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BY DINJIN

Upon discovering her stepfather's affair, Nam Juri vows to pulverise him for everything he has. Unfortunately for her, the mistress' son is Oh Sehun, the cold-hearted and mysterious delinquent that always seems to be one step ahead of her.

score: 97
 

BY TRUEBOICE101
  
A story written by an author (Baekhyun) fraught with anxiety and whose environment consists of a cold, gloomy world surrounded by much sorrow. He is overwhelmed by a surge of emotions and is driven by an unknown compulsion to weave a strange yarn starring his friend Kai. Reality and fantasy soon become intertwined and he discovers that his life consists of more than just earth; he has, from the beginning, inhaled the breath of eternity.

SCORE: 93
 

by emilieee

After her parents' unexpected fatality in a car crash, Han Iseul lived her life in what ifs, putting extra caution and care into every turn. To her, life was a fragile thing, and it was to be treated as such. After his parents' unexpected fatality in a car crash, Byun Baekhyun lived in the moment - he didn't care about tomorrow, never took responsibility for his past actions. It was only now that mattered to him. So when seeing Baekhyun, drunk, risk his life in a ridiculous dare of scaling the wall of a private property, Iseul wonders if she can detest someone more than this - someone who is throwing their life on the line for something so stupid, treating life like it's a joke. She has an immediate definition for him. Idiot. And she doesn't plan on changing that definition. ...at least not willingly.

score: 91.5




 


 
 
BY jungmichan

They say food tastes best if it's made with love, but Jongdae has a hard time putting love into his cooking when there's a rival café opening right across the street. His tiny business is struggling enough as it is, he doesn't need the competition. Especially not competition that cleans their window fronts in sleeveless shirts in summer for everyone to see.

score: 96
 
BY Emilieee

At night, Byun Baekhyun roams the city as a masked vigilante under the moniker Kinese, hunting tirelessly for his brother’s murderer. And all the while trying to stay two steps ahead of Elektra, fellow vigilante with a pain-in-the- ideology that she keeps on trying to shove down his throat.   During the day, he’s a sleep-deprived third year university student balancing two headache-inducing majors and running on way too much caffeine to be healthy. Sleep is a luxury, obviously. Not a necessity.  When Baekhyun’s forced to relocate after he accidentally gets his favourite cafe burnt down, he’s left trying to figure out whether or not he can slap dating onto his to-do list as well because the barista at his new haunt is awfully cute.

SCORE: 91.5
 

BY the_wylde

Detective Oh Sehun meets four beautiful ladies during the time he invests himself in the case of Kim Junmyeon's sudden death. When they point at each other as the prime suspects, Sehun is left in a hefty confusion that keeps twisting itself more and more each passing day. Yet Sehun is adamant to go to the ends of this case, too oblivious to the fact that he is messing with the wrong people.


score: 92

 
 

 
 
BY the_wylde

In which, Oh Sehun receives a letter from Bae Joohyun almost every week and he just wants to let her know that she has been sending her passionate romantic words to the wrong person but his pocket money doesn't allow him the expenses of sending a letter to London...and he quite likes reading her letters even if they are not for him.

score: 93
 
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diamondELF193
#1
Hi! I just submitted a request, I don't know if it's too late to do so, but I thought I'd try anyway :) Thank you!
TrueBoice101
#2
Hi, I requested again :)
p-sehyuk
#3
Chapter 62: not requesting right now but its great that you're back! I really learned a lot from your comments and just wanna say that you're doing a really great job!
soleis
#4
hello , i'm intrested in a review of a story, is it possible to review it before i publish the story?
SkyeButterfly
#5
Hello! I just submitted a request. Please let me know if the form came through.
By chance, I've been editing an older story of mine and saw that you recently updated this review shop. Your reviews are very detailed, and they'd be very helpful as I edit lol.
BangMind
#6
yay! you came back! I have requested again, hopefully the form went through!
p-sehyuk
#7
Chapter 61: oh wow thanks for the review! it's definitely going to be of help when writing future chapters.

I've always been aware of my weakness in terms of character developments and such, but its quite a relief to finally get feedbacks on how I can improve in this aspect. but other than that, I'm super grateful because this review is written in such a constructive way. I've requested for reviews on my previous fics and most of them end up to be somewhat 'discouraging'. you know the right things to say, correcting my mistakes without coming off too strong, and it ends up being an inspiration for me to fix and continue writing. I'm currently stuck writing the next chapter, but this review will surely be of help for the remainder of the story.

so, thank you once again and I hope that you can inspire more writers in the future!
BangMind
#8
hello! thank you so much for yet another helpful review! I have credited the shop in the story foreword. again, I'll leave my comments under replies.
the_wylde
#9
Chapter 59: I am always in awe when I read your reviews. I trust your advice and will work towards improvement of the story. For the first time, I have seen the story so deeply. I knew there was something wrong, something missing but couldn't put my finger on it. I don't know how my readers will feel about some additional conflicts on Sehun's part but for my own satisfaction, I will see what i can do. Truly, the path was too easy for Sehun. Thank you for shedding light on that part.

And, my, I always score low when it comes to grammar T_T But I will take it positively and work on the mistakes as soon as possible. Your suggestions are a great help. They not only aid the story I have requested for but also the ones I am currently writing. It is probably because I watch my stories play out in my mind like movies that I slip and include numerous perspectives. I have never written a character with a disability before, thus in Joohyun's case, I assumed I can make her livelier over texts because it's easier to type things out. I am glad that you noticed the way she is so beautiful in Sehun's eyes. I mean I'm glad I could show it to you haha. When I started this story, that was my only objective.

And such a high score gives me chills. I am glad this story was enjoyable to you. I feel truly succesful. Thank you for the time you invested in the fic. Thank you for giving this story a chance, not only once but twice. And the place you've given the story in your favorite's list is one I will always be proud of!
p-sehyuk
#10
Heyy, I've requested for a review