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FINISHED REVIEW (FR) : EXODOLL - APATHY
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TITLE: Apathy
AUTHOR: Exodoll
MAIN CHARACTER(S): Sehun (EXO) & Luhan
GENRE(S): Angst
SYNOPSIS: Sehun is forced to marry Luhan, the first person that his father saw outside the church after his planned marriage gets ruined. Sehun is already in a relationship with Baekhyun so he hates Luhan, while Luhan has loved him for almost a year now. Luhan, unlike Sehun whose dad owns the biggest company in Korea, has no family and is a poor boy who is trapped in a life of depression and hears voices. His only two friends are Jongin and Kyungsoo but to make things complicated, Jongin is in love with him while Kyungsoo is in love with Jongin.
STORY STATUS: Chaptered, on-going story, Rated M (for ual, violent and other sensitive contents)
REVIEWED BY: iamsashimeh
Title
The title is short and straight to the point, and it makes the reader question who’s the person in the story feeling this way, and it’s only shown in chap 22 where Luhan starts to mentally crumble.
Appearance (graphic/poster)
The poster gives me ‘Snow White’ vibes for some reason haha. The feeling of angst is prominent through the colour scheme chosen for this poster, as well as their expressions, especially Luhan’s, where his expression is that of pain.
Foreword/description
Description: I like how there’s a short summary of the story without giving away any major spoilers. We also see Luhan’s thoughts, which brings us to understand the type of people that Luhan and Sehun are going to be portrayed as in the story.
Foreword: It’s good to have an introduction of all the main/side characters in the story but it gives off the impression that all the characters are going to be important to the story and it might throw off the readers a bit as there are already so many people to remember when they’re barely touched and developed in the story (Chanyeol and Xiumin) Maybe you could give an indication to who’s the main and side characters.
The poem ‘Jealous’ by Labirinth is something Luhan feels about Sehun as he can only admire him from far, even though he’s his husband, and this throws us back into the mood of the whole story that Luhan is not goin
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