks for the review! it's definitely going to be of help when writing future chapters.
I've always been aware of my weakness in terms of character developments and such, but its quite a relief to finally get feedbacks on how I can improve in this aspect. but other than that, I'm super grateful because this review is written in such a constructive way. I've requested for reviews on my previous fics and most of them end up to be somewhat 'discouraging'. you know the right things to say, correcting my mistakes without coming off too strong, and it ends up being an inspiration for me to fix and continue writing. I'm currently stuck writing the next chapter, but this review will surely be of help for the remainder of the story.
so, thank you once again and I hope that you can inspire more writers in the future!
Chapter 59: I am always in awe when I read your reviews. I trust your advice and will work towards improvement of the story. For the first time, I have seen the story so deeply. I knew there was something wrong, something missing but couldn't put my finger on it. I don't know how my readers will feel about some additional conflicts on Sehun's part but for my own satisfaction, I will see what i can do. Truly, the path was too easy for Sehun. Thank you for shedding light on that part.
And, my, I always score low when it comes to grammar T_T But I will take it positively and work on the mistakes as soon as possible. Your suggestions are a great help. They not only aid the story I have requested for but also the ones I am currently writing. It is probably because I watch my stories play out in my mind like movies that I slip and include numerous perspectives. I have never written a character with a disability before, thus in Joohyun's case, I assumed I can make her livelier over texts because it's easier to type things out. I am glad that you noticed the way she is so beautiful in Sehun's eyes. I mean I'm glad I could show it to you haha. When I started this story, that was my only objective.
And such a high score gives me chills. I am glad this story was enjoyable to you. I feel truly succesful. Thank you for the time you invested in the fic. Thank you for giving this story a chance, not only once but twice. And the place you've given the story in your favorite's list is one I will always be proud of!
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