Uncommitted

Description

Tragedy ruined his life. The only one he has ever loved has... she's gone.

And he doesn't know what to do.

Foreword

Hey people~

       I'm back with another oneshot, and this time I'm going to be submitting this for a contest. I hope you guys support me! Feel free to comment and subscribe, upvote if you want to, but most importantly, have fun while reading. :)

       Love you guys!

       Ces~

 

This is an entry for the Honey Forever21 Contest

 

Credit for that awesome poster up there goes to MoonGlowes! :D

Comments

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Mallix
#1
Chapter 1: Lol I'm a judge for this one here, and I have to say I didn't like the length at first. The really long ones I've had before have been excruciating to read, but I really liked this!
flyingbearcookies
#2
Chapter 1: wow.. this was awesome. one of the best stories i ever read, wow. wow. wow. omg i should stop saying wow. no. wow. wow.
rainbowgeum_min
#3
Chapter 1: Omg this story is so creepy ... but so beautifully written ! I was so absorbed ! Omg danjjaki how do u ever write so perfectly !!!!! I feel so ashamed of our story now. Even more so tjan bfore.

But I must say I really really love this story ! I really had no idea he was gonna jump until the stairs part and at yhe end I gasped. Literally. Yoomin thouhht I was mad. Because I was like "*gasp* HE DIED..." and yoomin was like 0.o I cant believe shes my sister face hahah ! But yes its an awesome story ! Definitely worth the read and win !!!!! ^^ all the best danjjaki !

*still fascinated over how u can write this well*
MoonGlowes
#4
This story is so........... it is too amazing for words!! It took you a long time to finish it, but it was worth the wait auntie!! I am so going to reread this later and it is one of favourite stories on here and my favourite story you wrote!! ^^
Oh Youngmin, I can't wait for your next fic!!! *unsure when that'll be*
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH AUNTIE!!!! *cries from perfection of story*