Anger Issues

Things That Annoy Me

For me, I’m not fond of authors writing in capital letters when they’re trying to show that the characters are shouting or screaming.

Let’s see, would you like it if I TYPED LIKE THIS OFTEN?

I guess not.

Or maybe THIS?

Okay, now I’m just being irritating.

I’m sorry, I was just REALLY MAD! (Okay, now I’m really crossing the line.)

Seriously speaking, I don't appreciate all the words being in capital letters because they’re just so distracting.

Yes, I know that some just want to emphasise that the character is yelling or is stressing on a certain word, but it would be better if the action was explained through words rather than capitalising.

Okay, I know that different people have different styles of writing and I won’t criticise anything on that, but try to minimise capitalising words and instead use descriptive words? I understand that it’s pretty hard to convey some emotions or stresses at times- I’m a writer too, I feel you- but there are some who repeatedly use this technique throughout the story and it can sometimes get on readers’ nerves.

 

Examples (based on real cases):

“You wanna go there NOW?” He did not expect this.

Preferred version: “You wanna go there now?” He stressed on the last word, certainly not expecting the last-minute decision.

“I HATE YOU!” She screamed before shutting the door in his face.

Preferred version: “I hate you!” She screamed every word at the top of her lungs before shutting the door in his face.

 

I don't know, maybe it’s just me, maybe it’s some of you out there too. To me, this is still not as bad of a peeve as others, so I have nothing else to say.

If you have any other issues you wanna bring up, lemme know in the comments or you can pm me in the messages if you wanna have a chapter/topic all to yourself (I’ll credit you!). Ciao!

-immajokervip

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Exofan12345 #1
Male preg does not bother me as much but what makes me cringe in when the male who is pregnant calls the baby ' my bundle of joy'....I don't really know why it makes me cringe, but it does.
JaraGizem
#2
Chapter 22: I agree with you ONE THOUSAND TIMES OVER!!!!! Those smart Alecks just makes me want to punch them in the throat! Just GTFO! And I despise fictions that use Xi as LuHan's last name it had me hating LuHan for a while because for the life of me it confused me when I started out. It's the same with those who us Li for HanKyung/HanGeng. It's Lu Han and Han Geng, dammit!
baobei_love_1997
#3
Chapter 22: A lot of fanfics here have this: except the main female character(s) who is supposedly "different": while the rest female population is "obsessed" with the main male character(s), she doesn't even care about them, the rest is filled with makeup, she doesn't put on much (sometimes even purposingly uglify herself), the rest is always in short, revealing clothing, she doesn't even like dresses... I know it's to make the main female character look good, but that doesn't mean the other regular females are all the same. And even if they do things like that, why authors have to make them become so easy, so... disgusting? It's only how they choose to dress, how to act... not because they're all bad like how they're discribed. Sometimes main male character(s) suffer this as well.
Sorry for the rant, but I hate it when people make other people look bad just to make someone look good.
mysoulisstarving #4
Chapter 22: omg., from all the exo fics I read i really thought luhan's last name was xi...
Chiyoko-Nagai
#5
Chapter 8: You're not alone
I do this on my stories too :'DDD
I haven't even posted the first chap for my current story yet :'DDD
Graysome
#6
Chapter 19: Somehow chapter 19 suddenly makes me want to rant all day long. Okay i have to admit, i do curse alot sometimes (okay, i do it all the time tbh) but let's all think again, there are freaking CHILDREN on asianfanfics (mainly my little brother, who now curses alot due to the fanfics that he was reading), wouldn't it be a bad influence on them? For instance, in my country (mostly my juniors) say alot. When i was in fourth grade, i didn't even know what that word meant. But now, the fourth graders at a school nearby says it like it's not a big deal. I don't know why, it irritates me alot when the ones that seems so innocent says a word they shouldn't even know. End of rant :3

P.s Anime? Should i list alot? I mean i can give you a whole page of animes you can watch. I don't know which genre you would like so, for starters if you haven't watched it yet, you can watch “Kaichou wa maid-sama”, which is very funny to be exact. I'm feeling the urge to give you a whole list to be honest.

P.p.s You made me check my comment for a long time before actually posting it. Ahaha, you changed my writing style, and to be honest, it helps me alot in my writing exams. So, Thank you :3
I still think there are alot of mistakes though.(^ω^)
literary_whimsy
#7
Chapter 21: I have to agree on this, particularly the first point. It is just really unrealistic to conceive after you have just had a miscarriage. I know that some people are just misinformed when it comes to certain things, but things shouldn't always be put in a story just because they could happen in real life.