THE SEQUEL TO JTSF

Jo Twins' Secret Family

 

 

 

 

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAND HERE IT IS PEOPLE! I HOPE YOU READ IT!

THE SEQUEL (for lack of a better title)

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CrystalRainbow
I've combined a couple of chapters, and everything up till chapter 7 is edited!
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kimmylovesyou #1
cute ending!! but what about YoungKwang? and the relationship between Skye and Jinae? sequel3!! xp hope to see the girls debut soon so that the evil trainer'd swallow back his words towards Geum Min...overall I enjiyed the storu truly and absolutely!! ^^
weeweeAugusty #2
Chapter 31: HAPPY ENDING <3 but what happen to Kwang Minnie?

and plus, i think i should learn from your writing. IT'S PERFECT! It's like, there is so no grammatical error!
lenusui #3
Chapter 31: already the end?
rainbowgeum_min #4
Chapter 31: And danjjaki I think your English language and grammar is perfect. Or at least 100000000 times better than mine ":) I need to learn from u
rainbowgeum_min #5
Chapter 31: It's the end ?!

Sequel soon please !!!!!!^^
Danjjaki I really liked the ending ! It's so sweet and familiar and yeah the rain is perfect. We still don't really know about Skye ~~ ^^
Thank u for this story ! I shall try to wait patiently hahaha
YeoJaGaSu #6
Chapter 1: I don't know why, but I took it upon myself to help you... I'm a reviewer, see. I just 'stumbled' across this story and found it inspirational as well as delightful to see that you are editing. So I came by to check out how you were going... I found a few mistakes...
1. Paragraph 5: 'Youngmin and Kwangmin accompany my twin and me to...'
Instead: 'Youngmin and Kwangmin accompany my twin and I to..."
2. Paragraph 5: 'Theirs is across from ours.'
Instead: 'Their's is across from ours.'
3. Paragraph 6: '...and my red one match the coverings on our bed.'
Instead: '...and my read one matches the covers on our bed.' It sounds better like that, doesn't it?
- I kinda skipped afterwards... -
4. Paragraph 50-ish: 'Youngmin paused to smile.'
Instead: 'Youngmin pauses to smile.' Should be in present tense.

Anyway, I was kinda lazy to read the rest... Just make sure you check over again. :D
imsosofia #7
Chapter 30: Chapter 29 (the 2nd one)
Aww that part with Skye and her nail polish is so sweet ^v^ ^v^
weeweeAugusty #8
Chapter 26: Haha~ playing football xD
weeweeAugusty #9
Chapter 25: Wahh this chappie and the previous one is SO DAMN CUTE <3
rainbowgeum_min #10
Chapter 30: SOMEONE NEEDS TO SLAP THAT JINAE. HOW CAN SHE LET A POOR BOY BE THEN HE FELL AND HURT HIS HEAD ?! I WILL PERSONALLY GIVE HER A NICE FREE KICK TO THE MOON .
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