Front Row (Mazeltov)

"Just say what you wanna say, I'm not listening anyway"

Story number: 13 

Title: Front row.

Pairings: Junyoung - Dongjun.

Song:  Mazeltov.

 

 

 

-What makes you think that you’ll ever get to act in a role like that? Don’t you understand? Are you not listening what I say? You’re crap. No passion, no emotions. None. Pure crap.

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-Did you buy the tickets, Minwoo?

-Ahjam, everything is ready. Got 2 ticket. Front row. Just as you requested.

-Perfect.

-How do you feel, Mr. Otelo?

-I’m just in a role, it’s not like I am him. I’m uneasy, Shakespeare it’s not for everyone. He says that.

-Dongjun…

-I know. See you tonight.

-You’re gonna do great.

The curtains open as I try to look at each and every single face on the seats. It’s dark, I can’t see a thing. But the light is enough to let me see all the front row. There’s my friend with a big smile and shinny eyes. Those supportive shinny eyes. And there next to him the empty spot. Your spot. The spot I paid for. The spot that represents you. Embodies you. You watching me, as I success. Like you always wanted.

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5 years before.

-Pure crap. And as your mentor, as you teacher, as your friend, I shall teach you everything I know.  And maybe, maybe someday, you’ll stop being crap and I don’t know… maybe act in some important play. And if you ever do that, even if it’s after this cancer takes me away, be sure I’ll be watching you on the front row.

-Yes.

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As the curtain closes and I sank in the applauses, I fix my eyes on your seat.

-Did you saw that, Junyoung? I’m not crap anymore.                       

 

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A/N: I'm back n_n It took so long, wtf, I'm sorry n_n'

Btw, I love Shakespeare, and Otelo it's my all time favourite of his works, I had to lol Hope you like it <33 

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HoshaTree
#1
Chapter 12: This story was really creepy for some reason... but kind of hot? lol
I'm wondering now if there was some kind of symbolism in the hands painting.
Now I want to read more of this pairing ^^
hopelesswriter #2
Chapter 12: gah....this is soo sweet!! i love how the story make me have this bad feeling of what would happen n turn out i'm just being paranoid...i mean, i should've known it'd be a happy ending yet i'm still kinda tricked n i like that. Junyoung's character is awesome here, badass brat. love how he treasures that art so much which is understandable besides his reasoning of the memory, he doesn't know arts either so he has his own standard, which is cool. Thanks for the update~
ilabya19 #3
interesting~
hopelesswriter #4
Chapter 11: i knew it! the moment junyoung said they're over n dongjun said he's not, i knew it ><! omygosh...what a creep...i'm just speechless...
Thanks for the update~
hopelesswriter #5
Chapter 9: For some odd reason, when i read it first...i imagined it was Minwoo...i really could imagine him doing all those....stepping on dog poops n stuffs(sorry...i always remember the most interesting one to use as example haha)...but then i had a feeling it would be Kevin but my mind kept picturing Minwoo...ahh, i'm messed up...but i just have to say i love this character so much...you know...take the longest route back home....n stuffs...the sort of loneliness that can be felt vividly without having to announce they're lonely...i can feel it...and feeling is always better than knowing/being told...so, i really thank you for this beautiful feeling it gave...i feel like i could connect to it...n then...the story...it was really beautiful too...passing hopes through singing...n funny/cute at times...like Minwoo threatening to jump if Kevin don't sing...lol. n Kevin still believing Minwoo a ghost even when he denied it...lol. the mood n language for this one feels very..idk...poetic? romantic?...i love it though because it feels romantic without being cheesy n that's not something i'm able to do so this is really enviable....but was Kevin singing to Only One 4 U...hahah, idk actually...
Story 7 - omo...i love the setting for this one...yknow...people living in the woods...n when Kevin called Minwoo as his Mom...T^T....aww, Minwoo the messenger ghost-boy...
Thanks for the updates n keep it up^^~
HoshaTree
#6
Chapter 9: I like this one... you write Kevin so cutely ^^
azxema
#7
Chapter 7: FEELS <3
Hahaha god the cheesiness, loving it so much.
updateeee <3<3<3
HoshaTree
#8
Chapter 7: I like this sentimental Kevin lol
pikarina
#9
Chapter 5: Snshxhhxhdhd this was sooo heartbreaking. Stay stong Kebin ! Damn i notice that all of us joining this challenge have different ways of writing. Keep it up ! ^^
hopelesswriter #10
Chapter 3: This is just so cute n funny. Minwoo is such an adorable protective brother...i'd love to have him as my bro...you need to stop making my heart waver to ship them ><. lol. the ending is just lol..i love how it mirrors the earlier scene. Eunji n Minu....lol. they're just the same. Heechul will have to get used to this. xD. Thanks for sharing the cute story. xD