Deal With It

Things That Annoy Me

Submitted by Lilikoi! Thanks sweetie!

I have many things that irk me. One being characters that are weak and whiny. Everything makes this character cry! From a cloud floating by to the wind blowing south instead of north. No, just-just stop!

Another to add is the love interest is a greedy, womanizing, arrogant, , who bullies his soon-to-be love interest (again it is here the main character is always whining and crying in a corner.)

Really? Are you serious right now?

I don't condone violence, but if you bully me I will be coming back for blood.

Then there's the whole 'My parents are forcing me to marry some conniving b*tch and I'm only agreeing to protect you because I love you.' Or 'I'm breaking up with you to save you because I love you.'

Uh, obviously not if you're just going to marry some other b*tch and/or break up with me.

Why the hell are you agreeing to a damn FORCED (not arranged) marriage!? Because you're afraid of being disowned? Because your parents threatened the life of your love interest? This just shows me how weak-minded the person is.

You could have easily discussed this with your love interest and figured out what to do (like record the threat being made and then turn it into the police or perhaps maybe just pretend to break-up), but no! You choose to enter this marriage by your own choice and then have the nerve to complain about not wanting to be in it?

Bump that!

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I just realised aff censored my title in chap 19... :/ -Jihyun
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Exofan12345 #1
Male preg does not bother me as much but what makes me cringe in when the male who is pregnant calls the baby ' my bundle of joy'....I don't really know why it makes me cringe, but it does.
JaraGizem #2
Chapter 22: I agree with you ONE THOUSAND TIMES OVER!!!!! Those smart Alecks just makes me want to punch them in the throat! Just GTFO! And I despise fictions that use Xi as LuHan's last name it had me hating LuHan for a while because for the life of me it confused me when I started out. It's the same with those who us Li for HanKyung/HanGeng. It's Lu Han and Han Geng, dammit!
baobei_love_1997 #3
Chapter 22: A lot of fanfics here have this: except the main female character(s) who is supposedly "different": while the rest female population is "obsessed" with the main male character(s), she doesn't even care about them, the rest is filled with makeup, she doesn't put on much (sometimes even purposingly uglify herself), the rest is always in short, revealing clothing, she doesn't even like dresses... I know it's to make the main female character look good, but that doesn't mean the other regular females are all the same. And even if they do things like that, why authors have to make them become so easy, so... disgusting? It's only how they choose to dress, how to act... not because they're all bad like how they're discribed. Sometimes main male character(s) suffer this as well.
Sorry for the rant, but I hate it when people make other people look bad just to make someone look good.
mysoulisstarving #4
Chapter 22: omg., from all the exo fics I read i really thought luhan's last name was xi...
Chiyoko-Nagai #5
Chapter 8: You're not alone
I do this on my stories too :'DDD
I haven't even posted the first chap for my current story yet :'DDD
Graysome #6
Chapter 19: Somehow chapter 19 suddenly makes me want to rant all day long. Okay i have to admit, i do curse alot sometimes (okay, i do it all the time tbh) but let's all think again, there are freaking CHILDREN on asianfanfics (mainly my little brother, who now curses alot due to the fanfics that he was reading), wouldn't it be a bad influence on them? For instance, in my country (mostly my juniors) say alot. When i was in fourth grade, i didn't even know what that word meant. But now, the fourth graders at a school nearby says it like it's not a big deal. I don't know why, it irritates me alot when the ones that seems so innocent says a word they shouldn't even know. End of rant :3

P.s Anime? Should i list alot? I mean i can give you a whole page of animes you can watch. I don't know which genre you would like so, for starters if you haven't watched it yet, you can watch “Kaichou wa maid-sama”, which is very funny to be exact. I'm feeling the urge to give you a whole list to be honest.

P.p.s You made me check my comment for a long time before actually posting it. Ahaha, you changed my writing style, and to be honest, it helps me alot in my writing exams. So, Thank you :3
I still think there are alot of mistakes though.（＾ω＾）
literary_whimsy #7
Chapter 21: I have to agree on this, particularly the first point. It is just really unrealistic to conceive after you have just had a miscarriage. I know that some people are just misinformed when it comes to certain things, but things shouldn't always be put in a story just because they could happen in real life.
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