SNIPPET: It's A Sin

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It's A Sin

 

Date: 23rd July 2017
Warnings: Mention of (in the below - much more horror and ery in the actual story)


 


Not everyone is given a guardian angel at birth, but [A] is. Just like all souls placed into the bodies of babies set for a life of misfortune and hardships, there is a celestial being that is at her side to watch over her. A victim mother turned drug addict quickly loses interest in caring for a thing which only reminds her of the point which sent her life downhill, and a wannabe thug father caught up in a small gang can't equate to much of a person.

Despite her bumpy ride growing up in a rough area, the child grows up to be a prodigal undergrad. She shows so much promise, and is praised by her heroes in the same field.  However, to make money to pay for her medical training, she has the choice between selling herself or working for the mob. Refusing to be anything like her mother (who she believes harrowing rumours about), she takes up the knife and gains a name for herself in the Underground as The Night Surgeon – taking part in ghastly things to bad people for the money so she can learn to make a difference for the sake of those who deserve it.

Against the rules of heaven, and their better judgement, the angel [B]shows himself to [A] in order to convince the woman not to continue down the dangerous path they’re on. Things do not go to plan, however, when [A] thinks that [B] is just a nutcase with stalker tendencies. To add insult to injury, [B] has had his powers stripped, meaning he can’t even prove his words. Until he can get his ward to turn her life around by her own free will, he is stuck in the cesspit called the human world, humiliated, homeless, and forced to follow around a schadenfreude twenty five year old with a serious problem with authority, and a critical lack of housekeeping skills.  

 


[Notes]
Angels gain a certain kind of ‘commission’ for how ‘good’ the souls under their care are. They reach a higher transcendence the more pure a soul is.

This angel is freaking the out. He’s got this -baby hacking up people to gain money. But is it that simple? Even though she commits sins, she retains her integrity, and her virtures at heart.

 



 

26/07/2017

 

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Suhyo07
#1
Chapter 15: I'm thinking of using everything on this list to create an all or nothing fanfic, haha
Sounds pretty crazy but I guess it's going to be on my summer to-do list XD
Iefa_San
#2
Chapter 8: You really have a lot of ideas! O.O
p3acexl0vexsuju
#3
Chapter 6: *Standing ovation* BRAVO! I really like this ^_^ It's so helpful for any aspiring/Experienced writer and it's an easy to understand guide.

Granted, I'm still too ing stupid to come up with a title of my own story yet OTL