Gone

Description

 

Two pairs travel to explore a wonderful place and enjoy wonderful moments together.

 

They travelled miles to reach their destination.

 

A destination full of surprises.

 

Moments they wished, came true.

 

Moments they hoped, happened.

 

And every moment...

 

was spent...

 

with another.

 

With hopes of understanding each other and bringing them closer.

 

People are tied into relationships yet,

 

souls are vowed together.

 

Will love surpass vows?

 

 

Foreword

In a village…

 

There lived a man who had a son with a golden heart.

 

This son’s name is Changsun.

 

And one day this son saw a dear maiden as he passed by the village.

 

That son instantly fell in love with that maiden at first sight.

 

The son was not able to ask for the young maiden’s name for he felt shy to approach her at such a sudden time.

 

The son told his father and his father immediately searched for a way to find out about the young maiden.

 

Since the man was wealthy, he gathered information about this mysterious woman.

 

But even though they had all the riches one could ever wish for, the man’s son never used it to gather information about the maiden like what his father did.

 

Instead, he asked around from the villagers. The villagers were a bit wary to tell him details about the maiden. But each and every day, he persuaded them and asked them kindly about the dear maiden that had captured his heart.

 

The villagers saw his perseverance and they saw that he did everything in his own power to find out about the maiden. He didn’t even ask help from his father, who already knew the maiden’s identity.

 

As time passed, the villagers gave him their trust and they finally told him about the maiden.

 

The maiden’s name was Hyunie. She was a daughter of a fair lady who was also wealthy. Although she was the complete opposite of her mother since she has a heart that was so kind, she can never be compared to anyone at all.

 

Her mother on the other hand had a stoned heart because a man had broken it and after that moment, she had never given love again. Even to her own daughter.

 

The villagers decided to help the son since he has shown them that his love was pure.

 

The villagers set-up a meeting so they can finally meet and they watched every moment that the two shared.

 

Changsun was more of a scaredy cat once they met. He became really shy and the villagers found it really cute. The way he acted in front of the maiden showed them that he was sincere.

 

That meeting gave Changsun a chance.

 

The only chance he needed.

 

Hyunie fell in love with Changsun.

 

Their love was pure and sincere that the villagers supported them.

 

They all knew the development of two’s relationship. They were there. From the moment that they started…

 

Until the moment that Changsun proposed.

 

But it wasn’t a happy ever after.

 

It was a tragic tale.

 

For the young maiden lost all of her memories.

 

Because of her own mother.

 

Wanting to take revenge to Changsun’s father who broke her heart.

 

She broke Changsun’s heart to avenge herself.

 

That moment that Hyunie forgot Changsun…

 

His whole world broke.

 

His heart collapsed.

 

Yet…

 

He still believed in the love that they shared.

 

The promise that they said.

 

The vow that they will one day accomplish.

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charlot #1
Chapter 12: I don't really know if I should consider this as happy ending coz..you just broke my seungdoong heart! Seriously I am crying here..anyhoo I guess its happy ending for joondoong.. I was really touched by joon's line: everything in this world is unfair. But I guess its nice to know someone who isn't like the whole world". That really a beautiful line!

You did great on this fic even if its not seungdoong in the end, I still commend you for the beautiful fic! Keep it up and I'm anticipating for your new fics! And of course your update on seungdoongjoon alphabet!
satrina7 #2
Chapter 12: oooh that ending, sad but BEAUTIFUL!
KiwiPrincess #3
Chapter 12: ah, its broke my heart.. T_T
seungdoong.. hiks.. hiks..
kimminah89
#4
Chapter 12: kyaaa ottoke? this is sad TT__TT I feel bad for Seungho :(
nizdoongie
#5
Chapter 12: oh my god... T^T Iam crying with mireu, seungho and byunghe.. but I know and remember why Iam cry... kekekekkeke but joondoong together hahaha ^___^
authornim... >.< jeongmal.. you make me happy and sad with one story.. haha
butteringabun99
#6
Chapter 12: OMO Unnie , I'm so shock can't believe that you would write the ending like the O.o Kekekeke I'm so happy to sanghyun and chanson . But I feel really really bad to seungho,choelyoung , and byunghee. Especially seungho x_x kekeke
Thankyou Unnie to wrote such an amazing ending ^^
blaq21A
#7
Chapter 12: Screw this!!! I really like joondoong and I don't have a problem with them always being paired but.... Why does it end like that. Why!? I can feel seungho and mir's pain!! Fudge! Why do you always write angsty endings!? Wahhhh it's really unfair of sanghyun to leave them like that and joon couldn't care less??? At least feel a little bit guilty for them, they still played a huge part on sanghyun's life! Now they couldn't remember him! It hurts! I feel so sorry for them...... Hmmm sorry for ranting unnie but I had to let it out.....
Well, you finished a really good story again :) waiting for more, fighting!
charlot #8
Chapter 11: Even if seungho is being a jerk here and joonie is really the destined one for doongie..fudge that! Still rooting for seungdoong!
KiwiPrincess #9
Chapter 11: speechless.. so its just illussion?? what would happen to Sanghyun?? don't separated seungdoong, pleeeaaseee..
*puppy eyes*
butteringabun99
#10
Chapter 11: Wooooaaaawwwwwww this chapter is the answer for all of my questions !! So cool unnie ! Totally daebak ! So all of it just an illussion? Im worry of sanghyun... I hope seungho could save him TT and joon is really creepy...