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FINISHED REVIEW (FR) : HOCBAIDI - JUST A CRUEL GAME
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TITLE: Just a Cruel Game
AUTHOR: hocbaidi
MAIN CHARACTER(S): Jeon Jungkook & Bang Minah (OC).
GENRE(S): fantasy & romcom
SYNOPSIS: Two days and one night dealing with a complete stranger and granting wishes to people, can Minah truly win this game when she has the obnoxious Jungkook by her side?
STORY STATUS: Completed chaptered story.
REVIEWED BY: sekaimi
Title
In my opinion, it would have been better to keep the ‘Just’ out of the title and simply call it ‘A Cruel Game’. Nonetheless, it matches the plot!
Appearance (Graphic/Poster)
I love the poster! It gives off a mysterious vibe which fits this plot very well considering that it’s fantasy as well.
Foreword/ Description
Description: I think this part is well-written. It’s short and clear, it doesn’t give away the ending at all. I mean, I can’t guess how the ending will be so it leaves me curious! The excerpt you added from chapter 2 is an extra thing that urges me to click on the ‘Next’ button.
Foreword: Honestly, I can’t decide what would be the best thing to put here in your case. I think it’s irrelevant to mention the story’s data (the last part of your description). Why? Because a reader can see the same information right below the title. Besides, I don’t think that readers would consider such information as important, because the story itself is what’s important. However, your author’s note is okay though I’d put that in the Foreword section instead.
Characterization
To be honest, I couldn’t really get an image of Minah’s character, but I did with Jungkook’s. I have to point out that throughout the story, it’s not Jungkook who is obnoxious, but rather, Minah herself. To me, Minah sounds like a selfish person and someone who ‘lies’ quite often. Those moments when she tells Jungkook that she lied about something she said before makes Jungkook obviously confused. I felt that he was confused most of the time. Even though I said that Minah comes off as a selfish person, I could see her other soft side as well. Though I wish I could have seen more of that.
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